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Your submission at Articles for creation: The Adventures of Alice (June 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

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KylieTastic (talk) 14:55, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Matthew John Drummond! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KylieTastic (talk) 14:55, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

What can I do to improve it Matthew John Drummond (talk) 17:17, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, all new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See WP:N) which in most cases requires significant coverage (WP:SIGCOV) in multiple independent (WP:INDY) reliable sources (WP:RS). You currently only have a single source that shows it exists but not that it is notable. Regards KylieTastic (talk) 17:21, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I had a quick look in the papers but didn't find much just this: https://www.newspapers.com/article/the-guardian-television-by-mary-crosie/150237442/ KylieTastic (talk) 17:26, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

That newspaper article is correct that what this page I'm creating is ment to be based on. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 17:40, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Adventures of Alice (June 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Iwaqarhashmi was:

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Waqar💬 17:43, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Receptiob section for Draft:The Adventures of Alice

The article Draft:The Adventures of Alice needs a reception section explaining what critics and other people thought about the program. Лисан аль-Гаиб (talk) 20:01, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I added more stuff to the reception Matthew John Drummond (talk) 20:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Crying Down the Lane (June 29)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 13:00, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I need assistance Matthew John Drummond (talk) 13:11, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Can you help me find any information about the episodes Matthew John Drummond (talk) 12:09, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I’ve added in more references to the website Crying Down the Lane. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 14:15, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've added more references to the Wikipedia draft page I've creating titled Crying Down the Lane Matthew John Drummond (talk) 14:16, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Musical Playhouse (July 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Iwaqarhashmi was:

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Waqar💬 20:03, 12 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Adventures of Alice (August 24)

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Two more reliable source will help. This slightly will meet WP:NFILM.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 10:48, 24 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Reprieve (August 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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KylieTastic (talk) 16:55, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Is there is information about this movie can you find. Can you also find out if the film has survived. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 16:59, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Doing a google there is very little about the film, not really surprising as a "10 minute experiment film" KylieTastic (talk) 17:17, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Has the film survived in the National Film and Television School archive since they’ve kept my of there old programs. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 17:21, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

If you want to know if there are ways to find sources for more obscure films maybe try asking at Wikipedia:WikiProject Film - they even have a resources page that may help Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Resources. KylieTastic (talk) 17:26, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of The Reprieve (1972 film)

Hello Matthew John Drummond,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged The Reprieve (1972 film) for deletion, because it seems to be copied from another source, probably infringing copyright.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to rewrite it in your own words, you can contest this deletion, but don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions. Thanks!

Message delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.

-1ctinus📝🗨 17:14, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Delete that page and change my draft page to The Reprieve (1972 short film). Matthew John Drummond (talk) 17:20, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

How do I do that. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 18:35, 26 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Crying Down the Lane (August 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 12:41, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Peter Sallis / Junglies

Greetings. Please provide the exact page on this source – ^[1] – for the show Junglies. It's a lot of pages to scroll through, and we need to be sure it's actually there. Mac Dreamstate (talk) 10:25, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

References

^ "Collections Search – Peter Sallis". BFI. Retrieved 7 December 2023.

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Adventures of Alice has been accepted

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Strange Experiences (September 23)

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:47, 23 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Gawby.com

A lot of your recent draft submissions seem to be using the site Gawby.com as a source. The thing is, the site appears to be user-submitted in the same way IMDb is, so I'm not sure if it can be cited as a reliable source. Harryhenry1 (talk) 07:06, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I,ve added another reference to the page. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 15:43, 24 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've added a reliable source to the page. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 18:24, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Musical Playhouse (September 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

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KylieTastic (talk) 10:39, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Bristol Entertainment (September 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Guessitsavis was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Most references appear to be directory-like.

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Sincerely, Guessitsavis (she/they) (Talk) 22:02, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Snowdropper (September 28)

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 22:32, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Murder Most English: A Flaxborough Chronicle (September 29)

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 18:04, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

September 2024

Your edit to Draft:Murder Most English: A Flaxborough Chronicle has been removed in whole or in part, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for information on how to contribute your work appropriately. For legal reasons, Wikipedia strictly cannot host copyrighted text or images from print media or digital platforms without an appropriate and verifiable license. Contributions infringing on copyright will be removed. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously, and persistent violators of our copyright policy will be blocked from editing. See Wikipedia:Copying text from other sources for more information. win8x (talking | spying) 22:29, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Matthew John Drummond, good luck, and have fun. User:Significa liberdade (talk) 17:05, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 16:22, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Murder Most English: A Flaxborough Chronicle (October 8)

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Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 16:48, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Bristol Entertainment (October 8)

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Significa liberdade (she/her) (talk) 17:45, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Candida (1961 TV play) has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Candida (1961 TV play). Thanks! Toadspike [Talk] 23:25, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've corrected the link and I've also added another link as well to that section on the page. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 14:52, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Leave it to Charlie (October 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tavantius was:

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The following four sources don't really contribute to notability. If you could find at least 3 newspapers and books covering this, I'll accept it.

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Tavantius (talk) 18:52, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Poet (1960 TV play) (October 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tavantius was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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The TV Brain and BBC sources are primary, hence they don't contribute to notability. The cast, plot, and production parts are unsourced, and one of the remaining two sources is unknown.^[1] Please fix all these problems prior to resunmitting.

References

^ What book does "Brand & Pertile" come from?

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Tavantius (talk) 18:46, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I got the first reference from the Wikipedia page The Poet's Mystery. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 20:51, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Belonging (TV Play) (October 17)

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Comr Melody Idoghor (talk) 14:39, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Musical Playhouse (October 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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Doesn't meet WP:NFILM. The newspaper archive showed nothing reasonable to identify the show before justifying the notability. However, if we have this show on database, e.t.c., there is likely an option to accept, and WP:BLAR to a good list.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 02:18, 23 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Crying Down the Lane (October 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tavantius was:

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For articles which are what Wikipedia would consider notable, see The Secret Night Caller or Cookie (film). I'd encourage you to use the British Newspaper Archive or Newspaper.com, which should have some info on the miniseries.

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Tavantius (talk) 18:42, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Strange Experiences (October 30)

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Snowman304|talk 03:13, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Murder Most English: A Flaxborough Chronicle (October 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Pokelego999 were:

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Reception is entirely uncited. The bulk of the article is additionally primary citations, with very few sources showing notability. Please add more coverage from secondary, reliable sources that help demonstrate the subject's notability.

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Has one ever considered Magneton? Pokelego999 (talk) 15:58, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Candida (1961 TV play) (November 9)

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AntientNestor (talk) 11:25, 9 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Snowdropper has been accepted

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Strange Experiences (November 23)

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Poorly written, poorly sourced. No article should include the line "Some of the episodes can also easily be found on YouTube as well."

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Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 00:24, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Should I remove the word some. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 16:20, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Belonging (TV Play) has been accepted

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Your submission at Articles for creation: The Reprieve (November 29)

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Only sourced with IMdB.

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I dream of horses (Hoofprints) (Neigh at me) 03:01, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Everyday Readers (December 1)

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:22, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Kitty Clive (TV play). Thanks! RangersRus (talk) 23:46, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Across a Crowded Room (TV play) (December 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tesleemah was:

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The two references added are not enough to ascertain the General notability guideline for this film. You can check archives and check books for independent sources seeing this movie is from 1978.

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Tesleemah (talk) 12:57, 4 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Strange Experiences (December 9)

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Still uses unreliable sources and still says "episodes can be found on YouTube as well"

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Ktkvtsh (talk) 00:56, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Candida (1961 TV play) (December 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AntientNestor was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Candida (play) instead.

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Covered in "Later productions" section

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AntientNestor (talk) 08:32, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the 1961 TV movie by the BBC. Matthew John Drummond (talk) 12:01, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've linked to the existing article, above: "The BBC adaptation Candida […] a 90 Minute TV play in 1961 for BBC Television".--AntientNestor (talk) 14:51, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Bristol Entertainment (December 10)

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The cited sources are quite short and provide little information about the show. I recommend finding reviews and in-depth coverage of the show other than simple listings.

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Ca ^{talk to me!} 14:57, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Strange Experiences (December 14)

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 12:08, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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