Template talk:Did you know/Approved/week-1
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The House of Bijapur
[edit]- ... that The House of Bijapur (pictured) has been called a "painted curtain call" since the dynasty it depicts was overthrown only a few years later?
- Source: Hutton, Deborah (2016). "Memory and Monarchy: A Seventeenth-Century Painting from Bijapur and its Afterlives". South Asian Studies. 32 (1): 22–41. ISSN 0266-6030.
Thus, within a few years of the paintings completion, the sultanate it celebrated was gone. Stuart Cary Welch, in characteristically evocative prose, called the work ' a painted curtain call ': the main characters appearing together for one last ovation before the play ended and the stage went dark.
- ALT1: ... that The House of Bijapur (pictured) depicts eight members of the Adil Shahi dynasty? Source: Hutton, Deborah (2016). "Memory and Monarchy: A Seventeenth-Century Painting from Bijapur and its Afterlives". South Asian Studies. 32 (1): 22–41. ISSN 0266-6030.
it is larger than most manuscript paintings), its arresting lavender and saffron landscape, and its subject matter: it depicts eight rulers of the ʿAdil Shahi dynasty seated together on a carpet. Technically, it is not all of the ʿAdil Shahi rulers, as the artists left out the unfortunate Mallū ʿĀdil Khān(r. 1534–35), who ruled for a mere seven months before he was deposed.
- Reviewed:
AmateurHi$torian (talk) 15:47, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- The article is new enough, long enough and the hook proposals good, particular the first one. They are also supported by inline citations. However, stylistically the article needs work. I would say it currently fails the presentability criterion. The lead section does not summarise the article. The "Significance" section starts abruptly, stating it is larger than ordinary manuscript pictures, but until now the reader hasn't even been informed it IS a manuscript picture. The "Description" section starts like this: "In the middle is the principal subject; The painting depicts eight of the nine rulers of the Bijapur Sultanate; leaving out only Mallu Adil Khan, whose reign lasted for only seven months." Why the semi-colons? These are just a few immediate points I spotted. I think the nominator should go through the article and bring it up to common Manual of Style standards before we can proceed with this nomination. Let me know when you have done so and I will take another look. Kind regards, Yakikaki (talk) 15:35, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Tidied up the article a bit. Expanded the lead, removed the semicolons, and added some information regarding the painting's status as a (presumed) manuscript picture.AmateurHi$torian (talk) 11:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
- Very nice improvement of the article! It should be good to go now. Yakikaki (talk) 16:13, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
- Tidied up the article a bit. Expanded the lead, removed the semicolons, and added some information regarding the painting's status as a (presumed) manuscript picture.AmateurHi$torian (talk) 11:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)
Manger on McNichols
[edit]- ... that the Boldy James and Sterling Toles collaborative album Manger on McNichols took over a decade to make?
- Source: Johnson, Patrick (July 22, 2020). "Boldy James and Sterling Toles' 'Manger On McNichols' Project Took Over a Decade to Make". Hypebeast. Archived from the original on June 14, 2023. Retrieved December 6, 2024.
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TheseVGF (talk) 22:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Epicgenius (talk) 16:00, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Saxophone sonata (Creston)
[edit]- ... that the publishing of Paul Creston's saxophone sonata was delayed by a "rat with a toothbrush mustache"? Source: Morris, Willie (1996). The Development of the Saxophone Compositions of Paul Creston (DMA thesis). University of Missouri–Kansas City. OCLC 35239809. p 118. As quoted in article.
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- Comment: Can supply other hooks if need be :)
UpTheOctave! • 8va? 19:22, 6 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Hook fact is brilliant; you may get some kickback that the fact is in a dropquote, but I don't mind. It does need a reference in the running text per WP:DYKHFC. Earwig spots no issues. New enough, long enough, no image to review though the one in the lede does appear to be free. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:08, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review Chris Woodrich! I've added a reference after the relevant sentence in prose (and added a bit more detail while I had a good look at the source). UpTheOctave! • 8va? 23:35, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Awesome. Looks good! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 23:41, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Conestoga wagon
[edit]- ... that the Conestoga wagon (pictured) has a boat-like shape but is unsuitable for traveling on water bodies?
- Source: Conestoga Wagon 1750–1850: Freight Carrier for 100 Years of America's Westward Expansion (p. 185-187)
- ALT1: ... that between 1750 and 1775, as many as 10,000 Conestoga wagons (pictured) traveled within Pennsylvania annually? Source: The Conestoga Wagon of Pennsylvania (p. 155-163)
- ALT2: ... that of the 156 Conestoga wagons (pictured) brought to the Braddock Expedition of the French and Indian War, only one remained intact by the campaign's end? Source: Conestoga Wagons in Braddock's Campaign, 1755 (p. 142-153).
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Fictional planets of the Solar System
PrimalMustelid (talk) 14:29, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
- article is recently promoted to GA, long enough and within policy. Hook is short and interesting. Picture is freely licensed and appropriate. QPQ is complete. I prefer ALT2. ALT0 is fine too. ALT1 isn't very interesting to me. Leave it to the promoter to choose between 2 and 0. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:34, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Onekaka Wharf and tramline
[edit]- ... that painter Doris Lusk chose the Onekaka Wharf (remnants pictured) as her main subject for five years?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Noel Hilliam and Template:Did you know nominations/Katerina Clark
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I'll have to review another nomination.
Schwede66 02:16, 10 December 2024 (UTC).
- QPQs done. Article is long/new enough. No copyvios. Image is free to use, although the caption should start with a capital letter. Hook is interesting. Hook matches the article and source. ―Panamitsu (talk) 21:44, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Aquilegia chrysantha, Aquilegia chaplinei
[edit]- ... that Aquilegia chaplinei is generally considered a distinct species, except in Texas, where it is considered a variety of the species Aquilegia chrysantha (pictured)?
- Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
- Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
- Reviewed: 1.) Template:Did you know nominations/Yanou Collart, 2.) Template:Did you know nominations/Elin Falk, 3.) Template:Did you know nominations/2018 Batman by-election, 4.) Template:Did you know nominations/George K. Teulon
Pbritti (talk) 21:28, 6 December 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:49, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- I don't think either hook is grammatical. I think separate needs to be followed by the word from.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 20:45, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: "Separate" replaced with "distinct", which is a more scientific and precise word. ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:27, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am interpreting this change to mean a species without varieties.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, @TonyTheTiger: can you rephrase your comment? I think I misunderstand how you're reading that. ~ Pbritti (talk) 05:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Is "distinct" a taxonomy term that means it is a species without varieties. Otherwise, in terms of regular grammar a from is still needed. I.e., unless it is a special scientific use of the word, something needs to be distinct or separate from something else unless it is implied by the usage/context to be separate/distinct from everything or a previous referent.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:49, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry, @TonyTheTiger: can you rephrase your comment? I think I misunderstand how you're reading that. ~ Pbritti (talk) 05:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- I am interpreting this change to mean a species without varieties.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:04, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: "Separate" replaced with "distinct", which is a more scientific and precise word. ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:27, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- The DYK check tool says Aquilegia chaplinei created from redirect on December 2. It is new enough and long enough. However, the tool says that Aquilegia chrysantha meets the 5x requirement based on November 8 at 8886 characters. Further investigation shows that the article was 1785 characters on December 1 and you need to achieve 8925 characters for 5x. Right now only 4.978x.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:30, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Image is PD and in use in one of the articles.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:44, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- The required 4 QPQs have been completed.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 14:45, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- The copyvio detector shows no issues for either article (both under 10%).-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:10, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: The page-size tool that I'm using (WP:Prosesize) is giving me 8951 characters at present. How are you calculating this? The 8886 was my target 5x. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:27, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- What does your tool say the December 1 size was? The standard tool here is the DYK Check tool. You can install it. I forgot how, but ask at WT:DYK if you need to. Otherwise just add 40 characters.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:13, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- N.B. The DYK check tool is in the toolbox here on this page.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:36, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- What does your tool say the December 1 size was? The standard tool here is the DYK Check tool. You can install it. I forgot how, but ask at WT:DYK if you need to. Otherwise just add 40 characters.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:13, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @TonyTheTiger: The page-size tool that I'm using (WP:Prosesize) is giving me 8951 characters at present. How are you calculating this? The 8886 was my target 5x. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:27, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Both articles are well-sourced. They seem to have an encyclopedic and neutral tone.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) @TonyTheTiger: Might have to download the DYK prose tool, thanks for advising me. I'm getting 1779 characters in 277 words on 1 December, but I think I've made the matter moot with an addition from a book I'd cited earlier this year on Aquilegia sibirica. Thats's getting us to 9166 characters on Prosesize, so that difference is presumably enough to nudge us over the line on DYK's tool. Regarding distinct, that means species A is indeed a species, rather than itself a variety or subspecies of species B. In this case, A. chaplinei is almost universally recognized as a distinct species, but some Texan botanical authorities disagree and claim it's only a variety of the species A. chrysantha. If you need anything else, please ping! Your patience has been dearly appreciated. Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- The revised version is 9100 by DYK Check and passes 5x based on a December 2 date, which is sufficient for this December 8 nomination.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) @TonyTheTiger: Might have to download the DYK prose tool, thanks for advising me. I'm getting 1779 characters in 277 words on 1 December, but I think I've made the matter moot with an addition from a book I'd cited earlier this year on Aquilegia sibirica. Thats's getting us to 9166 characters on Prosesize, so that difference is presumably enough to nudge us over the line on DYK's tool. Regarding distinct, that means species A is indeed a species, rather than itself a variety or subspecies of species B. In this case, A. chaplinei is almost universally recognized as a distinct species, but some Texan botanical authorities disagree and claim it's only a variety of the species A. chrysantha. If you need anything else, please ping! Your patience has been dearly appreciated. Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- (ec) Regarding the hook, I don't know what it is saying on many levels because I am not really sure how regional taxonomy works. Does this mean
- Examples of this plant found in Texas are classified differently than examples of it found elsewhere?
- Texas law gives this plant different status for in terms of habitat protections, conservation and endangered species considerations than laws elsewhere?
- Texas taxonomic societies have come to a unique determination regarding this plant wherever it is found?
- Some important Texans disagree with non-Texans regarding classification in a manner that bears weight?
- Something else?-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:46, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- Effectively 3 and 4. Texan authorities like the Lady Bird Johnson Center are authoritative and disagree with recognizing A. chaplinei as its own species. Nold 2003 says that the designation A. chrysantha var. chaplinei "has not found general acceptance, except, it seems, in Texas". ~ Pbritti (talk) 21:58, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- I assume the hook is fully cited, but i must partially WP:AGF. The hook is interesting enough.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:37, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- -TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 22:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
KCTV
[edit]- ... that a Kansas City TV station was under contract to be sold within a week of its first regular broadcast? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/article/the-kansas-city-times-kcmo-price-2-mill/118204904/
- ALT1: ... that when a Kansas City TV station threatened to move to the suburbs, some officials suggested it take its broadcast tower with it? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/118205380/kcmo-move-defended-by-manager/
- Reviewed: Artur Bubnevych and Chromakopia
Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:58, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- Sammi Brie making life easy here. GA was just today, length of article is good, no copyvios detected. Hook is interesting enough that someone with no interest in the subject matter (me) paused and wanted to read what happened there. Citation appropriately placed. The Harry Truman bit not getting a mention is a bit of a surprise, but that's nitpicking. We're good to go here. ~ Pbritti (talk) 19:51, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
Aquilegia gegica, Aquilegia colchica
[edit]- ... that Aquilegia gegica and Aquilegia colchica, two species of columbine native to the Caucasus, can produce fertile offspring?
- Source: "Biological Peculiarities of F1 Generation of Hybrids of Two Georgian Endemic Species Aquilegia colchica Kem.-Nath. and Aquilegia gegica Jabr.-Kolak". Bulletin of the Georgian National Academy of Sciences. 15 (2). 2021.
- Reviewed: 1.) Template:Did you know nominations/Rescatemos a David y Miguel, 2.) Template:Did you know nominations/Pokémon Scarlet and Violet, 3.) Template:Did you know nominations/Dear Jinri, 4.) Template:Did you know nominations/Hanta Road
Pbritti (talk) 01:09, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Reviewing-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Both were created on December 7 and are over 1600 characters.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:01, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- With the overlap there is still 3000 characters of new content.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- No copyvio issues, although this may be more due to inability to check.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:26, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- No image is at issue.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 21:27, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hook is cited offline. I WP:AGF.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Hook is interesting and concise.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- QPQs done.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:49, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Articles are neutral an encyclopedic, but are sourced largely offline.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- .--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Confederate Monument (Oxford, Mississippi)
[edit]- ... that it cost an estimated $1.2 million to move the Confederate Monument (pictured) at the University of Mississippi? Source: "The estimated cost of the move is $1.2 million, which will be paid with private donations, not public money, the board said." [1]
- ALT1: ... that the Confederate Monument (pictured) at the University of Mississippi had two explanatory plaques? Source: "After meeting with the chancellor and members of the university community, the committee expressed its desire to consider further input and reexamine whether the language on the plaque should be changed and, if so, how. After considerable input and study, the committee made its final recommendation, which was approved in June 2016 by Chancellor Vitter." [2]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Thomas Fenner (sea captain), Template:Did you know nominations/2023 European Athletics Indoor Championships – Women's 400 metres
- Comment: Delayed nominating the article while it was at AfD. The result of the discussion was keep.
Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:12, 13 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article looks good. There are no major copyvios but I'd like the phrase "... American Civil War, almost the entire student body ..." to be worded differently because it's the same in the source but it's not a major problem. Image is freely licensed. Reviewing ALT0: The hook is interesting, matches the article and the source. ―Panamitsu (talk) 02:42, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Re-worded the lead to remove the close paraphrase. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 03:22, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Thomas P. Fenner
[edit]- ... that the first women's dorm built at Hampton University was paid for through money earned by the school's choir in tours led by Thomas P. Fenner (pictured)?
- Source: "Hampton Choir to Sing in Boston". Bay State Banner. March 12, 1970.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Grid energy storage, Template:Did you know nominations/Abortion in Mauritius
- Comment: Moved to mainspace on December 7
4meter4 (talk) 15:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Per MOS:LEADCITE, the material in the lead section should be cited. As the content also appears in the remainder of the article, that should not be difficult for the article creator to accomplish. Originally I had concerns over the fact that the lead section was uncited, but given that even featured articles can have uncited lead sections as 4meter4 indicates, I am withdrawing that objection. --Metropolitan90 (talk) 03:47, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Metropolitan90 You have misunderstood the policy. The opposite is true. MOS:LEADCITE says
The presence of citations in the lead is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article.
You are not supposed to have redundant citations in the lead. Take a look at any WP:FA status article and you will see zero citations in the lead. For example todays feature article: Algebra. Other FA class articles with zero citations in the lead from this month on the main page: Len Deighton, Shovel Knight Showdown, You Belong with Me, Wilfred Arthur, Mimodactylus, etc. Best.4meter4 (talk) 06:06, 12 December 2024 (UTC)- Fair enough. I am now giving this article a . --Metropolitan90 (talk) 00:47, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Metropolitan90 You have misunderstood the policy. The opposite is true. MOS:LEADCITE says
Pokémon Scarlet and Violet
[edit]- ... that the 2022 video games Pokémon Scarlet and Violet's ending credits music, "Celestial", was made by English singer-songwriter Ed Sheeran (pictured), and is the first song in the series to have lyrics?
- "Ed Sheeran's new song Celestial will apparently feature somewhere in the game... Celestial will be the first song included in a Pokemon game that actually has lyrics."
- https://www.rpgfan.com/music-review/nintendo-switch-pokemon-scarlet%E3%83%BBviolet-the-hidden-treasure-of-area-zero-super-music-collection/
- "I wasn’t expecting the Ed Sheeran single that plays during the end credits to be on this OST."
- ALT1: ... that due to performance issues at launch in the 2022 video games Pokémon Scarlet and Violet, the games became the lowest rated mainline entries in the franchise's history?
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- "The flaws are seemingly endless, impacting gameplay so much that Scarlet and Violet have become the worst-reviewed games in the series."
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- Comment: Ed Sheeran image is only for if the first hook is used.
Magneton Considerer: Pokelego999 (Talk) (Contribs) 00:42, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Everything seems to be in order. GA was on the 7th, article is long enough and appropriately sourced. It looks like some of the images are yours—why aren't we using this gem?—and are good to go. Hook is fascinating enough and the picture of Mr. Sheeran, while haunting, is good at 100px. Overall, great job! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Rescatemos a David y Miguel
[edit]- ... that you can leave a lock at the Rescatemos a David y Miguel memorial (pictured), installed six years ago today, as a symbol of demanding security?
- ALT1: ... that the Rescatemos a David y Miguel memorial (pictured) was installed seven years ago today in response to a kidnapping that occurred thirteen years ago today? Source: Excélsior: Family and friends of David Ramírez and Miguel Ángel Rivera erected a memorial on Paseo de la Reforma in memory of the young men who were kidnapped on January 5, 2012.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Herman Allen and Template:Did you know nominations/American Wedding (song)
- Comment: This nomination is specific for January 5. File:Antimonumento de David y Miguel 2.jpg can also work as an image substitute.
(CC) Tbhotch™ 19:34, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new and long enough, looks well-cited. Bad news is that I'm fairly certain that the images, including the one attached to the nom here, are copyrighted. I had a similar issue with a draft I'm working on and brought it to the Teahouse ([3]). I'm afraid you'll have to reupload the images as fair use and exclude them from the nom. ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: Mexico has freedom of panorama. Refer to Commons:COM:Mexico for further information. (CC) Tbhotch™ 01:20, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Briefly contemplated failing just out of shear envy, thought better of it. Can't say I know Spanish too well but I'm confident in the AGF on the citations, which are appropriately placed. QPQs done. The proposed run on 5 January is appropriate. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Regrettably, the QPQ done for Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Herman Allen was not adequate: while seven days is the standard for nominations to be made, DYK specifically allows a day or two latitude (typically given in general and particularly for new pre-QPQ participants as this nominator is); the nomination here was made nine days after creation. If Tbhotch will give this nomination a full review, a QPQ can be counted, or they can submit another review for that purpose. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset: It seems that you're failing this hook based on Tbhotch's literal interpretation of the reviewing guidelines. While you can contest their review (I'm not sure the term
supersede
is appropriate), this is almost certainly not sufficient ground to supersede my review of this hook. Reaffirming the AGF pass. ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:14, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @BlueMoonset: It seems that you're failing this hook based on Tbhotch's literal interpretation of the reviewing guidelines. While you can contest their review (I'm not sure the term
- Regrettably, the QPQ done for Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Herman Allen was not adequate: while seven days is the standard for nominations to be made, DYK specifically allows a day or two latitude (typically given in general and particularly for new pre-QPQ participants as this nominator is); the nomination here was made nine days after creation. If Tbhotch will give this nomination a full review, a QPQ can be counted, or they can submit another review for that purpose. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Briefly contemplated failing just out of shear envy, thought better of it. Can't say I know Spanish too well but I'm confident in the AGF on the citations, which are appropriately placed. QPQs done. The proposed run on 5 January is appropriate. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:25, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Man of Smoke
[edit]- ... that Man of Smoke, where the main character is made of smoke, is one of the most noted futurist novels?
- Source: Belfagor
- ALT1: ... that according to a scholar, the futurist novel Man of Smoke contains a hidden legal code for readers to piece together? Source: Encyclopedia of Italian Literary Studies
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Eurovision Song Contest 1984, Template:Did you know nominations/Zhang Xinsheng (film)
Uriahheep228 (talk) 18:32, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- QPQs not required but done anyway—thank you! Article is long and new enough. No copyvios as far as I can tell but having to AGF since a lot of the sources are in Italian. Hooks are definitely fascinating and cited appropriately. Images are public domain. Overall, great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:35, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Ken Battle
[edit]- ... that a Sunday afternoon phone call to Ken Battle laid the foundations for the Canadian Child Benefit program? Source: https://www.theglobeandmail.com/canada/article-social-policy-analyst-ken-battle-sowed-seeds-for-the-canada-child/
Ktin (talk) 23:20, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- As a courtesy, I added the citation to the necessary location in the article. Pending QPQs, I think we're good to go here. Ping me when you've gotten those done! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:08, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: thanks for the review. Completed the QPQ. Missed the fact that I had to complete 2 QPQs. However, I have completed them now. Ktin (talk) 17:19, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- I tagged the photo of him to have its size reduced, but that'll get resolved automatically before the article runs at DYK. The fair use rationale is valid. Otherwise, we're good to go here. A fine little article. Nice work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 18:10, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Aquilegia parviflora
[edit]- ... that the small flowers that give Aquilegia parviflora (pictured) its name make it unpopular with gardeners?
- Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. p. 110. ISBN 0881925888.
- Reviewed: 1.) Template:Did you know nominations/Two Stars in the Milky Way, 2.) Template:Did you know nominations/MLS Cup 2024
- Comment:
Pbritti (talk) 19:39, 7 December 2024 (UTC).
- @Pbritti: Just as a reminder, QPQs must be provided at the time of the nomination, so the nomination may be closed without further warning if QPQs are not provided promptly. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 22:42, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: While WP:QPQ says nominations without QPQs can be closed without warning, it also says
Your QPQ review should ideally be made at the time of your nomination
(emphasis mine). I am making a couple nominations based on articles that I'm producing under a relatively tight time constraint spurred by limited access to a particular source. The QPQs are coming, so your patience is appreciated. ~ Pbritti (talk) 23:34, 7 December 2024 (UTC)- Article size and date check out. Hook is interesting and cited. AGF to offline sources. Looks to me to be good to go. - The Bushranger One ping only 01:23, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: While WP:QPQ says nominations without QPQs can be closed without warning, it also says
Aquilegia moorcroftiana
[edit]- ... that Aquilegia moorcroftiana is named after a mountaineer and is found at the highest elevation of any species of columbine?
- Source: Nold, Robert (2003). Columbines: Aquilegia, Paraquilegia, and Semiaquilegia. Portland, OR: Timber Press. ISBN 0881925888.
- Reviewed: 1.) Template:Did you know nominations/Man of Smoke, 2.) Template:Did you know nominations/Skin of My Teeth
- Comment:
Pbritti (talk) 00:27, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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- Other problems: - I would suggest changing the sentence in the article "named for William Moorcroft" to "named after William Moorcroft" to make the wording clearer, and likewise for the hook.
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: This is my first review so I would like a second opinion. jolielover♥talk 16:02, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: Thanks for the review—how fun that this was your first. Welcome to the club! I think that "named for" is an Americanism and "named after" is the preference in British English; as the most relevant Engvars in this case would be British, Pakistani, or Indian English, I've adopted the suggested phrasing. By my estimation, I think your review is decent, but let me know if you want any clarifications! ~ Pbritti (talk) 18:33, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: Thanks for the feedback, I actually had no clue it was a variation in English so sorry about that! jolielover♥talk 03:37, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: Neither did I. Thanks for the review; consider keeping this on your watchlist in case someone has some insights for you to keep in mind in future reviews! Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Providing that second opinion - article is on time, appropriate length, well cited. No apparent copyvio concerns from online source, AGF on offline sources. Think this is good to go! - The Bushranger One ping only 22:22, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: Neither did I. Thanks for the review; consider keeping this on your watchlist in case someone has some insights for you to keep in mind in future reviews! Best, ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:40, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: Thanks for the feedback, I actually had no clue it was a variation in English so sorry about that! jolielover♥talk 03:37, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jolielover: Thanks for the review—how fun that this was your first. Welcome to the club! I think that "named for" is an Americanism and "named after" is the preference in British English; as the most relevant Engvars in this case would be British, Pakistani, or Indian English, I've adopted the suggested phrasing. By my estimation, I think your review is decent, but let me know if you want any clarifications! ~ Pbritti (talk) 18:33, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Kathryn Maple
[edit]- ... that Kathryn Maple won the Sunday Times Watercolour Competition twice in three years? Source: Sunday Times: "Congratulations to Kathryn Maple, who wins for the second time in three years with Sandy Shoes".
Jonathan Deamer (talk) 20:12, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Hi Jonathan Deamer, review follows: I measure the article at 1,526 characters when quotes are excluded so just long enough; article was created on 8 December; a QPQ has been carried out; inline citations used throughout; sources look to be reliable enough, I guess "Lyndsey Ingram" is a gallery website? It's only used to cite a couple of basic biographical facts so I think is OK; I didn't find any issue with overly close paraphrasing from what I could read of the sources (noting that the Times is subscription-only); Hook is interesting enough; I can't access the source cited for the competition wins, can you provide an extract? Also per the rules it would need a duplicate citation straight after the fact int he article (first sentence in "Career" section) - Dumelow (talk) 13:26, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow Thanks for the thorough and helpful feedback. Correct, Lyndsey Ingram is a gallery. I've added the website of Maple's publisher as an additional source for these biographical facts, which may be marginally better? I've added the citation straight after the appropriate sentence (oops!). Are you able to view The Times source at archive.org? I've added this archive link, and a quote within the cite, to the article too. Jonathan Deamer (talk) 18:42, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yep, looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 18:57, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Dumelow Thanks for the thorough and helpful feedback. Correct, Lyndsey Ingram is a gallery. I've added the website of Maple's publisher as an additional source for these biographical facts, which may be marginally better? I've added the citation straight after the appropriate sentence (oops!). Are you able to view The Times source at archive.org? I've added this archive link, and a quote within the cite, to the article too. Jonathan Deamer (talk) 18:42, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Ted Weiss Federal Building
[edit]- ... that New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building was built next to an African burial ground? Source: Stern, Robert A. M.; Fishman, David; Tilove, Jacob (2006). New York 2000: Architecture and Urbanism Between the Bicentennial and the Millennium. New York: Monacelli Press. p. 307.
- ALT1: ... that a pavilion next to New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building was canceled due to human remains? Source: Stern, Fishman & Tilove 2006, p. 307.
- ALT2: ... that New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building, located next to an African burial ground, was named for a white American? Source: English, Merle (October 22, 2003). "Building's Name Draws Uproar / Critics: Title Should Reflect Historical Site". Newsday. p. A15.
- ALT3: ... that there was controversy over the name of New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building because of its namesake's race? Source: English, Merle (October 22, 2003). "Building's Name Draws Uproar / Critics: Title Should Reflect Historical Site". Newsday. p. A15.
- ALT4: ... that during the construction of New York City's Ted Weiss Federal Building, local residents protested that not enough Asians were being hired for the project? Source: Kreitman, Matthew (July 14, 1992). "Chinatown Fights Injustice". South China Morning Post. p. 54.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tin mining in Indonesia and Template:Did you know nominations/Tomato Industrial Museum D. Nomikos
- Comment: Thanks to User:Pretzelles, who helped me with two of the hooks.
Epicgenius (talk) 17:30, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article is eligible for DYK (recently became a good article and has never been on the main page before). The image is free to use. I'll review ALT0 and ALT1. I think ALT1 is the most interesting.
- Reviewing ALT0:
- It's interesting and the hook matches the article. I can't access the provided source so I'll approve with good faith.
- Reviewing ALT1:
- I think this is much more interesting than ALT0. The hook matches the article and the source matches.
- ―Panamitsu (talk) 06:06, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Fictional planets of the Solar System
[edit]- ... that fictional planets of the Solar System include a planet inside the orbit of Mercury, Counter-Earth, and a destroyed planet between Mars and Jupiter (schematic diagram of orbits pictured)?
- Source: See the sections "Vulcan", "Counter-Earth", and "Phaëton" in the article.
- ALT1: ... that fictional planets of the Solar System include planets between Venus and Earth, planets on the inside of a hollow Earth, and a planet "behind the Earth"? Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=PbMdeizaCNcC&pg=PA539
- ALT2: ... that fictional planets of the Solar System (examples pictured) have been depicted since the 1700s? Source: Many other additional planets were hypothesised in fiction and speculative nonfiction from the eighteenth century onwards.
- ALT3: ... that planets that do not exist (examples pictured) have appeared in fiction since the 1700s? Source: Many other additional planets were hypothesised in fiction and speculative nonfiction from the eighteenth century onwards.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Fictional religion & Template:Did you know nominations/Drone congregation area
- Comment: ALT2 and ALT3 are different phrasings of the same basic hook. I can come up with more hooks if none of these strike the reviewer's fancy.
TompaDompa (talk) 00:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Approve ALT0 or ALT1 (ultimately up to the promoter to decide whether they want additional links in the hook or not). As interesting as ALT2 or ALT3 may be, I don't think everyone's interested in chronological facts, unfortunately. PrimalMustelid (talk) 14:18, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- For the record, my own preference is ALT0. TompaDompa (talk) 20:58, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Chang Wei-chia
[edit]- ... that when future Olympian Chang Wei-chia entered high school, her elementary school swimming coach was hired full-time and continued coaching her?
- Source: Chiang, Yen-wen 江彥文 (1992-10-30). "《教練看張緯嘉》 練得少 表現好 琢磨良材 眼光要放遠" ["Coach on Chang Wei-chia" Less Training, Better Performance, A Gem in the Making—Long-Term Vision is Key]. Min Sheng Bao (in Chinese). p. 3.
The article notes: "張緯嘉北市玉成國小四年級正式開始游泳訓─練,蔡祖修是她的教練兼導師 ... 張緯嘉升入南港國中,蔡祖修也應聘為南港國中游泳專任教練,繼續訓練張緯嘉,隨著張緯嘉身高竄高,她的成績也快速進步,終於在本屆區運大放異采。"
From Google Translate: Chang Wei-chia officially started swimming training as a fourth grader at Yucheng Elementary School in Taipei City. Tsai Tzu-hsiu was her coach and mentor. ... When Chang Wei-chia was promoted to Nangang Junior High School, Tsai Tzu-hsiu was also employed as the full-time swimming coach of Nangang Junior High School and carried on training Chang Wei-chia."
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tsybin Ts-25 and Template:Did you know nominations/Life Till Bones
Cunard (talk) 13:09, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Cunard, this is a solid and well-sourced article. While the sources are all offline, they come from reputable Taiwanese newspapers and I will AGF on their verifiability. The hook is fairly interesting and is supported by the source. Earwig shows no signs of copyright violations (probably because the sources are in Chinese). Two QPQs done. Good to go! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 06:07, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, Prince of Erebor (talk · contribs)! Cunard (talk) 09:55, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
Skin of My Teeth
[edit]- ... that in "Skin of My Teeth", Demi Lovato declared that she barely escaped death?
- Source: Harper's Bazaar
- ALT1: ... that Demi Lovato staged a "funeral" for her pop music before releasing "Skin of My Teeth"? Source: People, Billboard
- Reviewed: [[]]
CatchMe (talk) 20:19, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Everything is good to go save one nitpick. I know this is an extremely minor deviation, but the article itself does not acknowledge that the song says she barely escaped death, only mentioning the lyric followed by the account of here near-fatal overdose. The Bazaar does make that link, so an extremely minor rephrase in the article would make it so ALT0 can run. Otherwise, outstanding work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing this, Pbritti! I did a minor change to the article, so I think it is resolved now. CatchMe (talk) 01:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Excellent work! Thanks for making that change. We're good to go here! ~ Pbritti (talk) 01:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing this, Pbritti! I did a minor change to the article, so I think it is resolved now. CatchMe (talk) 01:39, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Extraterritoriality of Princess Margriet's birth
[edit]- ... that Princess Margriet of the Netherlands (pictured) was born in Canada's capital but outside of the country's legal jurisdiction?
- Source: Margriet's birth in Ottawa is readily verifiable, the source used in the article is Gideon Defoe, An Atlas of Extinct Countries, p. 125. For 'outside of Canada's jurisdiction', in-article source is Proclamation declaring the extraterritoriality of the birthplace of Princess Margriet of the Netherlands in Canada, George IV, public domain at Wikisource. If you don't like Wikisource it is also available at this archive of Canada Gazette which is much more difficult to read.
- ALT1: ... that Canada created an extraterritorial bubble into which Princess Margriet of the Netherlands was born? Source: as ALT0 plus page 124 of Dafoe for the "bubble".
- ALT2: ... that Princess Margriet of the Netherlands's impending birth was proclaimed extraterritorial due to wartime necessity? Source: as ALT0
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/2020 Puerto Rican status referendum & Template:Did you know nominations/Shooting of Greg Gunn (2× backlog mode)
- Comment: Special occasion for 19 January, Margriet's birthday. Open to ALTs.
Reidgreg (talk) 13:41, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Doing... ミラP@Miraclepine 20:05, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
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- Adequate sourcing: - Date of proclamation isn't verified within the document (WS titles are unreliable as UGC), but ref 5 does that; however I'm not sure if I should do it myself given the "adding sources" part in the advice I linked. Otherwise no issues that couldn't be directly fixed.
- Neutral:
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
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- Clear at 100px: - Might be more so with a cropped version, but I've submitted a Graphics Lab request due to the photograph shown being crooked.
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Created and nominated both today, sized at 4677 B. Ref 6 is PD, but outside the large quote, enough of the text is paraphrased to count towards size; otherwise no copyvio issues or anything that needed to be rewritten. Made a few minor fixes per WP:V and the advice at Wikipedia_talk:Did_you_know/Archive_202#c-RoySmith-20241101020900-Crisco_1492_mobile-20241101015300. While checking the copied "peoples of Canada and the Netherlands", I discovered that both Powell refs are redundant, so I've merged them. Reservation made six weeks in advance, right at the six-week limit. Leaning ALT0. AGF the Dafoe ref; speaking of...
Sources are all reliable and verified/AGFed. To be safe I needed to verify the reliability of Atlas of Extinct Countries given its comedic-like nature and it checks out: CNN says it's "meticulously researched but written for genuine laughs", Asian Review of Books says "brief, often humorous summaries not intended to provide a comprehensive, scholarly examination of extinct countries", and Cartographic Perspectives says "descriptions of the territorial entities are often anecdotal, meant as much to amuse as to inform ... I found myself searching the internet for articles on these places, both to verify the more ludicrous claims presented in Defoe’s writing (they all check out)" and that there are cited sources (albeit "on a marginally-related tangent").
Image is freely licensed, but it's a photo of a tilted photo, so I've submitted a Graphic Lab request at Commons; I can hold this for until the request is done. @Reidgreg: once these issues are fixed, you're good to go. ミラP@Miraclepine 22:01, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Reidgreg: Graphic Lab is done, but upon closer look, the image should be fine at 120px since one can tell there's a baby being held by a military officer, enough to match the context. Fix the one issue and you're good to go. ミラP@Miraclepine 23:25, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: Thanks for the quick and thorough review, and for the image improvements. Addressing the (other) red X first, the date of the proclamation, I've added "Veen1979" as suggested (I kept the original citation as Veen doesn't mention George VI).
- Re: the first/only time a foreign flag flew at the Peace Tower, I added "Tanweer2021" which has only. Is that sufficient (it's 3 years old)?
- re: the myth, "Veen1979" (which only mentions one room) is the one good source which describes the myth as a myth. Here are two reliable sources which are examples of reportage of the myth as truth with more than one room:
- People, 1 Feb 1943 "In Ottawa, in a hospital suite declared Dutch territory for the day, to Crown Princess Juliana had been born [...] Margriet"
- New York Post 20 June 2021 "Once Princess Juliana entered the third floor of Ottawa's Civic Hospital to give birth to Princess Margriet, Canada declared the maternity ward part of the Netherlands".
- One can readily find additional unreliable sources. I wasn't sure about citing sources which report incorrectly. Thoughts? – Reidgreg (talk) 00:21, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Both are good, and I fixed the Tanweer ref to show "as of". WP:NYPOST is WP:GUNREL, but it's being used as a primary source in the context of the myth, so the principle of ABOUTSELF will apply here; same for the People ref, which is reliable per RSP. Add them if you want. In the meantime, ALT0 approved. ミラP@Miraclepine 00:50, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Reidgreg: forgot ping. ミラP@Miraclepine 00:50, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: I put it back with
or as much as the entire maternity ward
in parenthesis, with a citation to three references, grouped together the way you did for Powell. I think that works. – Reidgreg (talk) 02:05, 9 December 2024 (UTC)- @Reidgreg: Looks good to me. ミラP@Miraclepine 02:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Miraclepine: I put it back with
Peri Alypias
[edit]- ... that in 2005, a French PhD student discovered the lost manuscript of Galen's Peri Alypias in what was called "one of the most spectacular finds ever of ancient literature"?
- Source: Rothschild, Clare K.; Thompson, Trevor W. (2012). "Galen's On the Avoidance of Grief : The Question of a Library at Antium". Classical Philology. 107 (2): 131–145. doi:10.1086/664028. ISSN 0009-837X. JSTOR 10.1086/664028.
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- Comment: Excited for this one. Who doesn't love a good manuscript discovery?
Kazamzam (talk) 22:53, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violation detected. Hook fact is verified to the cited source and is a good length in addition to be interesting. Good work! This article can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 00:36, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Pem Nem
[edit]- ... that in the narrative epic Pem Nem, the union of two lovers is a metaphor for the union of the soul with God?
- Source: * Hutton, Deborah (2011). "The Pem Nem: A Sixteenth Century Illustrated Romance from Bijapur". Sultans of the South: Arts of India's Deccan Courts, 1323-1687. p. 44.
Works of this type employ the masnavi format, a narrative poem in rhyming couplets, to tell a love story that mirrors the quest of the Sufi for union with God
"Pem nem: a 16th-century Urdu romance goes on-line".As in other tales of the same genre, the union of the lover and beloved is a metaphor for the union of the soul with God after mistaking the image, the majaz or symbol (here the image of Mah Ji on the hero's chest) for the haqiqa, or truth.
- ALT1: ... that in the narrative epic Pem Nem, a prince and a princess fall in love after a tortoise mysteriously conveys their pictures to each other? Source: * Hutton, Deborah (2011). "The Pem Nem: A Sixteenth Century Illustrated Romance from Bijapur". Sultans of the South: Arts of India's Deccan Courts, 1323-1687. p. 44.
the two fall hopelessly in love when a tortoise mysteriously conveys their portraits to one another
- Reviewed:
AmateurHi$torian (talk) 15:40, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Approving first hook only. Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violations detected. Both hook facts are reasonably interesting and are an appropriate length. The first hook has no issues and I can tick yes on that. However, there are some minor verifiability issues with the alt hook that should be easily fixed. To begin with the hook fact is not actually on page 44, but occurs later on page 46 and again on page 51. Secondly, the source uses the word tortoise (which is what is in the hook), but the article says turtle. They are not exactly the same thing (although tortoises are a specific type of turtle). Ping me once those issues are fixes and I can approve the alt hook, but no big deal if we just go with the first hook. Best.4meter4 (talk) 00:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, it's on page 46; that was a mistake on my part. As for the tortoise-turtle issue, there is another source which states that the animal was a turtle. The actual language of the manuscript is Dakhni, and like Urdu/Hindi, the word for tortoise and turtle is probably the same, ie. کچھوا or kachua. In any case, hook 1 is fine by me, and thanks for the review :) AmateurHi$torian (talk) 11:59, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Zhang Xinsheng (film)
[edit]- ... that the 1923 film Zhang Xinsheng disgusted audiences by featuring close-up views of internal organs and was later censored?
- Source: Huang, Xuelei (2014). Shanghai Filmmaking: Crossing Borders, Connecting to the Globe, 1922–1938. Leiden: Brill. ISBN 978-90-04-27933-9.;
- ALT1: ... that cheaper tickets helped Zhang Xinsheng earn more money? Source: Huang, Xuelei (2014). Shanghai Filmmaking: Crossing Borders, Connecting to the Globe, 1922–1938. Leiden: Brill. ISBN 978-90-04-27933-9.;
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Council of District Dumas, Template:Did you know nominations/My Boy Only Breaks His Favorite Toys
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:41, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: AGF on Shanghai Filmmaking and other offline/non-free sources. Good work! Uriahheep228 (talk) 17:23, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Tsybin Ts-25
[edit]- ... that the Tsybin Ts-25 military glider was considered for use as a civilian airliner on routes including Moscow?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Austrosphecodes krampus; Template:Did you know nominations/Aquilegia parviflora
The Bushranger One ping only 01:54, 8 December 2024 (UTC).
- Verified that the article is long enough, that there are no plagiarism concerns through the Copyvios tool and spotchecking, and that the hook is sourced in the article. Cunard (talk) 12:55, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
An Amorous History of the Silver Screen
[edit]- ... that An Amorous History of the Silver Screen has been read as a biographic metafilm, paralleling its lead's rise from prostitution into film stardom?
- Source: *Zhang, Zhen (2005). An Amorous History of the Silver Screen: Shanghai Cinema, 1896-1937. Chicago: University of Chicago Press. ISBN 978-0-226-98238-0.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/James Alexander Ulio Template:Did you know nominations/Revant Himatsingka
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:57, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Thanks for the easy review, Chris. Recommend the promoter link metafilm as is and Xuan Jinglin for "its lead", with a softer suggestion to link prostitution. ThaesOfereode (talk) 03:23, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
Kim Kitsuragi
[edit]- ... that Kim Kitsuragi from Disco Elysium was celebrated as one of the best video game characters of 2019?
- Source: See Accolades section
Shooterwalker (talk) 19:33, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
- Comment I have stacked a bunch of DYK assists in the summer. But if it's in doubt I can pick up another. I'm also open to suggestions on the DYK ALT, for anything that might be interesting to an average reader who might not be deeply familiar with video games. Shooterwalker (talk) 19:35, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Shooterwalker: Date, size, QPQ, GA status, hook, all fine. I'd suggest adding the term queer to the hook - it could make the hook more interesting. Ping me if this is done for a re-tick of an ALT1. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:57, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- How about:
- ALT1 ... that Kim Kitsuragi from Disco Elysium is celebrated as one of the queer video game characters, and best game characters of 2019?
- Hoping that works. Shooterwalker (talk) 19:09, 16 December 2024 (UTC)
- How about:
Papa (2024 film)
[edit]- ... that the film Papa uses a nonlinear narrative to replicate how human memories function?
- Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that multiple scenes in Papa feature cotton tree flowers, even though it was not scripted and the falling cotton simply kept drifting into the shot? Source: [2]
- ALT2: ... that the director chose not to shoot Papa in Tsuen Wan, where the murder that inspired the film occurred, to avoid bringing back tragic memories for the residents? Source: [3]
- ALT3: ... that Papa employs a 4:3 aspect ratio to create the sensation of a home video? Source: [4]
- ALT4: ... that to prepare for her role in Papa, Jo Koo learned Hakka from the director's cousin? Source: [5]
- ALT5: ... that Papa initially struggled with a lack of funding because its title was considered "not commercial enough"? Source: [6]
- ALT6: ... that the film Papa is based on a real-life murder that occurred in 2010? Source: [7]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Dickinson pumpkin
- Comment: Second QPQ: Template:Did you know nominations/Kingdom of Characters. Expanded from 544 words/3,271 characters (Special:Diff/1261716053) to 2,872 words/17,229 characters (Special:Diff/1262019700).
Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 05:36, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Article is new enough and long enough. Hook facts are cited, and I like most of them (ALT6 is drab by comparison, and ALT0 may fall afoul of WP:DYKFICTION). Earwig shows 46%, but that's from the large blockquote. AGF of Cantonese sources. Looks good to go. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:58, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Chris, thanks for your review! I am unsure whether the creative decision in the screenplay writing qualifies as a real-world fact, so it might be better to consider other hooks. I like both ALT1 and ALT2 and am happy to go with either. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 09:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- I know I personally prefer ALT1, which is very much real-life based. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:53, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Great! Let's go with ALT1 then. —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 16:20, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- I know I personally prefer ALT1, which is very much real-life based. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 12:53, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
References
- ^ Chak, Ashlyn (3 December 2024). "How Lau Ching-wan added subtlety to complex role as father of a killer in new film Papa". South China Morning Post. Retrieved 8 December 2024.
The film is notable for its non-linear storytelling. "When you think back on [your past]," says Lau, "it's as if your memory has been rearranged. Like when someone sneaks a photo of you and you don't think it looks like you. It's quite magical." On the other hand, Yung thinks it is simply how memories work in the human brain. "Memory does not function linearly and can be in pieces," he says. "There is beauty in it – something will trigger you to [enter] another dimension in an abstract departure that is very much a stream of consciousness."
- ^ Chak, Ashlyn (3 December 2024). "How Lau Ching-wan added subtlety to complex role as father of a killer in new film Papa". South China Morning Post. Retrieved 8 December 2024.
Along with Lau's tear-inducing performance, cotton tree flowers – omnipresent in spring in Hong Kong – have an important cameo role throughout Papa as a thread connecting its many fragmented flashbacks. However, they were not a part of the script. It just so happened that they were in blossom during filming. They "kept coming back into the shot", Yung says, and when he researched the symbolic meaning of cotton-tree flowers, it sent chills down his spine. "It was 'cherish the person in front of you'."
- ^ 凌梓鎏 (2 December 2024). "奇案是偽命題 翁子光:疏理痛苦是一種救贖". Hong Kong Feature (in Chinese). Retrieved 8 December 2024.
不過,除了兒子殺人後逃往的荃灣海濱公園,翁子光依案情在實地拍攝,戲內其他荃灣畫面,大部分卻在土瓜灣取景的。「因為我不想影響荃灣街坊,不論他們八卦或有陰影,我去當區拍攝重提舊事,都不好。」
[However, aside from the Tsuen Wan Riviera Park , where the son fled after the murder, director Philip Yung filmed other scenes in Tsuen Wan primarily in To Kwa Wan. "I did not want to affect the residents of Tsuen Wan, whether they are gossiping or recalling tragic memories, it wouldn’t be good for me to film in the area and bring up old matters."] - ^ Yau, Bonnie (5 December 2024). "專訪電影《爸爸》主演劉青雲、導演翁子光,從最極端的悲劇,談最平常的無常". Vogue Hong Kong (in Chinese). Retrieved 9 December 2024.
他希望觀眾不易覺察攝影機的存在,還特易採用4:3的畫面,「這種平常的感覺好像看Home Video,甚至乎令你覺得不像是看大電影,很適合我們這部電影,好像在看別人家裏發生的事情。」
[[Yung] hopes that the audience will not easily notice the presence of the camera, which is why he chose a 4:3 aspect ratio. "This ordinary feeling makes it seem like you’re watching a home video, even giving you the sensation that it is not a feature film, which is perfect for our movie, as if you are witnessing events happening in someone else's household."] - ^ "爸爸專訪|谷祖琳演產子場面太入戲 劉青雲:真係擔心佢生咗個仔出嚟". am730 (in Chinese). 30 November 2024. Retrieved 9 December 2024.
谷祖琳在電影中操得一口流利客家話對白,原來她從來未接觸過客家話,因為導演是客家人,找來翁導的表姐,花了三天時間立即速成。
[Jo Koo delivers her lines in fluent Hakka in the film, but she had never encountered the language before. Since the director is Hakka, he brought in his cousin to teach her, and she learned it in just three days.] - ^ "劉青雲《爸爸》取材自荃灣倫常慘案 衝擊影帝之作 拆解喊位多過《破•地獄》之謎". Sing Tao Daily (in Chinese). 27 November 2024. Retrieved 6 December 2024.
《爸爸》片名本來不能用?上世紀90年代,香港的奇案電影多以獵奇角度出發。《踏血尋梅》(根據2008年援交少女肢解案作藍本改編)寫成劇本時,當時投資方提議《碎屍案》、《沙井女屍》、《人肉私鐘妹》等片名。《爸爸》也曾被指不夠商業化,苦尋投資者不果。
[The title Papa was originally not allowed? In the 1990s, Hong Kong's crime films often approached topics from a sensationalist angle. When writing the script for Port of Call (based on the 2008 case of a dismembered escort), the investors suggested titles such as The Dismemberment Case, The Body in a Sandy Well, and Human Flesh Sex Worker. [The title] "Papa" was also criticized for being not commercial enough, struggling to find investors as a result.] - ^ Lo, Zabrina (3 December 2024). "'Papa' star Sean Lau and director Philip Yung explore human emotions in a film based on true crime". Tatler Asia. Retrieved 9 December 2024.
Papa is based on the murder case that took place in Tsuen Wan in 2010, when a teenager who suffered from schizophrenia murdered his mother and sister before turning himself in.
Cancer (song)
[edit]- ... that the My Chemical Romance song "Cancer" was written in eight minutes?
- Source: https://www.altpress.com/my-chemical-romance-the-black-parade-facts-trivia/ "...it’s simple to assume that the heart-wrenching “Cancer” took a length of time to craft... In fact, that process took Gerard and producer Rob Cavallo about eight minutes."
- ALT1: ... that "Cancer" was Gerard Way's attempt to write the "darkest song ever"? Source: https://www.nme.com/news/music/my-chemical-romance-135-1349066 "Speaking about the track ’Cancer’ in a statement, Way said that he wanted to write “the darkest song ever.” "
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Overall: No QPQ needed. First paragraph of the "Twenty One Pilots version" section is unsourced, but is summarising the rest of the section, as allowed by WP:DYKCITE. Both hooks are in the article and sourced. Jonathan Deamer (talk) 21:15, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- @Jonathan Deamer: Thank you for the quick review! I know that it's a bit unorthodox to have an unsourced paragraph, but I see it as being a "mini-lead" for the cover version of the song, and there is a little bit of established precedent for it in other GAs (e.g. "Love's Train"), so I figured that it would be alright. Leafy46 (talk) 22:00, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Eric Rimmington
[edit]- ... that a Portsmouth building was Grade II listed because Eric Rimmington painted a mural inside it?
- Reviewed: Johannes Kaiser and Tellus (app)
- Comment: Moved from userspace to mainspace on 9 December 2024.
Storye book (talk) 14:17, 10 December 2024 (UTC).
- QPQ is done. Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violations detected. Hook length is fine and the fact is reasonably interesting and verified to the source with an inline citation. Everything looks good.4meter4 (talk) 16:11, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Boneghazi
[edit]- ... that one Tumblr user cursed another for stealing bones to use in curses?
- Source: Tourjée 2016
- Reviewed: MV Spirit of Norfolk and General Electric Showcase House
- Comment: expecting a ghazillion wikicup points when the next competition starts, please and thank you
theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 07:36, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- New enough, long enough. This is very well written and it is supported by source, interesting hook and article, QPQ done.
- The only issue is I feel like this is on the edge of NEVENT (or NCRIME, I guess?) sourcing-wise and some may raise questions as to the notability of this. The main claim to notability here is the Vice piece, which has its own considerations, though I would accept it for this case. There is an academic mention cited here but from how it's cited here I can't tell how significant it is, but is probably sigcov. Otherwise all the coverage is questionable when it comes to WP:LASTING.
- I would vote keep on this at AfD and wouldn't take issue with it personally, given the depth of coverage and the academic mention, but I do feel like this is going to get AfDed once it has left the main page (but will probably survive). Also, I am unsure how I feel, but I feel others may have issues with this hook as it relates to the DYK provision of not running unduly negative hooks about living people on the main page, since this involves crime and the bone thief in question is not a public figure. So I will ask for a second opinion. PARAKANYAA (talk) 08:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, PARAKANYAA! NEVENT was a big consideration when we were deciding whether to write this article, but a few factors tipped it over the edge for us. First, the incident led to the state of Louisiana passing a new law, so that's basically ripped out of WP:LASTING. In terms of persistence of coverage, the incident was brought up again when TikTok had a similar controversy six years later, there's some pretty decent retrospective analysis about what state Tumblr was in 2015 and how it compared to TikTok in 2021. As for the spread of coverage, I think the Vice, Washington Post, Intelligencer articles are pretty deep dives from nationwide publications, in addition to the local papers that cover more of the local aspect. Happy to let Tamzin or uninvolved people weigh in here, but I think a closer inspection makes a pretty good case for an NEVENT pass. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 09:24, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I actually didn't think about the law, which I do agree makes this a better case, though I'm still not fully confident someone won't take issue with it. Even apart from that the BLP aspect of this hook does seem like the kind of thing that someone, rightly or wrongly, would bring up at WP:ERRORS. I think more thoughts on it would help, given how many discussions the "unduly focused on a negative aspect of a living person" bit has resulted in. PARAKANYAA (talk) 09:32, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Well, I don't know if we can do anything about the "wrongly" half there, but WP:DYKBLP is pretty clear about what it covers: "hooks that unduly focus on negative aspects of living persons". Mx. Darling is known exclusively for one thing, and that's their role in this controversy, so I think that's satisfied. We're also not naming them in the hook, nor mentioning the legal proceedings in it, nor is the name we use in the article their legal name. (That name shows up in a minority of sources, so we judged it better on privacy grounds to only use their other name.) I don't think you're wrong to speculate that this might get objected to or AfD'd, because some people are bad at assessing notability of pop-culture articles; I'm just not sure what else we can do to mitigate what's more a systemic problem in DYK and Wikipedia. Not really trying to disagree with you on anything here, PARAKANYAA; just explaining how I see it. -- Tamzin[cetacean needed] (they|xe|🤷) 09:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- That's convincing. I do have the same interpretation of DYKBLP, but there seems to be a minority interpretation that applies more broadly that I see around. People may take issue with this one, but I believe it abides by our policies. So I will approve this (though if other people would chime in with their thoughts that is of course welcome). PARAKANYAA (talk) 09:58, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Well, I don't know if we can do anything about the "wrongly" half there, but WP:DYKBLP is pretty clear about what it covers: "hooks that unduly focus on negative aspects of living persons". Mx. Darling is known exclusively for one thing, and that's their role in this controversy, so I think that's satisfied. We're also not naming them in the hook, nor mentioning the legal proceedings in it, nor is the name we use in the article their legal name. (That name shows up in a minority of sources, so we judged it better on privacy grounds to only use their other name.) I don't think you're wrong to speculate that this might get objected to or AfD'd, because some people are bad at assessing notability of pop-culture articles; I'm just not sure what else we can do to mitigate what's more a systemic problem in DYK and Wikipedia. Not really trying to disagree with you on anything here, PARAKANYAA; just explaining how I see it. -- Tamzin[cetacean needed] (they|xe|🤷) 09:46, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- I actually didn't think about the law, which I do agree makes this a better case, though I'm still not fully confident someone won't take issue with it. Even apart from that the BLP aspect of this hook does seem like the kind of thing that someone, rightly or wrongly, would bring up at WP:ERRORS. I think more thoughts on it would help, given how many discussions the "unduly focused on a negative aspect of a living person" bit has resulted in. PARAKANYAA (talk) 09:32, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, PARAKANYAA! NEVENT was a big consideration when we were deciding whether to write this article, but a few factors tipped it over the edge for us. First, the incident led to the state of Louisiana passing a new law, so that's basically ripped out of WP:LASTING. In terms of persistence of coverage, the incident was brought up again when TikTok had a similar controversy six years later, there's some pretty decent retrospective analysis about what state Tumblr was in 2015 and how it compared to TikTok in 2021. As for the spread of coverage, I think the Vice, Washington Post, Intelligencer articles are pretty deep dives from nationwide publications, in addition to the local papers that cover more of the local aspect. Happy to let Tamzin or uninvolved people weigh in here, but I think a closer inspection makes a pretty good case for an NEVENT pass. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 09:24, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
James Alexander Ulio
[edit]- ... that during World War II, US Army casualty telegrams (example pictured) were sent out in the name of Major General James Alexander Ulio? Source: Mesches, Alan E. (2020). Major General James A. Ulio: Winning World War II from a Desk. Philadelphia: Casemate Publishers. ISBN 978-1-61200-826-4. OCLC 1227652141, pp.23-24
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Overall: New enough, long enough, hook fact is cited and interesting. Earwig isn't happy, but it's a giant blockquote that it's flagging (from a PD source at that). Image is free, different than what we normally get. Good to go! — Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:00, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
Her Story (2024 film)
[edit]- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Influencer and Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Brenton Fisk
Toadboy123 (talk) 12:27, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Toadboy123, the article is solid and well-sourced. The hook is interesting, and the source from The Guardian supports it. Earwig shows a 37.1% similarity to the source, which I believe is due to the direct quotations from the What's on Weibo review, so it should not be a concern. One thing I would like to nitpick is that it is better to avoid citing Weibo, as it is a social media platform. While I understand that the articles you cited are from the accounts of media outlets, it would be more ideal to cite the original articles directly rather than their reposts on social media. For instance, source 2 could be replaced with this url to Sohu Entertainment[4]. But this is not a critical issue that would prevent the article from moving forward. Spotchecked sources 2 and 9 and found no issues. Two QPQs done. Good to go! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 15:18, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
- I have fixed the source which you have stated. Toadboy123 (talk) 02:53, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Charles Brenton Fisk
[edit]- ... that after unknowingly working for the Manhattan Project, Charles Fisk quit physics and became an organbuilder?
- ALT1: ... that after discovering he worked for the Manhattan Project, Charles Fisk quit physics and became an organbuilder?
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- Comment: QPQ done Template:Did you know nominations/Qvadriga
Ca talk to me! 03:14, 9 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article converted to GA status. All parts of the article are cited with no problems with copyright. The stated hook is also mentioned in the article as a separate section. Overall no problems and good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 13:22, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
GlucoBoy
[edit]- ... that the Glucoboy was advertised as the "first medical device to interface with a Game Boy"?
- Source: "GlucoBoy Moves Closer to Reality". Diabetes in Control. 2003. Archived from the original on 23 September 2003. Retrieved 10 December 2024. [5]
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VRXCES (talk) 08:25, 10 December 2024 (UTC).
- Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violation detected. Hook fact is interesting and verified to the cited source. Everything looks good.4meter4 (talk) 16:02, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
Charles LeBlanc (blogger)
[edit]- ... that blogger Charles LeBlanc interviewed a man who carried out a mass shooting the following year?
B3251(talk) 04:34, 17 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 19:00, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
Nice work; no problems, good to go. New enough and long enough. Hook length good and passes WP:DYKINT. Passed. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 19:00, 18 December 2024 (UTC)
An Amorous History of the Silver Screen: Shanghai Cinema, 1896–1937
[edit]- ... that An Amorous History of the Silver Screen, an exploration of more than four decades of film in China, positions cinema as a modern folk tale?
- Source: Semsel, George S. (2008). "Review: An Amorous History of the Silver Screen: Shanghai Cinema, 1896–1937 by Zhang Zhen". The American Historical Review. 113 (2): 471–472. doi:10.1086/ahr.113.2.471. JSTOR 30222875.
- ALT1: ... that one reviewer deemed An Amorous History of the Silver Screen required reading for anyone interested in Chinese cinema? Source: Semsel, George S. (2008). "Review: An Amorous History of the Silver Screen: Shanghai Cinema, 1896–1937 by Zhang Zhen". The American Historical Review. 113 (2): 471–472. doi:10.1086/ahr.113.2.471. JSTOR 30222875.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Papa (2024 film), Template:Did you know nominations/Saxophone sonata (Creston)
- Comment: Yes, I know this is a dry article.
— Chris Woodrich (talk) 22:52, 11 December 2024 (UTC). Long enough, new enough. Article is in a presentable condition. I can't access the source but it seems reliable. You need to make clear that "modern folk tale" is a quote. Obviously this is always going to be a fairly niche subject, but I think changing "positions cinema as a" to "argues that cinema is a" would increase its appeal. Llewee (talk) 15:24, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Fair enough. See ALT2: ... that An Amorous History of the Silver Screen, an exploration of more than four decades of film in China, argues that cinema is a modern folk tale? — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:30, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Pinging Llewee, in case the page isn't watchlisted. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:30, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
, ok passed Llewee (talk) 16:35, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
Always Happy to Explode
[edit]- ... that regarding a song on Always Happy to Explode, its principal songwriter asked listeners to "love it for me, for I cannot"?
- Source: On the quote coming from the principal songwriter: "And now I just, sort of, write songs for myself, kind of as my solo thing, and then, like for this Sunset Rubdown record ... we looked at the pile of songs and chose the ones together that we thought would best suit this record." McMullen, Chase. September 30, 2024. "Spencer Krug talks Sunset Rubdown reunion and new album". Beats Per Minute. On the quote itself: "Love this song for me, people! Love it for me, for I cannot." Schube, Will. September 20, 2024. "Sunset Rubdown Take Us Track by Track Through Their Return LP Always Happy to Explode". Flood Magazine.
- ALT1: ... that Always Happy to Explode was Sunset Rubdown's first studio album in 15 years? Source: "And so 15 years on, Sunset Rubdown picks up where its previous run of cryptic indie epics left off." Blinov, Paul. September 18, 2024. "Sunset Rubdown Pick Up the Pieces on 'Always Happy to Explode'". Exclaim! Magazine.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/American Writers
DrOrinScrivello (talk) 20:03, 12 December 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:21, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
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Overall: Looks good. Nice work. Preference for the initial hook. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:41, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
2020 NFC Championship Game
[edit]- ... that with the Green Bay Packers loss in the 2020 NFC Championship Game, Aaron Rodgers "became the first quarterback in NFL history to lose four straight NFC Championship Games"?
- Reviewed: Conestoga wagon and Mother Solomon
« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:46, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
- Please provide a second QPQ as soon as possible as DYK is currently in backlog mode and thus experienced DYK regulars need to provide two QPQs per nom. Thank you. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 08:46, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Done. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:04, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- While this fact offends me on a personal level it unfortuantly meets all the requirements. Earwig has less then 20% similarity and both QPQ are done. Well written.Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:50, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Sarah Pickstone
[edit]- ... that Sarah Pickstone based her John Moores Prize-winning painting on an illustration that accompanied the poem "Not Waving but Drowning"? Source: BBC: "Manchester-born Pickstone based the winning painting on an illustration by Stevie Smith to accompany her 1957 poem Not Waving But Drowning."
Jonathan Deamer (talk) 21:27, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
- General eligibility:
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Overall: Everything seems to be alright, but I'm just a tad concerned about the length, which is merely 11 characters more than the bare minimum requirement. KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 10:50, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Kingoflettuce, that's a fair point. I've now expanded the article to just over 1800 characters prose excluding quotations. Jonathan Deamer (talk) 12:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Welcome, I think that will do KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 15:48, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Julia Hoggett
[edit]- ... that the CEO of London Stock Exchange Group, Julia Hoggett, described insider dealing as "the poster child of market abuse"? Source: https://www.google.co.uk/books/edition/The_Little_Book_of_Market_Manipulation/glvIDwAAQBAJ?hl=en&gbpv=1&dq=Julia+Hoggett&pg=PA16&printsec=frontcover (p.16)
Lajmmoore (talk) 16:25, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
- Hi Lajmmoore, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 11 December and exceeds minimum length; article is cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't pick up any overly close paraphrasing from sources in a spot check, Earwig score is skewed by quote and names of awards etc.; two QPQs have been provided; hook fact is not overly exciting to me but probably interesting enough; hook fact is mentioned in article and checks out to source cited; I am in two minds as to whether we should add "previously" in front of "described" as the comment was made when she was serving in a different role, happy to leave it up to you and/or the promoter/admin - Dumelow (talk) 12:55, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
Step by Step (Braxe + Falcon song)
[edit]- ... that for their debut single "Step by Step", the French touch music duo Braxe + Falcon created a "downtempo ballad with acoustic drums" in divergence from the traditional French house club-style music?
- Source: https://www.musicradar.com/news/braxe-falcon-interview – "We finished Step By Step first and that was an important song for us because it’s a downtempo ballad with acoustic drums. We didn’t want to come back with your typical French house 125bpm format – we’ve done that already and are not excited by that type of music anymore, so we felt it was crucial to push this kind of track as part of our first collaborative project."
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BarntToust 14:16, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
- I'll take on this one, to pay it forward on how quickly my first DYK nom got reviewed.
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- Adequate sourcing: - Need to source the genre (per WP:EXPLICITGENRE). The personnel section should also be cited, whether if it is to an online listing of the song or the EP's liner notes.
- Neutral: - Wish I could give a check mark with comments, but this template does not allow that. I'd like to see a little more about the song's lyrical content, if you could find information on it? No worries if not.
- Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
- Other problems: - When I first ran Earwig on the article, it gave it a copyvio score of 62.9%. While a second run reduced it down to an acceptable 21.3%, I think that the overquoting in the article's reception section should be addressed before it is promoted to DYK. I'd suggest taking a look at WP:CRS for tips on how to consolidate things, but the key is to try and link quotes together by their subject like you did in the article's lead (e.g. "Critics praised the song for its "breezy" instrumention.")
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Overall: Article is new enough and was promoted to GA within the past week. However, there are few issues with the article's prose: "French touch" being the song's genre must be sourced, the personnel section lacks a citation, and there's a bit of WP:OVERQUOTE in the article reception section. The given hook is also not particularly interesting in my opinion; I've suggested an alternative idea, but a new hook should be created in any case. In any case, good job on your first GA and your first DYK nomination, as far as I can tell :) Leafy46 (talk) 16:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- The nominator responded to this review on my personal talk page, and has agreed with an alternate hook. How does "ALT1: ...that the music video for "Step by Step" stars a 12-year old professional skateboarder?" (Source) sound? Leafy46 (talk) 17:36, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- I also see that you proposed "ALT1a: ... that the music video for Braxe + Falcon's debut single "Step by Step", directed by Toru Tokikawa, stars 12-year-old skater Ginwoo Onodera, who is the youngest athlete ever to sign with Nike?" — I'll put this here too just so we can consolidate everything, but I personally think less is more when it comes to DYK hooks in general. Leafy46 (talk) 17:39, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
- Nominator accepted the alternate hooks on my personal talk page, so I'll approve ALT1 and ALT1a for whichever administrator comes down the line to choose from! Leafy46 (talk) 17:44, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Any mistakes in the GA review are mine, sorry. // Chchcheckit (talk) 12:58, 15 December 2024 (UTC) (the reviewer)2
1,10-Decanediol
[edit]- ... that 1,10-Decanediol could function as an inhibitor of soil nitrification?
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金色黎明 (talk) 12:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC).
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Overall: Hey 金色黎明, so nice see you here on enwiki! First, the DYK hooks should follow the same format as on zhwiki and wrap the eligible article in bold markup. I have made those adjustments for you and added a link to nitrification, so no worries there. Most of the sources are offline academic references, and I will AGF regarding them. Image is freely licensed. The Google Patents source backs the hook fact, although I am not a 100% sure if it is a reliable source. It is also just moderately interesting imo, but since the rest of the article is much more technical, I do not believe a better hook can be formulated, so I will get it a pass. This is your second DYK nomination, so no QPQ is needed. Good to go! —Prince of Erebor(The Book of Mazarbul) 13:09, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
Allied prisoners of war in Japan
[edit]- ... that the harsh treatment of Allied prisoners of war in Japan is well known in the West but mostly forgotten in Japan itself? Source: see cited refs: Kovner p.2, Tanaka p. xxii, 256–262
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Petergofsky District
- Comment: 2nd QPQ: Template:Did you know nominations/Nicolaas van Wijk
Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 02:36, 13 December 2024 (UTC).
- :Hi! I'll be reviewing this.
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Overall: Article new enough and long enough. Hook is sourced to a book, and seems reliable. No recent edit wars, so article is stable. Hook is neutral (and quite interesting, if I may add). No picture is used, no plagiarism from what Earwig found, two QPQs are done. Easy pass, good job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by EF5 (talk • contribs) 20:00, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Praga E-55
[edit]- ... that the Praga E-55 was abandoned due to the Czech aircraft industry being directed to concentrate on licensed production of Soviet aircraft?
- Source: Marjánek, Pavel (1976). "Mongrafie: Praga E-55". Letectvi a Kosmonautika (in Czech). Vol. 52, no. 22. pp. 867–868
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/BLKBOK; Template:Did you know nominations/Aquilegia moorcroftiana
The Bushranger One ping only 22:32, 12 December 2024 (UTC).
- The article looks good. QPQs done. The hook is interesting. The article matches the hook. I can't figure out if the image is freely licensed, but if you use the image there should be a "(pictured)" in the hook. ―Panamitsu (talk) 02:28, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- Not 100% sure on the picture, so removing it from the nom. Thanks! - The Bushranger One ping only 02:36, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
- The photo is present in the 1976 Letectví a Kosmonautika article p. 867 - photo credits (covering the whole L+K article) are: "J. Landa, K Masojidek, archiv J Zazvonila v VZLU". The photo dates to October 1951 or before, as that was when it was allocated a civil registration (it still has the military registration V-11 in the photo). Note that I didn't include the three-view diagram used on other language articles as it definitely has dubious licencing.Nigel Ish (talk) 12:25, 15 December 2024 (UTC)
- Not 100% sure on the picture, so removing it from the nom. Thanks! - The Bushranger One ping only 02:36, 13 December 2024 (UTC)
Ambo Sooloh
[edit]- ... that Ambo Sooloh pledged allegiance to the British government on behalf of all the Malays in Singapore?
KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 11:28, 12 December 2024 (UTC).
- Hi Kingoflettuce, review follows: article created 12 December and exceeds minimum length; sources used look to be reliable and citations are placed inline throughout; sources used are almost entirely offline, I found no issues with paraphrasing from the online ones; two QPQs have been carried out; hook fact is interesting and stated in the article, the source is offline, for completeness would you mind providing an extract to support it? - Dumelow (talk) 12:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yes, no problem: "In 1934, Ambo Sooloh was elected to represent the Malays in handing over to the Governor of the Straits Settlement, Sir Shenton Thomas, a letter stating their loyalty to the country and the British Government. It was a solemn political occasion which, according to the Utusan Melayu, showed that the Singapore Malays was a distinct ethnic group, apart from other Malays in the region." Cheers, KINGofLETTUCE 👑 🥬 15:45, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, works for me - Dumelow (talk) 18:11, 12 December 2024 (UTC)