Talk:Snow (2003 video game)

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Review: August 4, 2015. (Reviewed version).

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Did you know... that the producers of the visual novel Snow were influenced by Key?

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Reviewer: ProtoDrake (talk · contribs) 21:26, 30 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this in a couple of days. Looking forward to it. --ProtoDrake (talk) 21:26, 30 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Here's what jumped out at me.

"Snow follows a branching plot line with multiple endings, and depending on the decisions that the player makes during the game, the plot will progress in a specific direction." - Leaving the fact that it isn't referenced (this kind of story structure is something of a given), I feel it might be better suited to the plot section. But that's just a suggestion.
"On July 25, 2003, a 192-page art book called Snow Art Works was released by Paradigm, containing story and character explanations, images from the visual novel, and more." - The "and more" bit sounds rather like a sales pitch. Please adjust it to be more neutral.
All the Amazon refs need their urls updating and/or archiving. Archiving the online references is highly advisable if possible.

That's it really. Aside from that, it seems alright. Once these issues are addressed, or I see something else, then it's good to go. --ProtoDrake (talk) 08:36, 3 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Issues addressed

I think that I fixed the main issues with the article, for the most part. Is the article good to go now? Also, the review was really helpful, thanks for your time!

--GIR556 (talk) 22:49, 3 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Yep, good to go. Nice work. --ProtoDrake (talk) 07:47, 4 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]