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AfC notification: Draft:Greta Risley has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Greta Risley. Thanks! -- NotCharizard ^🗨 16:44, 27 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Greta Risley (July 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Draft reads like a summary, which is less of an encyclopedic content.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 16:48, 27 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, SisterPhraed! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 16:48, 27 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Greta Risley has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Greta Risley. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 18:32, 27 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Greta Risley has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Greta Risley. Thanks! Youknow? (talk) 07:10, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Greta Risley has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Greta Risley. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 13:25, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Greta Risley has been accepted

Greta Risley, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

Atlantic306 (talk) 21:49, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

July 2024

Hello, I'm AntiDionysius. I wanted to let you know that one or more external links you added have been removed because they seemed to be inappropriate for an encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page, or take a look at our guidelines about links. Thank you. AntiDionysius (talk) 23:07, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks - actually I removed one also . . . I was just trying to figure out how to add external links. The one I just added is to Broadway World, and includes information about performances in some musicals that are mentioned in the article - I hope it's OK. SisterPhraed (talk) 23:20, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Greta Risley

Hi, regarding the GenealogyBank references, can you give the details of the newspaper articles to each reference such as the name of the newspaper article, the newspaper that published it, the author and date of publication. Advice can be found at WP:REFB, regards Atlantic306 (talk) 20:08, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your message - I'm working on it now! SisterPhraed (talk) 20:31, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]