Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests

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On this page, you can request that the Guild of Copy Editors copy-edit specific articles.

Instructions for requesters

To make a request, remove any existing {{copy edit}} tags from the article, then click this button and follow the instructions:

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To make a request, add your article, using the following format, to the bottom of this page:

===[[Articlename]]===

Your comments ~~~~

Please remove any existing {{copy edit}} tags from the article to avoid edit conflicts during the copy edit.

Please note:

No request by an unregistered editor will be accepted unless the IP has done significant work on the article. Drive-by IP requests already on the list may be declined by any editor.
The average waiting time is two or so months. Please be patient and feel free to improve your requested article while you wait.
If you plan to nominate the article for good article, A-class or featured article status, please wait until the copy edit is complete before nominating it.
Having your article copy edited by our team does not guarantee that the prose will be considered acceptable during any of the above reviews.
You may have up to two open requests at any one time. This is enforced so that every request can have a fair chance of being fulfilled within a reasonable period.

Requests may be declined if the article is:

in the Draft or User namespaces, or is awaiting review at Wikipedia:Articles for creation;
unstable, undergoing rapid development, the venue for an ongoing edit war, or otherwise not yet suitable for copy editing.

Instructions for copy editors

Once you have accepted a request, it may be helpful to add a section to the article's Talk page explaining that you will be copy-editing the article and that other editors are welcome to post questions and comments for you while you are doing so. Remember to add another note when you are done.
Please ensure that you are familiar with the Wikipedia Manual of Style and the expectations for editing for the GOCE outlined in our Step by Step guide. The simplified Manual of Style is here. A number of national varieties of English are present throughout the encyclopedia, and no one variety is preferred. Keep spelling and date formatting consistent within an article.
When you accept a request, place an indented {{Working}} template immediately beneath the request and sign your post with four tildes (~~~~) so other copy editors know not to accept it.
Accept only one request at a time.
Articles that are potential Featured Article candidates should be handled by experienced editors.
If you have accepted a request but cannot fulfill it for any reason, please amend it with either:
- a note of the sections you have completed so someone else can complete the copy edit, or;
- a suitable template: {{Not done}}, {{Partly done}}, or Abandoned (not a template!). Please make a good-faith effort to complete a copyedit; excessive use of the "Partly done" template does little (or nothing) to reduce the backlog.
- If the article is unstable, experiencing rapid development, an ongoing edit war or apparent ownership issues, open a discussion on Requests talk to inform project coordinators.
- Acceptances that appear to have been abandoned will be checked after a reasonable period, usually one week after the timestamp. In cases of complete inactivity we will ask for an update on your talk page. If no response is received within one further week, the {{Working}} template will be removed so other editors may complete the copy edit.
When you have completed a request, add the template {{Done}} below the request and sign your post with four tildes (~~~~) and a bot will archive it in about 24 hours. In limited circumstances (breakdowns etc.), you can add the details of the request to the archive page then remove the request here by blanking the subsection. Do not delete the original request without archiving it.
Please consider adding the templates {{GOCE|user={{subst:REVISIONUSER}}|date={{subst:date}}}} on the talk page of articles you have copy edited and {{GOCEtb|article=Insert article name|sign=~~~~}} to the talk page of the requester.

Instructions for coordinators

Stale requests marked as "Working": Acceptances that appear to have been abandoned should be checked for activity after a reasonable period, usually one week after the timestamp. In cases of complete inactivity, a coordinator should ask for an update on the copy editor's talk page. Write "Asked X for update on talk page" below the "Working" line on the Requests page. If no response is received within one further week, the {{Working}} template should be removed so that other editors may complete the copy edit.
Quality control: Articles from the Requests page that are completed by newer editors should be reviewed for quality by a coordinator, time permitting. The top priority is to review articles that are FA candidates; the second priority, GA and DYK candidates.

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August 2024

1964 New York World's Fair

This page was promoted to Good Article status recently, but I'd like to nominate it for FAC. I would greatly appreciate a copyedit in case there were any issues I missed. Thanks in advance. – Epicgenius (talk) 14:06, 29 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Working Baffle☿gab 00:46, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

September 2024

80's Ladies

Wanted to improve the writing for this article before it gets re-nominated into the Good Article Nomination (GAN). This article was nominated before but did not pass due to errors in grammar and wording that were not well written at that time. I finished fixing those issues brought up by the reviewer, but I still believe some prose and grammar checks need to be made. Rephrasing is done well and accurately. HereIGoAgain (talk) 09:57, 1 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Partly done I have only done until before the "Music and lyrics" section. Mox Eden (talk) 11:53, 18 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Working. – Jonesey95 (talk) 17:13, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

SS United States

Completely rewrote article over the past few months, and am currently working for an ACR as the article view count has spiked dramatically due to it being in national news. I'd appreciate another pair of eyes looking the article over for grammar issues and flow.

Best, GGOTCC (talk) 19:08, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The Hours (novel)

Should be fairly straightforward. Seems like most of the article is just a copied edit summary. Copyedit will involve deleting most of the plot summary. Catalyzzt (talk) 13:12, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Shaparak Khorsandi

Potential FAC, so I'd be happy to receive any general suggestions for improvement, alongside the copy edit. Thank you. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 23:00, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Kyo Kusanagi

This is an old GA I made in the past and expanded it with real world information while tonning down the in-universe info. I don't plan to make it FA but I believe its prose needs some touching.Tintor2 (talk) 23:12, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Working Mox Eden (talk) 16:47, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done Mox Eden (talk) 23:57, 16 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Me at the zoo

Failed FAC. Needs restructuring + grammatical fixes. Post-copyedit feedback is appreciated. Thanks, TWOrantula^TM (enter the web) 03:24, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TrademarkedTWOrantula I am ready to take on this. Could you clarify if you need a CE or a CE review? ~/Bunnypranav:<ping> 15:51, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Both would be good. TWOrantula^TM (enter the web) 15:56, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sorry I cannot do this, sorry for bugging you and this is free if anyone else wants to take over. ~/Bunnypranav:<ping> 13:15, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No worries! TWOrantula^TM (enter the web) 15:36, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Magic: The Gathering rules

The article went through a major cleanup & restructuring after its 4th AfD (I participated in the article rewrite). It then failed as a GAN with the only reviewer saying: The article needs a pretty major copyedit to be written readable for someone not already completely familiar with the game. Any help would be appreciated! Sariel Xilo (talk) 16:52, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Tom Clancy's The Division 2

The article is in need of in-depth copyediting. Thank you! OceanHok (talk) 15:02, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Kanifing

(DYK) I nominated Kanifing for a DYK, and the reviewer noted that the article may have issues with close paraphrasing. The reviewer suggested I take it here so others can help fix these issues. (Pinging the reviewer, Chipmunkdavis.) — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 16:20, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On hold; hi @Vigilantcosmicpenguin:, copyright problems should be dealt with before a copy-edit takes place. If only part of the article is closely paraphrased, please identify the (sub-)section(s) using {{Close paraphrasing}} so a copy-editor knows where to work. If text is close enough to the original to be a copyright violation, it should be removed and the revisions deleted via {{Copyvio-revdel}}. Discuss at REQ talk. Baffle☿gab 20:20, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Pinging Chipmunkdavis again since they are the one who alerted me of the close paraphrasing issues. CMD, could you add the tags in the relevant sections? I want to make sure the article is tagged accurately. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧 (talk | contribs) 21:47, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your note, Vigilantcosmicpenguin, my concerns have now been dealt with and I've removed my hold notice. Cheers, Baffle☿gab 03:57, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The King of Fighters '96

Potential for GA (GAN).Tintor2 (talk) 22:27, 18 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Guna Caves rescue

Rewrite per grammar rules. Remove tag at top when done. DareshMohan (talk) 03:56, 25 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Bedok MRT station

I would like it to be a GAN and I think its biggest problem might be its grammar and wording. The article isn't long IMO. Thanks! Please ping me so that I get notified of your response. Imbluey2 02:01, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Diesel exhaust

Tagged as needing copyedit. Important because it is so bad for health. Chidgk1 (talk) 18:24, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Working TNM101 (chat) 11:42, 16 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Forests in Turkey

Failed GAN, partly because needs copyedit. I hope to nominate it again later this year. If you spot any other problems please tag them with “cn”, “clarify” etc. If you don’t understand a sentence please let me know, because I think we need to assume a typical reader has very little previous knowledge of the subject. Please could you make the article “flow” better, as I think I am weak on that. Chidgk1 (talk) 07:07, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

United States presidential elections in Oklahoma

United States presidential elections in Oklahoma. During its FLC another user noted prose issues. I felt that it was fine and was hoping for a copy edit to fix these issues Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 20:28, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

October 2024

Vaanam

Potential GA (GAN). Fix grammar. DareshMohan (talk) 09:57, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Legends of Tomorrow season 3

Failed GAN working to get this up to GA. This is my second request I'm just getting into the que ASAP. Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 03:36, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Flying saucer

Reworked the article and will nominate at GAN in the future, Rjjⁱⁱⁱ (talk) 00:36, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Battle of Thorgo

This article needs copy-edit for sentence structure and concision as per talk page outcome. Thanks Rahim231 (talk) 12:10, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ambivalence (Neon Genesis Evangelion episode)

For a GAN.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 12:05, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Artist Quamrul Hassan Road

Newly-created article about a street. A short article, needs copyedit. Mehedi Abedin 13:53, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

An Evening with Silk Sonic

For GAN. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:38, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Jill Valentine

Old FA undergoes a lot of changes, so It might need to be carefully copyedited I think. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 06:09, 12 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Adrar stadium

I was recommended to submit a request for a copy edit for a stadium article I upgraded from a stub to B Class and a GA review. I would appreciate a peer looking over my work to give some future suggestions. Cltjames (talk) 05:32, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

1918–1920 New York City rent strikes

(PR) Hi! I'm requesting a copyedit for the page 1918–1920 New York City rent strikes to cleanup any grammar I missed, fix tone and create a more cohesive piece overall. Its somewhat of a weak point for me. As the main editor of the page I'm more then happy to answer any questions about the history to clarify any ambiguity in the article or general questions of any kind. Thanks so much! LoomCreek (talk) 19:03, 13 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Pennsylvania Turnpike

Pennsylvania Turnpike has gotten massively bloated with excessive info. It also has a lot of one-sentence paragraphs and sections where several sentences in a row begin with "In (year)...". Article was recently delisted from GA due to these concerns. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 18:47, 15 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Madoc

The article was recently updated with a copyedit and expansion. Would someone please take the time for a professional copyedit, please and thanks. Cltjames (talk) 00:12, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Eternal Blue (album)

Going to try for another go at FAC soon, but I just added or changed a lot of content to Composition and Critical reception, respectively. mftp dan ^oops 02:44, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Steve (Minecraft)

This GA article would be improved if it was copyedited. 🍕BP!🍕 (🔔) 04:35, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Bo's Coffee

A coffee shop article from which I'm trying to fix (not for any reason or anything). I also went here a few times. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:42, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Bukit Brown Cemetery

Hello, I would like to get this article to GA status. My first GAN was failed and the reviewer recommended that I submit the article for copy editing, thanks. Actuall7 (talk) 03:04, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Land reform in interwar Yugoslavia

Hi, I plan to make Land reform in interwar Yugoslavia a GAN and I believe the article would benefit from a copyedit. Thanks!--Tomobe03 (talk) 15:17, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Soft Machine

This article is in dire need of a copyedit to remove fancruft and to present it in a much more neutral note. Greatly appreciate your help! Karst (talk) 14:41, 23 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Into the Light: The Solo Albums

Copy edit needed as this page is being considered to be on the GA nominee (GAN). Anything helps! HereIGoAgain (talk) 12:04, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Eat Bulaga!

Hi! Please help me to fix this article because i want to nominate this on Featured Article (FAC). Royiswariii (talk) 05:51, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Note: The requester has been blocked for account sharing. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 03:25, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for noting this, @Tenryuu:. That user has requested an unblock, saying they were joking about sharing the account. I think we can agf for now but if the block is upheld, please put the request on hold and post at REQ talk. Cheers, Baffle☿gab 07:21, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Update: The requester's account has now been unblocked. AGF and carry on. Baffle☿gab 08:38, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Clutha River

A New Zealand article I'm involved in that could see some copyediting help. Alexeyevitch^(talk) 09:26, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Pooja Gandhi

Article tone is very promotional any all the Indie film content is unsourced. DareshMohan (talk) 07:24, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Introjection (Neon Genesis Evangelion episode)

For a future GAN.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 21:59, 29 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Kannum Kannum Kollaiyadithaal

Highly unsourced. DareshMohan (talk) 06:20, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Tropical Storm Talas (2017)

Another GA article I made. Tried my best to de-fluff it but I think copy-editors do it the best. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:22, 31 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

November 2024

Battle of Chunj

I want to submit the article for a GAN and a copyedit would improve the article, as said in peer review. Thanks! Rahim231 (talk) 06:07, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Frostpunk

The article is in need of in-depth copyediting. Thank you!. OceanHok (talk) 10:07, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Bejeweled (video game)

For FAC. Lazman321 (talk) 19:28, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Charles the Bold

Second request. For GAN. Thanks Amir Ghandi (talk) 10:52, 4 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Growing Up (The Linda Lindas album)

To advance towards FA status (FAC). Thanks!!! Sam S (talk) 03:40, 5 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Selected Ambient Works Volume II

For a GAN. 💽 LunaEclipse 💽 🌹 ⚧ ^{(CALL ME IF YOU GET LOST)} 14:17, 7 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Coraline's Curious Cat Trail

Requesting a copy edit of Good article nominee (GAN) Coraline's Curious Cat Trail. Thanks! --Another Believer _(Talk) 01:12, 9 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Temporary National Representation

I plan to make the Temporary National Representation article a GAN, but I believe the article would benefit from a copyedit to improve its prose. Cheers. --Tomobe03 (talk) 15:48, 10 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Veiqia

I'm working towards a FA nomination (FAC) for veiqia (tattooing practice in Fiji) and have just competed a copy edit myself, but I would be really grateful if another editor has time and interest to look for things I may have missed Lajmmoore (talk) 11:51, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Worked on this for style, punctuation, smooth English reading and general cleanup. Consider it good and ready to be blessed by a more senior copy editor of the GOCE. Here.it.comes.again (talk) 04:18, 16 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sultanate of Bijapur

Would like some copyediting done to fix any unclearness or poor wording in the prose. For a future renomination for GA (GAN). Thanks. Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 14:45, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Kiruko

Small article with potential for a GAN but I'm confused with how writing pronouns as the character is the first one I ever wrote who happened to have a change of gender in the narrative.Tintor2 (talk) 01:30, 17 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]