Talk:Portal Stories: Mel
Appearance
![]() | Portal Stories: Mel has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: September 10, 2024. (Reviewed version). |
This is the talk page for discussing improvements to the Portal Stories: Mel article. This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject. |
Article policies
|
Find video game sources: "Portal Stories: Mel" – news · newspapers · books · scholar · JSTOR · free images · free news sources · TWL · NYT · WP reference · VG/RS · VG/RL · WPVG/Talk |
![]() | This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|
![]() | Prism Studios was nominated for deletion. The discussion was closed on 16 October 2021 with a consensus to merge. Its contents were merged into Portal Stories: Mel. The original page is now a redirect to this page. For the contribution history and old versions of the redirected article, please see its history; for its talk page, see here. |
GA Review
[edit]GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Portal Stories: Mel/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 18:54, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 05:58, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Infobox
- Should mention and source the engine
- I've removed it because it's not backed up by reliable sources.
Gameplay
- I'd recommend making a little clearer that Mel was a Valve concept reused for a fan work
Done
Reception
- "Reviewers commended the game's voice acting and music. Hilliard and Hanson were unappealed by the voice acting." This feels a little off. Should tweak to avoid using "unappealed," and switch it so that the first line of this part of the reception here matches the introductory line of reviewers commending the voice acting and/or music.
- I'd consider tweaking the Reception section a bit to make it flow a little more smoothly, and maybe consider paraphrasing a little more. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 20:20, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Done I've tweaked the reception. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 21:41, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Spotcheck
Hi @Cukie Gherkin:. When do you plan on continuing the review? I've also addressed all of your comments at Talk:Portal Revolution/GA1. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 18:38, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
All right, review done. Passed - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 18:59, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
Categories:
- Wikipedia good articles
- Video games good articles
- GA-Class video game articles
- Low-importance video game articles
- WikiProject Video games articles
- GA-Class Internet culture articles
- Low-importance Internet culture articles
- WikiProject Internet culture articles
- GA-Class science fiction articles
- Low-importance science fiction articles
- WikiProject Science Fiction articles
- GA-Class United States articles
- Low-importance United States articles
- GA-Class United States articles of Low-importance
- WikiProject United States articles