User talk:Jivesh boodhun/Archive 16
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Little question...
Hey Jivesh, I'm curious about something... I'm currently fixing the issues on the GA review of "Overprotected", and the reviewer is claiming that Amazon is unreliable. Is this true? - Saulo Talk to Me 16:37, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
- I agree. The reviewer believe that "release dates and other such information on Amazon is frequently wrong." And I said "There is no proof that 'release dates and other such information on Amazon is frequently wrong', since a single/album is released in several formats on different dates. These dates are provided by the labels. Plus, the album wasn't sold through iTunes since it had a minor release. I have changed the source, but you have no argument on proving that Amazon is unreliable." - Saulo Talk to Me 16:44, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
Come get slayed
at my talk page. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 15:11, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
Welcome to the 2012 WikiCup
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Sick
I just heard a sick remix of "Best Thing I Never Had" at the shopping center. (I-I-I-I wanted you bad-bad-bad... lol.) Almost as good as the "Pumped Up Kicks" dubstep remix. This year will be off to a good start. Our FM radio was counting down 2011 hits, and no surprise "Rolling in the Deep" was number one. That's not even a 2011 single. xD —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 00:36, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
Happy New Year!
File:Happy new year 2012.jpg | Happy New Year! |
Wishing you nothing but the best in 2012. God bless you throughout the new year. Ben•TalkThatTalk2me 01:40, 1 January 2012 (UTC) |
- Thanks. Same to you. :) Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:33, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
IRC
I'm on IRC at the moment. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 09:34, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
:/
What have I done? lol Calvin • Watch n' Learn 15:38, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol. You are not supposed to create your own page. :P Jivesh1205 (Talk)
- It shouldn't say to follow the link where instructions are then lol. Calvin • Watch n' Learn
- Yours is still a red link. See mine above :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:43, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
- Guys that is a mistake on the bot's part. I fixed the page. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 17:51, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yours is still a red link. See mine above :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:43, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
- It shouldn't say to follow the link where instructions are then lol. Calvin • Watch n' Learn
Wikilove
Happy New Year! | |
I wish you a Happy New Year and hope that everything goes swimmingly for you in 2012 :). Calvin • Watch n' Learn 00:03, 2 January 2012 (UTC) |
- Thanks Calvin. Very nice of you. I wish you the same. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 05:31, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
2012 GOCE coordinatorship
Hi Jivesh boodhun! I'd like to express my appreciation for your vote for me during the 2012 GOCE coordinatorship election. During the next 12 months, I will be looking forward to your input on how I can perform my role, so please be brutally honest regarding my actions.
Regards, and have a wonderful new year! --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 01:04, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Sure. Thanks and same to you Jivesh1205 (Talk) 05:32, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Hey
I have a crisis with SOS lol. I don't know what to do with the composition section. No critics cited a genre and there is no information on musicnotes :/. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- What information exactly you want? Tell me, then I will do my magic Google search for you. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:46, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- I have some sources on the talk page. But my problem is that I don't think there is very much to talk about. And yes it is very late here haha. 2am. I am going to sleep when the film I am watching goes off, which is soon lol. But I will be up in 6 hours. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:48, 2 January 2012 (UTC) 'And in case you can't tell which sections I have c/e, I have done the Background and development, Release and Critical reception sections. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:53, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Go to bed for now. When you wake up, I will have some stuffs for you hopefully. I will do my best. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:53, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol okay thanks. If I had some genres and musicnotes info to work with, it would be okay. But I don't know really know what to write with just those 4 sources, because that is not a lot. See you in 6 hours. I will be up, because I want to sit in the sun lol. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:57, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Don't worry. Goodnight. P.S I have began to adore (not love but adore) CKB. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:58, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- So do I. It's her best ballad vocal performance to date. Goodnight. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 07:01, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- It is. And she looks like a Goddess in the video. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 07:02, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- So do I. It's her best ballad vocal performance to date. Goodnight. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 07:01, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Don't worry. Goodnight. P.S I have began to adore (not love but adore) CKB. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:58, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol okay thanks. If I had some genres and musicnotes info to work with, it would be okay. But I don't know really know what to write with just those 4 sources, because that is not a lot. See you in 6 hours. I will be up, because I want to sit in the sun lol. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:57, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Go to bed for now. When you wake up, I will have some stuffs for you hopefully. I will do my best. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:53, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- I have some sources on the talk page. But my problem is that I don't think there is very much to talk about. And yes it is very late here haha. 2am. I am going to sleep when the film I am watching goes off, which is soon lol. But I will be up in 6 hours. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:48, 2 January 2012 (UTC) 'And in case you can't tell which sections I have c/e, I have done the Background and development, Release and Critical reception sections. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:53, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Have you made maximum use of this? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 08:03, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- From About.com - "S.O.S." borrows key elements from Soft Cell's 1981 single "Tainted Love".
- From AllMusic - (To be used as an explanation to add something to the above) "SOS" is a sexy club tune that bites the bleepy riff from Soft Cell's.
- From NY Times - (Again as an explanation) recycled the beat from Soft Cell's version of Tainted Love
- From About.com 2 : pounding tune --> pounding beat or dance-oriented, Instrumental sample from Soft Cell's "Tainted Love" provides the hook of SOS, its Caribbean lilt <-- influence.
- From IGN - contemporary pop laced R&B flavorings
- From Sputnikmusic - SOS for the most part is a good mix of Rihanna’s “Pon De Replay” like rhythms, and Soft Cell’s synth-pop clamour of chords
- From PopMatters : Rihanna’s layered vocals, Lyrically, SOS is a classic tale of girl-sees-boy, girl-falls-head-over-heels, girl-dreams-of-boy-so-much-she-loses-herself, girl-sings-catchy-pop-song-about-boy, girl-sells-lots-of-records.
- Entertainment Weekly : screams '80s
- Notes: How dare you tell me there's not enough information? :D I am searching for more. Have you completed this? You have missed an important point which can be used as an introductory line. And is that Beyonce thing really a comparison? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 08:27, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- ALLMUSIC Genre and Styles
- VIBE MAGAZINE Some interesting information which I am not able to copy-paste. It's a book.
- THE WASHINGTON POST clearly specifies the line sampled - you are lucky to have a source writing about the line
- USA TODAY Maybe for reception and it also specifies it is a dance track
- THE GUARDIAN reception
- ROLLING STONE huge dancehall pop hit last year, "Pon De Replay," was savvy and sexy, and her new smash, "SOS," is even more so. Singing a snaky Destiny's Child-like melody around synth riffs and machine beats from Soft Cell's Eighties classic "Tainted Love," Rihanna proves America still appreciates clever pop when it hears it. Like her filler-packed debut album, this similar but superior follow-up doesn't deliver anything else as ingenious as its lead single: Lightweight dancehall and R&B jams lack the single's ear-bending boldness.
Jivesh1205 (Talk) 08:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Extra(s)
- Lol. Just seen this. Thank you. And I said above that I had only c/e the Background and development, Release and Critical reception sections, not the Composition section lol. Do you really think that I wrote that? Haha. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 14:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Hey Jivesh. I have removed Talk:Fotos Y Recuerdos/GA1 from your submissions page- it looks like a good, thorough review, so you will be able to claim points later, but you can't claim points until the review is closed. See it through to the end, and then you can claim the points. If you have any questions, please contact me on my talk page. Thanks, J Milburn (talk) 13:57, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Great. I'm not going to bother anymore.
Once again, I was just saying what I felt about something, but it has been taken as an offence and personal criticism. I don't think I'm going to bother making an effort to talk to other's so much on here now or leave suggestions for improvements on articles, because it doesn't seem to get me anywhere and people think I am being personal against them. It's obvious people think my opinion is not valid. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 14:41, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Calvin are you here? Please reply. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:54, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah I am here. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 14:55, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Calvin, why did you leave that message there? Lol. Hey do you know what is the climax of a song? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:56, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Because I always talk to you about things? The climax is when the song reaches it crescendo. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 14:59, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh no. I meant why did you leave that message on WBT page? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:01, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Where else am I mean't to leave a message about the song? I just raised a few concerns but it has been taken rather personally. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 15:02, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Calvin, it happens. Lol. Don't you do the same when I say something about Rihanna. but Calvin, I think there is a problem with your screen resolution. I think it tends to show things bigger than they really are. Which resolution do you use? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:05, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- No, he's right. The lead of that article is huge. The Commerical performance section reads bit like a WP:CHARTTRAJ. The synopsis looks fine though. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 15:07, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) No, I don't take offence to something, revert someones edits then ignore them on my talk page. On my Macbook, which is a smaller screen than my other laptop, but the text is actually quite small. Anyway, I really need to go and get ready. And see, I am right, per Penguin. Just like how I was right on Rehab, but no one listened until someone else pointed out that I am right. See you soon maybe. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 15:09, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- I never said you are wrong. I only asked if you also never get like that when I say something about Rihanna, right? Calvin, let it be. Come back soon. As I see, you are always putting clothes on. :P Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:12, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) No, I don't take offence to something, revert someones edits then ignore them on my talk page. On my Macbook, which is a smaller screen than my other laptop, but the text is actually quite small. Anyway, I really need to go and get ready. And see, I am right, per Penguin. Just like how I was right on Rehab, but no one listened until someone else pointed out that I am right. See you soon maybe. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 15:09, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- No, he's right. The lead of that article is huge. The Commerical performance section reads bit like a WP:CHARTTRAJ. The synopsis looks fine though. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 15:07, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Calvin, it happens. Lol. Don't you do the same when I say something about Rihanna. but Calvin, I think there is a problem with your screen resolution. I think it tends to show things bigger than they really are. Which resolution do you use? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:05, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Where else am I mean't to leave a message about the song? I just raised a few concerns but it has been taken rather personally. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 15:02, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh no. I meant why did you leave that message on WBT page? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:01, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Because I always talk to you about things? The climax is when the song reaches it crescendo. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 14:59, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Calvin, why did you leave that message there? Lol. Hey do you know what is the climax of a song? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:56, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah I am here. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 14:55, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Lol. Goodbye. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 15:17, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Goodbye Calvin. Enjoy. :)) Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:18, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Enjoy the Orlando fireworks, lol. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 15:21, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Can you?
Can you check on this, tell me what you think about it and give a rough c/e? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 11:08, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Okay. I would have preferred if you wrote Check on It. :P Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:15, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Oops!... I Did It Again !... hehe :) Thanks ... — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 11:18, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:23, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks :)! Good overall? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 11:26, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Very good. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:27, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks :)! Good overall? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 11:26, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Done. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:23, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Oops!... I Did It Again !... hehe :) Thanks ... — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 11:18, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- Facebook please. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 14:13, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
- The same as above :D ! — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 16:18, 29 December 2011 (UTC)
- Do you think that this could be used, or in any other words is it reliable source for GA? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 10:36, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
- Anyway, let "Unfaithful", I am seeking help from Legolas from the section. Tell me, where are you celebrating tonight?:) — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 12:53, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
- Maybe this will be useful for "Umbrella". :P ... When will you be free so we can start it? — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 00:09, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
- Anyway, let "Unfaithful", I am seeking help from Legolas from the section. Tell me, where are you celebrating tonight?:) — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 12:53, 31 December 2011 (UTC)
Copy editing
Glad to run an eye over your article. At first glance it looks pretty good, but I know nothing at all about popular music and will send you a list of queries rather than wading in and rewriting. Give me 48 hours. Best wishes. Tim riley (talk) 20:07, 30 December 2011 (UTC)
- I'm a bit behind schedule, what with New Year carousings. I'll do my absolute best to give your article a thorough going-over tomorrow. Best regards. Tim riley (talk) 15:22, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
- Beginning first proper read-through. It will take me a couple of passes, I think. Report will follow soonest. (Don't bother to acknowledge receipt of this – more to come tonight or tomorrow.) Tim riley (talk) 19:28, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- I have read the article carefully, and I have very few comments to make. This sphere of music is not my area of expertise, and there are a few techical terms I didn't know which may well be perfectly straightforward to anyone consulting the article in the ordinary way of things. However, if at peer review others find the terms need explanation they will no doubt tell you soon enough. You have, in any case, been thorough in your provision of blue-links. (Some might say too thorough, as in, for example, linking "romantic drama film" as you have done, but again, this will come up at peer review when more expert eyes than mine view the article.)
- Beginning first proper read-through. It will take me a couple of passes, I think. Report will follow soonest. (Don't bother to acknowledge receipt of this – more to come tonight or tomorrow.) Tim riley (talk) 19:28, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- The article does not in my view require any significant copy-editing. The proportions of the article seem good to me, and the prose is clear and readable. My only query on that front concerns what you call the singer's "duelling nature". I am unsure if you mean "dual nature" or "conflicting nature", but "duelling" looks very odd.
- Otherwise the article looks to me to be in good shape. If you take it to peer review you can get the final polishing done before going on to FAC. – Tim riley (talk) 15:49, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
?
No I'm not mad at you. And reply about what? My love is love (talk) 14:33, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh ok. I'll do it after I finish with this. And I also love "Rock". But I don't know why it always makes me sad when I'm listening to it. And beyonceVEVO isn't available in your country? My love is love (talk) 15:06, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- But I'm sure you can find the same videos uploaded by other users. Beyonce is so unfair to me. Lol. My love is love (talk) 15:15, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- It currently has 156,153,705 views. The top comment (posted 20 hours ago, "Thumbs up if you've entered 2012 being single :D") has 220 likes. The video itself has 122,274 likes and 5,702 dislikes. Lol. I'm sure it will go over 200.000.000 by the end of the next year. And "Halo" and "Run the World" have 115,298,615 and 114,086,850 respectively. I remember that when I was watching the video for "Halo" at the beginning of 2011, it had around 80.000.000 views. My love is love (talk) 15:22, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yep - 156,153,705 views. My love is love (talk) 15:31, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. Relased: October 13, 2008. Vevo: October 2, 2009. And why did they do that? It would have been one of the most watched videos on YouTube then. Now it doesn't have a chance. My love is love (talk) 15:38, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Believe me, I understood what you were trying to say. 500.000.000 views!!!!!! My love is love (talk) 15:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, they also did the same thing with 1+1 and Dance for You. The video for Dance for You here has 1,280,928 views and the one on VEVO has 8,237,671 views. She should have kept her father as a manager. My love is love (talk) 15:57, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- OMG. She should really get her father back. And about the talk page; should I remove the messages???? Will talk to you later. "I can't stay, I gotta go". Lol. Love that song. My love is love (talk) 16:06, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Sure about the talk page. And what do you want me to comment on the GA? About the thing with Amazon right? My love is love (talk) 19:29, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- OK, but Amazon is reliable. I mean it wasn't questioned on the FAC of Single Ladies and it is used on every article connected to music. My love is love (talk) 19:33, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Sure about the talk page. And what do you want me to comment on the GA? About the thing with Amazon right? My love is love (talk) 19:29, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- OMG. She should really get her father back. And about the talk page; should I remove the messages???? Will talk to you later. "I can't stay, I gotta go". Lol. Love that song. My love is love (talk) 16:06, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, they also did the same thing with 1+1 and Dance for You. The video for Dance for You here has 1,280,928 views and the one on VEVO has 8,237,671 views. She should have kept her father as a manager. My love is love (talk) 15:57, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Believe me, I understood what you were trying to say. 500.000.000 views!!!!!! My love is love (talk) 15:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. Relased: October 13, 2008. Vevo: October 2, 2009. And why did they do that? It would have been one of the most watched videos on YouTube then. Now it doesn't have a chance. My love is love (talk) 15:38, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yep - 156,153,705 views. My love is love (talk) 15:31, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- It currently has 156,153,705 views. The top comment (posted 20 hours ago, "Thumbs up if you've entered 2012 being single :D") has 220 likes. The video itself has 122,274 likes and 5,702 dislikes. Lol. I'm sure it will go over 200.000.000 by the end of the next year. And "Halo" and "Run the World" have 115,298,615 and 114,086,850 respectively. I remember that when I was watching the video for "Halo" at the beginning of 2011, it had around 80.000.000 views. My love is love (talk) 15:22, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- But I'm sure you can find the same videos uploaded by other users. Beyonce is so unfair to me. Lol. My love is love (talk) 15:15, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
A present
A present from me.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:01, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Saw you on Malleus's talk page. A wikipedian in Mauritius, that's a novelty. Are you interested in Mauritian topics?♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:18, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Well, he's not the only one here to have been messed about by the wikilawyers. Beyonce Knowles has quite a booty but aren't you interested in anything else? American popular culture seems to dominate the world!♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:26, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Thanks, photo is Donald Pleasance who played Ernst Stavro Blofeld.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:27, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Huge range of topics, although actors and country houses and culture of various countries tend to take most interest. I can only think of a few songs Beyonce did with Destiny's Child I'm afraid. I see you've done a lot of good work on her articles which get a lot of hits so keep it up!♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:37, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Sure by all means copy the message. I'm into blues rock and jazz myself like this (check out the voice from 2:17) and this. Probably doesn't do anything for you though!♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:44, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Some hot moves here eh♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:53, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
I didn't no. Not bad!♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:57, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
She's a very accomplished dancer I'll agree on that one! And very sexy.♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:16, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Ah I bet you wouldn't mind being Jay Z then eh?♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:27, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Yeah he's no oil painting now is he! Did you like her as Foxy Cleopatra in Austin Powers? I think she was the only cool thing about the movie with her 70s fro LOL.♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:46, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
You live in Port Louis?♦ Dr. Blofeld 19:00, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Only the capital yeah. no article on Goodlands, Mauritius. Will have to see about that. You reckon you could take a picture or two of the town and the sugar factory and upload them? And of course Sugar production in Mauritius.♦ Dr. Blofeld 19:07, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
Hey
Hey, can you please email me? Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 21:26, 2 January 2012 (UTC)
- Well, I don't have your email address and the wiki-email thing never works for me. Take mine
jivesh1205@hotmail.com
Jivesh1205 (Talk) 03:44, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
It may take a few minutes from the time the email is sent for it to show up in your inbox. You can {{You've got mail}} or {{ygm}} template. at any time by removing the
Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 15:45, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
Come
online? :) Calvin • Watch n' Learn 03:58, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 05:03, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- I'm on. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 05:07, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Give me 20 mins. I am reverting vandalism. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 05:09, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol okay. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 05:10, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- WIll you be long? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 05:45, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Shortly. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 05:47, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- WIll you be long? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 05:45, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol okay. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 05:10, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Give me 20 mins. I am reverting vandalism. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 05:09, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- I'm on. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 05:07, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- 5 mins. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:02, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
**Goes to bed**. haha. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:38, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Gooooooooooooooooo. Put your clothes on. :PPPPP Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:39, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- OMG Jivesh!!! Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:43, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol, are you screaming my name? Spare me the horror. :O Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:45, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Those conversations are not the public eyes of wikipedia! haha. Okay, I am going to bed now! Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:47, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol. Goodnight. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:53, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Those conversations are not the public eyes of wikipedia! haha. Okay, I am going to bed now! Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:47, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol, are you screaming my name? Spare me the horror. :O Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:45, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- OMG Jivesh!!! Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:43, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
- Gooooooooooooooooo. Put your clothes on. :PPPPP Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:39, 3 January 2012 (UTC)
GOCE copy edit request
Hello, Jivesh boodhun. This is a courtesy notice that the copy edit you requested for The Closer I Get to You at the Guild of Copy Editors requests page is now complete. All feedback welcome! Braincricket (talk) 08:17, 3 January 2012 (UTC) |
I Am... Yours
Actually, I added the reviews in the box. Not all because the other ones (from The Boston Globa and Eye Weekly) were very short and favorable won't work for every source. And later, can you please help me with finding sources for the charts and the release history section? My love is love (talk) 11:58, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
- Okay. Take care. My love is love (talk) 12:05, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
I started this. Can you take some photographs of the town, sugar factory and sugar fields?♦ Dr. Blofeld 12:21, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
Re:
Yes, "Honesty" #2 in International Singles Charts 2010 (2010-01-10 ~ 2010-01-16). Lucas Brígido msg 14:49, 4 January 2012 (UTC)
Hello
If you have time, please comment here. Thanks. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:58, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
Notice
I will not return until January 9, 2012 (Most probable). Jivesh1205 (Talk) 06:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
- Why? Come online? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:16, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
- I have to go now, it's late, speak to you soon. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 06:33, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
- Back. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:18, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
I have just taken a preliminary look. There seems to be a copyedit in progress; it would not be a good idea for me to start work until this is finished, so I'll wait a day or two. One point, though. As far as I know, the singer is known professionally as "Beyoncé" (I didn't even know her second name was Knowles until I read your article). Yet throughout you refer to her as "Knowles"; why is this? Other single-name singers such as Adele are referred to in relevant articles by their professional name. Brianboulton (talk) 23:51, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
- (talk page stalker) Beyoncé Knowles hasn't always been known simply as Beyoncé. It has only been since she has been a solo artist that she has referred to herself as Beyoncé. Thus, she is referred to as Knowles. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 05:47, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
- Beyonce Knowles is not only a singer. She is also an actress, entrepreneur and so on. She uses her name in full as often as she uses Beyonce. Some of her single covers even list her full name. By the way, there is no copy-edit going on. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 16:44, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
hey
What do you think of this? :). I am getting on the plane now, won't be online for at least 18 hours haha. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 21:59, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thank God that you have finally learned what is to make maximum use of a source. It's very good. B-Class. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 04:21, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I read it again. It still deserves a B-Class but don't you think half of the information here should be in CR? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 07:38, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. No, like you said for one of Beyonce's articles, you used more for the Composition than CR. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 11:13, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- You are welcome. Hmm, when did I say that? I always try to balance both. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:16, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I can't remember which article you said about, but you said you used them for the Composition instead of CR. I'm back in cold England now :(. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 11:18, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- No. And I never put critical commentary in the composition. I write it in a way so that it fits there. I don't put the critics' opinions on the vocal performance, etc. Those go in CR. Happy that you are back? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:21, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol, you did say it Jivesh, I wouldn't say otherwise. And no, it's cold and dark, and I'm tired, it's only 11:30am :/ Calvin • Watch n' Learn 11:22, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Didn't you sleep? Calvin, I don't remember saying that. Perhaps, you interpreted it wrongly. You know how obsessed I am with symmetrical sections. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:24, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- No, I couldn't sleep on the plane. Lol, you did. Are you pleased with the composition section of BC? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 11:27, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, I am but there are too many reviews there. To list some:
- No, I couldn't sleep on the plane. Lol, you did. Are you pleased with the composition section of BC? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 11:27, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Didn't you sleep? Calvin, I don't remember saying that. Perhaps, you interpreted it wrongly. You know how obsessed I am with symmetrical sections. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:24, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol, you did say it Jivesh, I wouldn't say otherwise. And no, it's cold and dark, and I'm tired, it's only 11:30am :/ Calvin • Watch n' Learn 11:22, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- No. And I never put critical commentary in the composition. I write it in a way so that it fits there. I don't put the critics' opinions on the vocal performance, etc. Those go in CR. Happy that you are back? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:21, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I can't remember which article you said about, but you said you used them for the Composition instead of CR. I'm back in cold England now :(. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 11:18, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- You are welcome. Hmm, when did I say that? I always try to balance both. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:16, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. No, like you said for one of Beyonce's articles, you used more for the Composition than CR. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 11:13, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I read it again. It still deserves a B-Class but don't you think half of the information here should be in CR? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 07:38, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Dunlevy and St. Asaph were critical of the final line, with the former labelling it as "blatant
- A reviewer for Flavour had a mixed reaction to the lyrical content, writing, "I cant exactly say it is a bad song. In fact, I will probably be singing it over the next few weeks. But at this point its like, ‘we get it – you like sex.’ Chill out about it and sing about education or something – your younger fans need more SUBSTANCE." [sic]
- continuing to write that the overtly sexual lyrics in the song earned Talk That Talk the Parental Advisory sticker
- The hottest lines on the album come nearly as an afterthought on the all-too-brief 'Birthday Cake,' produced by The-Dream. 'I know you wanna bite this/ It's so enticin'/ Nothin' else like this/ I'mma make you my bitch,' she sings. But as if the network censors had let the song run before realizing their mistake, a little over a minute into it the music fades out, just as it's getting dirty, leaving us wondering whether Rihanna really believes what she's selling on "Talk That Talk."
Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:30, 8 January 2012 (UTC) Simply move them down? And do you think I can nominate it for DYK which talks about sex? lol. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 12:23, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes for both. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:25, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I will comment on your PR soon. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:25, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
Reply
Hello friend, not really sure but I thought and I came to this conclusion. The CD album contains 3 studio musics and three remixes. So it is not a "live album." and is not a remix album. So why would contains 6 tracks is an EP. What do you think? Silencio faz bem (talk) 04:48, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
Re:
Hm... I don't think it's possible to change it. It's doing that because of the album field. — Status {talkcontribs 05:29, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
Ivy Blue Carter Has Blessed Its Presence with the World
Bout damn time! :D — Status {talkcontribs 08:10, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
A star is born
Here are the good news, no pregnant Bey anymore, now we have Blue Ivy Carter. Aunt Rihanna congrats too ;)! — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 11:24, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- She's Destiny's Child. ;-) —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 11:40, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I know. Lol. But the name freaks me out. Sasha or Tiana (rumored names) would have been epic. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:43, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I wish she was a Knowles too though. Sorry, Jay-Z. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 11:47, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Same here. I can only hope that she gets the flawless creole genes and looks of Beyonce. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:48, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- And let's hope she does not become another Cher Lloyd, Rebecca Black or Willow Smith. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 11:50, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Beyonce won't let her just like her own mom slapped her so that she does not become Madonna. :P Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:53, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Good thing. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 11:59, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Sure. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:00, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Jivesh, are you up for a huge challenge? I need a favor. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 12:07, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:09, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Considering you are really good at scanning refs, could you look through these refs (I know, there's 226 of them) and check for inconsistencies? Plz&thx. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 12:11, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:09, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Jivesh, are you up for a huge challenge? I need a favor. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 12:07, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Sure. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:00, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Good thing. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 11:59, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Beyonce won't let her just like her own mom slapped her so that she does not become Madonna. :P Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:53, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- And let's hope she does not become another Cher Lloyd, Rebecca Black or Willow Smith. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 11:50, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Same here. I can only hope that she gets the flawless creole genes and looks of Beyonce. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:48, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I wish she was a Knowles too though. Sorry, Jay-Z. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 11:47, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I know. Lol. But the name freaks me out. Sasha or Tiana (rumored names) would have been epic. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 11:43, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- If she looks like Jay, she would be just the "most beautiful" girl ever ! haha LOL ! — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 12:13, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes WP. I am starting right now. Tom, lol, we should not make such jokes. It's very bad. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:14, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. Lol guys, this is history in the making, part III. :D —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 12:15, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- You are welcome. But I did not understand the last part of your message. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:17, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- You mean jokes of honesty? Haha... I am kidding, I have no doubts that she would be pretty girl (taking all of Beyonce of course) or however, she can be ordinary one. :) Apart of these, lets health and happiness be with her whole life. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 12:17, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Jivesh: "Yes, so crazy right now. History in the making, part II". Remember? —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 12:19, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Soooooooooo well said. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:19, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- ??? :) — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 12:25, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Happy for her.--BabbaQ (talk) 15:24, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:48, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Happy for her.--BabbaQ (talk) 15:24, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- ??? :) — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 12:25, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Soooooooooo well said. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:19, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Jivesh: "Yes, so crazy right now. History in the making, part II". Remember? —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 12:19, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- You mean jokes of honesty? Haha... I am kidding, I have no doubts that she would be pretty girl (taking all of Beyonce of course) or however, she can be ordinary one. :) Apart of these, lets health and happiness be with her whole life. — Tomica1111 • Question Existing? 12:17, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- You are welcome. But I did not understand the last part of your message. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:17, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. Lol guys, this is history in the making, part III. :D —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 12:15, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes WP. I am starting right now. Tom, lol, we should not make such jokes. It's very bad. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:14, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
Halo copyedit
I have begun the copyedit, and will do it in stages. The "Release" section, however, is at present somewhat muddled; can you help by explaining the following:-
- What do you mean when you say: "Halo" was taken from a different disc of I Am... Sasha Fierce to "Diva"?
- I Am... Sasha Fierce is a dual disc album. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 04:18, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- Does that mean that two separate, different versions of I Am... Sasha Fierce were issued? Or does it mean something else? Brianboulton (talk) 17:12, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- In the second paragraph you mention an EP release on 14 April 2009, then you jump back to February 2009 for the download, forward again to 14 April for a further EP release, then back to March and so on, ending uo at 13 April. This is very confusing to the reader; you need to rearrange this material in a more logical order.
- We are supposed to group all the release dates for a country together. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 04:18, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- I don't know whose rule that is, but adopting a logical chronology would hardly affect this aspect. For example:-:
"Halo" was released on February 20, 2009 in Australia,[17] New Zealand,[18] and Canada,[19] as a two-track digital download, including a remix of "Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)". The song was made available in these countries as a digital EP, as a maxi single and as a vinyl single on April 14 2009.[20][21][22] In France, "Halo" was released as a stand-alone digital download on March 20.[23] On the same date, it was serviced digitally alongside the album version of "Diva" in mainland Europe,[24] including Germany,[25] where the song was additionally serviced as a CD single and a vinyl single on April 3 and April 12, 2009, respectively.[26][27] In the United Kingdom, a digital EP containing the album version and three remixes of "Halo" was released on April 13, 2009. A digital EP containing a radio edit and four remixes of "Halo" was later released in the US on April 14, 2009.[16]
Up to you, however; you're not obliged to do as I say. Brianboulton (talk) 17:12, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
Please post your response here, not on my talkpage. I will pick it up from here. Brianboulton (talk) 22:17, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
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- I'm done. You told me earlier on my talkpage that the article was not being copyedited, but I discover that User:Wehwalt was working at the same time as I was. We've been tripping on each other's toes. I don't know what effect this will have, but it has probably meant duplicated effort, maybe not to the article's benefit. Brianboulton (talk) 23:10, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
Halo
Some quick comments on the article:
- Needs a bit of copy-editing, but looks like you're getting help with that already
- Description for File:Ryan_tedder_one_republic_austria_3.jpg indicates that caption attribution is requested
- "with lying down with Ealy above her in the final scene" - missing a word?
- FNs 21 and 22 are the same
In general though, it's looking pretty good so far. Nikkimaria (talk) 20:19, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
S&M composition
What do you think?. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 01:03, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Aaronnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn, it is simply very good. Greatttttttt. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 04:15, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- You have really helped me with writing composition sections. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 16:55, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Aww, thanks for acknowledging this. You see how me pushing you helped you. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 16:57, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Loool. Yahhhh. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:00, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- :D. So what are you taking to FAC next? I am taking "Halo". Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:02, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I don't know. I'm just going to keep working on S&M. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:05, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Well, it's much better than before. What do you think of "Halo"? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:06, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I don't think a 4 para lead is needed. I don't see the need to talk about the change of lyrics for just two performances here. There is WP:CITEKILL twice in the composition section. "It spent almost a year on the UK Singles Chart, was at number 60 on July 9, 2010, forty-three weeks after its debut, and left the chart the following week." makes no sense. When you nominate, I will comment there. I don't want to make c/e's now because I don't think it is fair of me to help c/e then perhaps support it, as it is kind of self done. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:24, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Ok. Do what you want and I am not changing the lead. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:25, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Pleas elaborate on the citekill? Jivesh1205 (Talk)
- Ok. Do what you want and I am not changing the lead. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:25, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I don't think a 4 para lead is needed. I don't see the need to talk about the change of lyrics for just two performances here. There is WP:CITEKILL twice in the composition section. "It spent almost a year on the UK Singles Chart, was at number 60 on July 9, 2010, forty-three weeks after its debut, and left the chart the following week." makes no sense. When you nominate, I will comment there. I don't want to make c/e's now because I don't think it is fair of me to help c/e then perhaps support it, as it is kind of self done. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:24, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Well, it's much better than before. What do you think of "Halo"? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:06, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I don't know. I'm just going to keep working on S&M. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:05, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- :D. So what are you taking to FAC next? I am taking "Halo". Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:02, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Loool. Yahhhh. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:00, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Aww, thanks for acknowledging this. You see how me pushing you helped you. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 16:57, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- You have really helped me with writing composition sections. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 16:55, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
Okay, but three would be fine for an article of this length. In the composition section, there are two instances where you place four foonotes next to each other. It's kinda off putting. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:31, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- But aren't I supposed to source everything? There i s no over-linking there. "Halo" is nearly 90Kb and I think it deserves four paragraphs. It has got two different controversies associated to it. Its lyrics were changed for two important occasions, etc. It was used in the most watched Brazilian telenovela. To tell you frankly, I don't think I put a lot of useless blabla in the lead. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:35, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, but perhaps you could put two footnotes together, then prose, then the other two. I find it disruptive when there is more than 3 max. How do you find out the size of an article? And I never said that you had written useless information, I simply mean't that the lead could easily be shortened to three. To be honest, it could be shortened to three without removing anything. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:39, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- For the sources, at the end of the day, it is the same. All the sources remain as far as I understand. Can you use a sandbox for the lead? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:42, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I didn't say remove them Jivesh! I will show you what I mean, and feel free to revert. And yeah I will do it in a sandbox, look in 2 minutes on my contributions tab via my user page. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:43, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:45, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Have u looked at my sandbox yet? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:57, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, but it is not symmetrical. I think I will remove some details. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:59, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol, Jivesh. The sections vary on "symmetrical-ness" from screen to screen. I have two laptops, and on any article, they vary. They only appear symmetrical to you. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:01, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Wait. I will paste the lead in a few minutes. Aaron, the one you did was not very good to see. The third paragraph was imply giant. :P Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:03, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol, Jivesh. The sections vary on "symmetrical-ness" from screen to screen. I have two laptops, and on any article, they vary. They only appear symmetrical to you. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:01, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, but it is not symmetrical. I think I will remove some details. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:59, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Have u looked at my sandbox yet? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:57, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:45, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I didn't say remove them Jivesh! I will show you what I mean, and feel free to revert. And yeah I will do it in a sandbox, look in 2 minutes on my contributions tab via my user page. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:43, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- For the sources, at the end of the day, it is the same. All the sources remain as far as I understand. Can you use a sandbox for the lead? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:42, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, but perhaps you could put two footnotes together, then prose, then the other two. I find it disruptive when there is more than 3 max. How do you find out the size of an article? And I never said that you had written useless information, I simply mean't that the lead could easily be shortened to three. To be honest, it could be shortened to three without removing anything. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 17:39, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
Yeah I know, but it shows that three paras is acceptable. And on my screen, the third para is only one line longer than the first and second, so not that giant. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:06, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:08, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Better. Three fuller paragraphs look better than four 3 line paragraphs, which makes it look sparse. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:10, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- On my screen, they each had five lines. :D Now they have six. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:12, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Exactly, only you see it as being symmetrical. I don't. So it doesn't really matter. And how do you find out the kps of an article? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:14, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- By viewing the history. Lol. Based on the essay you gave me, S&M's lead is far too long. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:17, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- S&M literally covers what the basics of the article, it's not that long. And Music of the Sun passed GA, the first GA Rihanna album. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:46, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I could have brought the same argument for "Halo". Congrats for your first album GA. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:47, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- It is still long, and has some info I personally wouldn't include, such as all the instruments. And thanks. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:50, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Do you realize that "Halo" is 20 Kbs longer than S&M and yet you are telling me all this? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:52, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- It is still long, and has some info I personally wouldn't include, such as all the instruments. And thanks. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:50, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I could have brought the same argument for "Halo". Congrats for your first album GA. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:47, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- S&M literally covers what the basics of the article, it's not that long. And Music of the Sun passed GA, the first GA Rihanna album. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:46, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- By viewing the history. Lol. Based on the essay you gave me, S&M's lead is far too long. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:17, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Exactly, only you see it as being symmetrical. I don't. So it doesn't really matter. And how do you find out the kps of an article? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:14, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- On my screen, they each had five lines. :D Now they have six. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:12, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Better. Three fuller paragraphs look better than four 3 line paragraphs, which makes it look sparse. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:10, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:08, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
S&M is not short enough to warrant 2 paragraphs. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 19:04, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Perhaps but don't you think the lead is detailed? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 19:06, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Which? Halo or S&M. I'm going out now, see you later. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 19:08, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- S&M. I am telling you again that "Halo" is a much bigger article that "S&M". Jivesh1205 (Talk) 19:09, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Which? Halo or S&M. I'm going out now, see you later. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 19:08, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Perhaps but don't you think the lead is detailed? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 19:06, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
Konnichiwa!
こんにちは Jivesh! I just finished reading "Halo" and I am amazed! It's pretty flawless now :) Another FA, isn't it? Btw, you're going to cleanup your user and user talk pages, aren't you? They are pretty huge at the moment. Take care, じゃまたね :) Novice7 (talk) 13:30, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I meant the Beyonce logos and pics, Jivesh. There are lots of 'em :) "Halo" is already of FA quality. And Konnichwa means "Hello" in Japanese. I've started learning some Japanese (can't read or write, yet lol). Novice7 (talk) 13:41, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- No! I'm not going to Japan, yet. I just love Japanese, that's it :) Novice7 (talk) 04:44, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
Sure. Do the Motion (by BoA) is one of my favourites at the moment, so is Everlasting. Goodbye Happiness (by Utada Hikaru), Come (by Namie Amuro), Falco (by Hitomi Shimatani). I know, all female singers. I do know male singer songs, but they're all very popp-y or rock-y. That's why I've not listed them :) Novice7 (talk) 05:35, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yep, "Goodbye Happiness" is amazing. Heavens, no! I love Whitney to death! I just listen to J-pop a bit more now, that's it :D Btw, here's another song: [1] :) Novice7 (talk) 05:45, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- And this was stuck in my head for a few days lol. Novice7 (talk) 05:47, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
I'm on...
... IRC. --Sp33dyphil ©hatontributions 09:52, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
Dear Jivesh i m ur old friend mukta sawant from india do u remember me just wanna say that u r the only one person who was polita to me on wikipedia and congratulation beyonce become a mother sory if u r nervous. i m gonna send u request on facebook in this two weeks. thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.202.167.6 (talk) 12:57, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- I remember you my sis. Thanks. Yes, gonna wait for the request. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:45, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
Your sis
Thanks 4 saying me your sister. Hope the luckiest sister in the world. I m having such a cool bro. btw what is your profile pic. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.202.172.214 (talk) 17:23, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- You are welcome. There is no profile pic. You have to see my album for my pic. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:27, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
Whenever
you mention a song for the first time, you are mean't to link the album and year in brackets. Look on Rihanna articles. Also, you had written out full names several times and linked them more than once in the body. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:42, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- I won't do that. It's not an obligation and in my opinion, they are unnecessary details. The reader can click on the song to get those information. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:44, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- I personally think it provides the read with the right information from where that song comes from. But anyway. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:45, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- Halo is not about Bleeding Love and the rest. It's useless to stuff the article with so many details. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:46, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- I personally think it provides the read with the right information from where that song comes from. But anyway. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:45, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
Have you ever visited india.(116.202.164.110 (talk) 12:12, 11 January 2012 (UTC))
FAC
"Help us/me put an FA icon on it" should be your motto, lol. I think it's really nice that you two are co-nominating. Best of luck. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 13:33, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- My motto is "so inspired" by SL. Lol. Thanks a lot. Just added a review. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:35, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- "If you like it then you should put a 'Support' on it"? No, just no. Or maybe
- You're reviews are everything I need and more
- I've written all over the page
- ... xD —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 13:40, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol. See what I will do in a few minutes. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:43, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- Nice. Hehe. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 13:54, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. Don't you think it's time to nominate LTWYL? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:55, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- Not yet. Maybe this March? Orane has brought up some great concerns which I will be addressing for coming weeks. I'll put it up for GOCE later this month and than it's straight to PR for a final look. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 14:30, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. Don't you think it's time to nominate LTWYL? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:55, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- Nice. Hehe. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 13:54, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- Lol. See what I will do in a few minutes. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:43, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- "If you like it then you should put a 'Support' on it"? No, just no. Or maybe
India
Have u ever visited India. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.203.74.99 (talk) 15:53, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
Jivesh i want 2 c how u looks so can u mail one of ur photo to me at muktasawant4@gmail.com — Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.203.74.99 (talk) 16:03, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
FAC tomorrow?
Read your message on Wehwalt's talk page. Why the rush? —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 19:26, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Nikki, Mags, Journalist, Brian, and some more told me it's good now and ready.So that's why. Lol. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 19:27, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I need to log off. Take care. You can reply if you want. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 19:28, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Disagree. I do not recall Nikkimaria, Orane nor Brian saying it meets FA criteria yet. They would say it's pretty damn close though, and I'd agree. I'd like to have a closer look before you nominate and I suggest strongly you reread the article over too. Just to be sure. You do not want to suffer what happened at the "Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)" FAC. Let's hope this goes more smoothly. On a lighter note, a fantastic job. You'll be racking up FAs by the looks of it. I can't even decide on my second FAC. :-) —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 19:49, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Hmm, okay. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 04:17, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- Still waiting. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:05, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- Geez, I just got home, lol. —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 18:43, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- Still waiting. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:05, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- Hmm, okay. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 04:17, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
- Disagree. I do not recall Nikkimaria, Orane nor Brian saying it meets FA criteria yet. They would say it's pretty damn close though, and I'd agree. I'd like to have a closer look before you nominate and I suggest strongly you reread the article over too. Just to be sure. You do not want to suffer what happened at the "Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)" FAC. Let's hope this goes more smoothly. On a lighter note, a fantastic job. You'll be racking up FAs by the looks of it. I can't even decide on my second FAC. :-) —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 19:49, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I need to log off. Take care. You can reply if you want. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 19:28, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
After looking through Halo (admittedly fairly quickly), I think it ought to have a much smoother run at FAC than "Put a Ring on It", but I have left one comment for you on the article's talk page that badly needs attention. Malleus Fatuorum 00:03, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
Not to foget
Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:54, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
Apologies
Sorry for just disappearing, things kinda piled up. Do you still need help with Best Thing I Never Had. AIRcorn (talk) 02:30, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
ukchartsplus.co.uk
Yes, I'm sure. They miscalculate the year-end chart positions, and don't match the official year-end charts published by OCC. WT:Record charts#UKchartsplus.co.uk has some discussion as well.—Kww(talk) 12:24, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- http://www.theofficialcharts.com/chart-news/the-top-20-biggest-selling-singles-of-2011-revealed/ and http://www.theofficialcharts.com/chart-news/the-top-20-biggest-selling-albums-of-2011-revealed/ for 2011. I don't know an online source for earlier years.—Kww(talk) 12:46, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
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Glory
What do you think about creating a DYK about "Glory". Maybe something like this:
- "that with "Glory" debuting at number 74 on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs, Jay-Z's and Beyoncé Knowles' first child, Blue Ivy Carter, became the youngest person in the history of Billboard to have a charted song?"
-But I'm afraid it's too long and it is awkward. My love is love (talk) 12:48, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
that "Glory"'s debut on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart issue dated xxx meant that Jay-Z's and Beyoncé Knowles' first child, Blue Ivy Carter, became the youngest person in the history of Billboard to have a charted song?" is fine. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:51, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
Why don't you participate in the Wiki-cup? Do you want some spicy Beyonce news? Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:52, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- OK. It's perfect. But I'm afraid that I'm going to make a mistake like I did for "Schoolin' Life". And about the spicy news; Here is the room where Blue Ivy Carter was born. And about the Cup, I don't like such things, and I know I'm never gonna win. My love is love (talk) 12:55, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
But it's nice to participate. Try-renominating SL and explain your error. Nice room. :D Anyway, the spicy news... 4 is getting re-released with new songs on February 15, 2012. And I think her label copied me here. EOT will be the next UK single. Compare what they wrote to what I wrote on the song's article. Somebody else is inspired me. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:59, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- About SL see User talk:Drmies#Hello. About 4, can you give me a link to read. About the websites, they often read Wikipedia, an just copy-paste the text. My love is love (talk) 13:12, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- So the DYK will be ignored? Those are rumors. Someone working for Columbia Records owns a blog called 4Bey. He is very reliable when it come to Beyonce news. About the copying thing, I was so surprised that Beyonce's own UK label did that. They read what I wrote. :weeps: Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:17, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Well, those 2 users told me so. And if 4 is released on February 15, 2012 with bonus songs it will be something similar with the Platinum edition of I Am... Sasha Fierce. Lol about the :Weeps:. My love is love (talk) 13:22, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- They are actually saying that it is a re-release. Beyonce has already advertise a picture on her website. A re-release means it will be something like 4'.5... new songs. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:25, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- I can't wait to hear them if it's true. And I've seen that picture on her website. My love is love (talk) 13:27, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Do you think there is anything important in this video? And wow, she was at least five months pregnant. With or without being pregnant, her dance slays that of everyone else (singers). Have you ever seen the video for Nadia Ali's "Rapture". That girl is pure 1000 *C fire. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:29, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Everything that's important in the video is added in the background section of the song. And I also think she is one of the best dancers. Shakira is right after her. And I've just watched the video, but I know that song long time ago. She's beautiful indeed. My love is love (talk) 13:35, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- She is very pretty. Yes, Shakira is indeed very good. Her hip shaking slays the one of Beyonce. But what I like abut B is that she has tried almost every type of dance in her video. She is versatile. :D I am searching for more information to put in DFY composition but I get none. I wished I had a source to reference the way she groans and moans. Hey, once "Halo" is up... You and I will nominate "Sweet Dreams". :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:42, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes I also love that she tried everything and still everything seems very good when she's doing it. I don't think you'll find more about the song because it's a bonus track. And there are still issues with "Sweet Dreams" that should be finished before its nomination. And after that I'll work on The Beyoncé Experience and The Beyoncé Experience Live to finally make a good topic for the WikiProject. My love is love (talk) 13:47, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, those articles... :P I won't touch them. Too lazy. Lol. And yes, SD is a million miles from FA level how it is right now. I think "Diva" can also be nominated some day. Nothing to lose in trying. I have already re-vamped it. What you did, helped a lot as well. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:51, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Not only "Diva"; "If I Were a Boy" and maybe "Ego" are also close. But I think that "Broken-Hearted Girl" and "Video Phone" can never become FAs. My love is love (talk) 14:03, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- I have plans to nominate IIWAB some day. Hmm, "Ego"... it seems yes, it stands a chance. VP is hopeless. I mean, it is not very complete. And BHG, actually, there is much information about its release, chart performance and critical reception, even live performances that have not been added. I wanted to work on that article for GA but Andrew did it. :( Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:06, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- "If I Were a Boy" has lots of information and it's perfect for an FA one day. The prose should be fixed and probably that's all. "Ego" also has enough information but I'm pretty sure it could be expanded. And BHG can never move from its current look because the sources in the article are everything that I could find. My love is love (talk) 14:14, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- I have plans to nominate IIWAB some day. Hmm, "Ego"... it seems yes, it stands a chance. VP is hopeless. I mean, it is not very complete. And BHG, actually, there is much information about its release, chart performance and critical reception, even live performances that have not been added. I wanted to work on that article for GA but Andrew did it. :( Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:06, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Not only "Diva"; "If I Were a Boy" and maybe "Ego" are also close. But I think that "Broken-Hearted Girl" and "Video Phone" can never become FAs. My love is love (talk) 14:03, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, those articles... :P I won't touch them. Too lazy. Lol. And yes, SD is a million miles from FA level how it is right now. I think "Diva" can also be nominated some day. Nothing to lose in trying. I have already re-vamped it. What you did, helped a lot as well. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:51, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes I also love that she tried everything and still everything seems very good when she's doing it. I don't think you'll find more about the song because it's a bonus track. And there are still issues with "Sweet Dreams" that should be finished before its nomination. And after that I'll work on The Beyoncé Experience and The Beyoncé Experience Live to finally make a good topic for the WikiProject. My love is love (talk) 13:47, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- She is very pretty. Yes, Shakira is indeed very good. Her hip shaking slays the one of Beyonce. But what I like abut B is that she has tried almost every type of dance in her video. She is versatile. :D I am searching for more information to put in DFY composition but I get none. I wished I had a source to reference the way she groans and moans. Hey, once "Halo" is up... You and I will nominate "Sweet Dreams". :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:42, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Everything that's important in the video is added in the background section of the song. And I also think she is one of the best dancers. Shakira is right after her. And I've just watched the video, but I know that song long time ago. She's beautiful indeed. My love is love (talk) 13:35, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Do you think there is anything important in this video? And wow, she was at least five months pregnant. With or without being pregnant, her dance slays that of everyone else (singers). Have you ever seen the video for Nadia Ali's "Rapture". That girl is pure 1000 *C fire. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:29, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- I can't wait to hear them if it's true. And I've seen that picture on her website. My love is love (talk) 13:27, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- So the DYK will be ignored? Those are rumors. Someone working for Columbia Records owns a blog called 4Bey. He is very reliable when it come to Beyonce news. About the copying thing, I was so surprised that Beyonce's own UK label did that. They read what I wrote. :weeps: Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:17, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
I will still try to expand it a bit more. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 17:44, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
Photos of your town
Hi, have you taken any yet?♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:06, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
A week today, that would be cool. Especially the sugar factory, the town centre/market, the main road, and view of the town from the sugar fields and of the sugar fields. Howz Miss Beyonce?♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:45, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
Awesome.♦ Dr. Blofeld 17:50, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
Ping
On a lighter note
Hi Jivesh, I hope you are well. I thought this article on Yahoo news might amuse you. :-D Cheers, Baffle gab1978 (talk) 23:44, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
Dance for You GA
Hey, congrats, Jivesh. "Dance for You" has now passed GA. Good job! Moisejp (talk) 05:06, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- I don't think I'll be able to give you any opinion tonight about whether "Halo" is ready or not. I'm a bit too sleepy to read through a whole article (LOL), especially to scrutinize one for FA worthiness. I did notice you have lots of activity and copy-editing going on with it, though. That's great, I'm sure it has come a long way. Nikkimaria seemed to think it looked relatively good. Moisejp (talk) 05:17, 9 January 2012 (UTC)
- Hi Jivesh. Good luck on your FAC! I'm sure you'll do well. As for me, I'm taking a little wiki-break to catch up on some stuff in real life. Sorry I didn't get a chance to do a final read-through of "Halo" but I'm sure with all the big-name checks and copy-edits you got, it'll go great! I'll most likely be back before your FAC is done, they always take several weeks, anyway. Take care, and talk to you again soon. Moisejp (talk) 03:27, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- OK, I'm sneaking around in the shadows here despite my wiki-break. I'm available for being asked/told something! Moisejp (talk) 05:32, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
- Hmm? I don't understand. Which advice would that be? Moisejp (talk) 05:40, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh, I think I see what you mean. Moisejp (talk) 05:41, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
- Well, maybe I had good intentions, but maybe I was just annoyed and frustrated by seeing a pattern of repeated negativity and lack of focused proactiveness. But I probably shouldn't have gotten involved since it really didn't have anything to do with me. I think my advice was good advice, but maybe I was out of place to say it in the way I did. But I'm not going to try to influence anyone on here anymore. Each one of us has to choose our own way. I admire you for your enthusiasm and continued positivity that gets the whole world behind you, gets all the big names doing copy-edits for you and rooting for you at FAC. It's pretty amazing that you won over so many people so quickly. That's the kind of attitude it takes to succeed at FAC. Moisejp (talk) 06:16, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh, I think I see what you mean. Moisejp (talk) 05:41, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
- Hmm? I don't understand. Which advice would that be? Moisejp (talk) 05:40, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
- OK, I'm sneaking around in the shadows here despite my wiki-break. I'm available for being asked/told something! Moisejp (talk) 05:32, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
- Hi Jivesh. Good luck on your FAC! I'm sure you'll do well. As for me, I'm taking a little wiki-break to catch up on some stuff in real life. Sorry I didn't get a chance to do a final read-through of "Halo" but I'm sure with all the big-name checks and copy-edits you got, it'll go great! I'll most likely be back before your FAC is done, they always take several weeks, anyway. Take care, and talk to you again soon. Moisejp (talk) 03:27, 11 January 2012 (UTC)
- That information is on the bottom of my user page! Moisejp (talk) 06:30, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
- Cool, and no worries. Have fun bringing up all the B-class Beyonce articles to GA. I am enjoying my wiki-break. But it's nice to come back online sometimes and snoop around without actually editing any articles! Anyways, I'll see you around again soon. Take care. Moisejp (talk) 06:43, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
Hello
Hello Jivesh, I changed my username on my Wikipedia, see link. Now I do not use my old name, for this reason I withdrew my name from the list, my old account is inactive. Lucas S. msg 14:46, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- hahaha!! Not yet... I will retire in the future!! Lucas S. msg 03:26, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
Help
Could I get some from you? —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 19:46, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
- Nevermind. Got it under control. What did I miss? I checked on my iPhone a few hours ago; looks like you've got Brian's support. Once he supports, the article's pretty much promoted. ;) —WP:PENGUIN · [ TALK ] 00:30, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
How on earth
Will I make Rihanna: Live in Concert Tour a GA? Haha. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 01:53, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- That's why I don't touch Beyonce's tours. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 04:32, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I can't make Music of the Sun a GAT without that one. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 13:05, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Are you sure? You can explain that it's hard to expand a tour article if the tour is over. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:34, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Really? That tour was gone during the A Girl like Me era, not the Music of the Sun era. But Legolas added it back to the potential topics of MotS because of how she performed songs from the album. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:43, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- You can copy paste what I wrote above. Tour articles, if not expanded when the tour is going on, are difficult to promote. :) Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:47, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh okay. And how can the Nine Inch Nails review be included, when you quick failed it and it clearly says quick fails are not allowed to be counted? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 19:06, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- The point was counted. Don't ask me. The way you are asking me gives me the impression you are in the middle of a battle. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 05:39, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh okay. And how can the Nine Inch Nails review be included, when you quick failed it and it clearly says quick fails are not allowed to be counted? Calvin • Watch n' Learn 19:06, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- You can copy paste what I wrote above. Tour articles, if not expanded when the tour is going on, are difficult to promote. :) Jivesh1205 (Talk) 18:47, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Really? That tour was gone during the A Girl like Me era, not the Music of the Sun era. But Legolas added it back to the potential topics of MotS because of how she performed songs from the album. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 18:43, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Are you sure? You can explain that it's hard to expand a tour article if the tour is over. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 13:34, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I can't make Music of the Sun a GAT without that one. Calvin • Watch n' Learn 13:05, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
Scaptia beyonceae
Yes I know... I added this in the Template:Beyoncé Knowles. It was very funny when i read it. Well, I think that it should go in the WikiProject. Plus I think the DYK nomination for the article should also go in the WikiProject. My love is love (talk) 11:57, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- And about the template (sorry, I didn't understand what you were trying to say) you should ask the user who created the article. My love is love (talk) 12:01, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. I know "Suga Mama" and "Ring the Alarm" but not the third one. Actually, I've watched the music video for "Suga Mama" on TV few days ago and I couldn't get the song out of my head (Although I knew it long time ago). And I love "Ring the Alarm". I could listen to it for hours. Especially the live performances and the music video. I love them. (Not this one. Lol.) And to be honest I don't know "Creole". (although I'm listening to it right now) And do you like those songs. My love is love (talk) 12:15, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Wow you are really a STAN then (superior to a fan). I love those songs but it took me some time to like "Creole". It is actually language I speak. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:17, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh, I know that Creole is a language. I like every song on B'Day and could listen to every angry song she makes. My love is love (talk) 12:21, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. I've heard "Signs" and "Daddy" but I don't like them very much. "Suga Mama" is awesome but I can't believe that you're watching it now. Lol. I've watched every music video she has ever made or appeared in. My love is love (talk) 12:31, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I know that they are forbidden but you can find almost every video that's not on Vevo uploaded by other users. And aren't Beyonce's videos shown in your country? And I know that they usually un-block the videos on Vevo. About "Sweet Dreams", I'll watch the information from the behind-the-scenes video now. My love is love (talk) 12:43, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- That's funny. I can't believe that it stayed for 16 weeks. Have you ever been on a concert by Beyonce? My love is love (talk) 12:51, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I live in Gostivar, Macedonia. And I've never been on a concert too. Actually, she has never come in my country. And have you ever seen her fans during the concerts. They're crying when she shakes hands with them during the performances of "Halo". Have you ever seen this? My love is love (talk) 12:56, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- To cry and pass out when she touches my hand? I mean I love her, I admire her and everything, but I would laugh if she touches my hand. (Lol at the picture) My love is love (talk) 13:13, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I agree with you. I don't know why it didn't sell as much as her previous albums. And what happened with the Grammy Awards? Only one nomination? Let's hope she gets more the next year. She really has to promote the album as soon as possible. My love is love (talk) 13:20, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- What Twitter uproar? And really this received a nomination for Best R&B Album and Beyonce didn't? (I don't know Ledisi and I'm pretty sure that no one else knows her. I just chose it as an example. Lol.) I mean it was one of the best critically received albums in 2011. My love is love (talk) 13:29, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I agree with you. I don't know why it didn't sell as much as her previous albums. And what happened with the Grammy Awards? Only one nomination? Let's hope she gets more the next year. She really has to promote the album as soon as possible. My love is love (talk) 13:20, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- To cry and pass out when she touches my hand? I mean I love her, I admire her and everything, but I would laugh if she touches my hand. (Lol at the picture) My love is love (talk) 13:13, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I live in Gostivar, Macedonia. And I've never been on a concert too. Actually, she has never come in my country. And have you ever seen her fans during the concerts. They're crying when she shakes hands with them during the performances of "Halo". Have you ever seen this? My love is love (talk) 12:56, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- That's funny. I can't believe that it stayed for 16 weeks. Have you ever been on a concert by Beyonce? My love is love (talk) 12:51, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I know that they are forbidden but you can find almost every video that's not on Vevo uploaded by other users. And aren't Beyonce's videos shown in your country? And I know that they usually un-block the videos on Vevo. About "Sweet Dreams", I'll watch the information from the behind-the-scenes video now. My love is love (talk) 12:43, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. I've heard "Signs" and "Daddy" but I don't like them very much. "Suga Mama" is awesome but I can't believe that you're watching it now. Lol. I've watched every music video she has ever made or appeared in. My love is love (talk) 12:31, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Oh, I know that Creole is a language. I like every song on B'Day and could listen to every angry song she makes. My love is love (talk) 12:21, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Wow you are really a STAN then (superior to a fan). I love those songs but it took me some time to like "Creole". It is actually language I speak. :D Jivesh1205 (Talk) 12:17, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. I know "Suga Mama" and "Ring the Alarm" but not the third one. Actually, I've watched the music video for "Suga Mama" on TV few days ago and I couldn't get the song out of my head (Although I knew it long time ago). And I love "Ring the Alarm". I could listen to it for hours. Especially the live performances and the music video. I love them. (Not this one. Lol.) And to be honest I don't know "Creole". (although I'm listening to it right now) And do you like those songs. My love is love (talk) 12:15, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
I'm reading the article now. Can't believe My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy was so well-received. 94 out of 100?!!??!?!?!?!?1?!? I mean why? I've never listened to Kanye West. I know just "All of the Lights" and every song from Watch the Throne and I think the music and the instruments are very good. But he ruins it with his rap. I agree that Lady Gaga's "The Edge of Glory" should have been nominated for Song of the Year. And I don't agree about Britney Spears' "Till The World Ends" for Best Dance Recording and Taylor Swift's Speak Now for Album of the Year. Britney Spears should be out of the music industry forever. She just can't sing. Taylor Swift also. And I really don't know what is Loud doing there. 67 based on 22 reviews. I mean Evanescence has 63 based on 8 reviews. Should that be nominated. Lol. I don't know why Evanescence's album has been a flop. Maybe they were waiting too long to make this album. Almost 2 years and it's their least successful album. My love is love (talk) 14:00, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- What is TEOG? Couldn't agree with you anymore. And maybe "Till The World Ends" should have been nominated for its critical success, but I just hate everything Britney makes. It's true that Grammy Awards are becoming commercial. And another fact that is really, really true is that rock music is dying. There wasn't a number one rock single in the US or in the UK, or anywhere else for years I think, and if there was in the last few years it was just one song. Back to Beyonce; I think also "Best Thing I Never Had" should have been nominated.
- True. And I still can't understand why was 21 so successful. I mean, sure it was good and everything, but 15 weeks at number 1 in the US and over 17 million copies worldwide? And when we're talking about British acts, Ceremonials should have been more commercially successful and should have been at least nominated in 1 category at the Grammys. It has 77 score based on 34 reviews and Florence Welch's vocals are miles better than Adele's. Anyway, got to go now. We will talk probably later. ("Best Thing I Never Had" should have been nominated in the pop category.) My love is love (talk) 14:22, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Which score? About Ceremonials? And 21 is a good album. But my point was that there are better. My love is love (talk) 18:29, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I'm afraid I can't the next 3 days. Sorry, I totally forgot. My brother came today, and he stays on the computer for hours. I'll try to find it online, copy-paste it to you and you can add everything that you think is notable. Again, sorry, sorry, sorry. My love is love (talk) 18:34, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Here it is! Can you watch it? I mean, is it available in your country? And he's out, but he will come back in a very short time. He left the computer on stand by. My love is love (talk) 18:38, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Then, can you wait me to do it on Monday? My love is love (talk) 18:51, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Here it is! Can you watch it? I mean, is it available in your country? And he's out, but he will come back in a very short time. He left the computer on stand by. My love is love (talk) 18:38, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- I'm afraid I can't the next 3 days. Sorry, I totally forgot. My brother came today, and he stays on the computer for hours. I'll try to find it online, copy-paste it to you and you can add everything that you think is notable. Again, sorry, sorry, sorry. My love is love (talk) 18:34, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Which score? About Ceremonials? And 21 is a good album. But my point was that there are better. My love is love (talk) 18:29, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- True. And I still can't understand why was 21 so successful. I mean, sure it was good and everything, but 15 weeks at number 1 in the US and over 17 million copies worldwide? And when we're talking about British acts, Ceremonials should have been more commercially successful and should have been at least nominated in 1 category at the Grammys. It has 77 score based on 34 reviews and Florence Welch's vocals are miles better than Adele's. Anyway, got to go now. We will talk probably later. ("Best Thing I Never Had" should have been nominated in the pop category.) My love is love (talk) 14:22, 13 January 2012 (UTC)
- Haha, I just came here to tell you about Scaptia (Plinthina) beyonceae (just read this article about it), but it looks like you already know! I guess I shouldn't be surprised that you're way ahead of me on obscure Beyonce news :) Accedietalk to me 06:35, 14 January 2012 (UTC)