User talk:Klange2000

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Happy editing! —Alalch E. 19:46, 7 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Try out the VisualEditor! It will help you format citations. You're not doing it properly by adding simple urls and typing in the numbers manually :)
Cheers —Alalch E. 19:47, 7 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

There's some a bit more technical information here: Help:Footnotes. Check out the template documentation too (citations are templates): Template:Cite web. —Alalch E. 19:51, 7 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

If you're wondering what this was about, I noticed later that it was an error – sorry!

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Joy Bus (April 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Needs notability outside the Phoenix area.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:04, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Klange2000! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! AngusW🐶🐶F (bark • sniff) 17:04, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Jennifer Caraway

Hello, Klange2000. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Jennifer Caraway, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 19:01, 4 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Jennifer Caraway

Hello, Klange2000. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Jennifer Caraway".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Hey man im josh (talk) 18:19, 4 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Joy Bus (October 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Timtrent were:

This is a wonderful local charity, redolent of many other wonderful local charities. Thus it would be rude, except in Wikipedia terms, to call it run of the mill. In Wikipdia terms, however, that is what it is.

That "Jennifer Caraway received the Phoenix Chamber ATHENA Businesswoman of the Year Award" is notability for her, not the organisation, even if she is at its helm.

Sometimes, however worthy an organisation is, it lacks notability in a Wikipedia sense. Unless sources can be found that are outside the local area I have doubts that it can proceed further.

While searching for additional and more useful references it may be worth a precis of the article to limit the welter of local sources, and also addressing "delivery.[13][14][15][16]" which is a prime example of WP:CITEKILL. Instead we need one excellent reference per fact asserted. If you are sure it is beneficial, two, and at an absolute maximum, three. A fact you assert, once verified in a reliable source, is verified. More is gilding the lily. Please choose the very best in each case of multiple referencing for a single point and either drop or repurpose the remainder.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just brief mentions about the subject or routine announcements)
reliable
secondary
strictly independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet all four of these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 10:43, 23 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:The Joy Bus

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:05, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]