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Your submission at Articles for creation: The Murder of Rachel Morin (November 2)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Qcne were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Oddly written article. See WP:NPOV. Reddit and DailyMail can't be used as sources. NYPost is generally unreliable.

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Qcne (talk) 20:20, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I'd love some help on making this more quality. This is the first time I've ever created a page and I thought I had written it in a NPOV (I read Wiki all the time so I thought I got it). I know I struggled with how to properly cite within the text itself (I don't understand code and I didn't see a shortcut in the bar) but I know the information I shared was accurate. Help please? Itsmeblondie90 (talk) 20:25, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

A couple things, some of the sources themselves are not really reliable, specifically the Daily Mail and Reddit. I would first look for sources that are considered reliable for the article. Second, I'm not sure if this murder is notable enough for an article in itself. It was big news around here locally for sure, but I don't recall seeing a larger story about it overall. RickinBaltimore (talk) 20:29, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

It's gotten some national play here and there. Personally, I find it interesting enough and true crime fans in my life sure are curious. Regardless, does that mean it can't have its own article? I can remove Daily Mail and Reddit. Any other notes? Itsmeblondie90 (talk) 20:33, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not sure if it passes our notability guidelines over all. However, I could be wrong on that too. What I'd recommend, since it is a draft, is find good sources for this article first of all. That's going to be a big factor. Also, the language is a bit non-neutral. For example the Background section has "She's been described by a friend as "a fighter" who was working hard to raise her children. In her free time, Rachel loved listening to music, reading, exercising and dancing. She was a spiritual person and found strength in her faith. Rachel kept up with her fitness would walk the Ma and Pa Trail regularly." Almost all of that is not needed. You could say "She would walk the Ma and Pa Trail regularly." but drop the part about being a "fighter" and what she did in her free time. That's stuff that isn't encyclopedic. RickinBaltimore (talk) 20:47, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Ahhhh good note. I could have sworn I've seen similar lines quoting others and describing their likes in prior articles but I'm picking up what you're throwing down. Thanks for your help! 173.49.0.64 (talk) 01:28, 3 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Itsmeblondie90! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Qcne (talk) 20:20, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Murder of Rachel Morin (November 2)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Qcne was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Does not pass WP:NCRIME. I'd recommend adding something to the existing Ma_and_Pa_Trail article. Thousands of people get murdered every year, this is just not a notable event.

Qcne (talk) 20:46, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:The Murder of Rachel Morin

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 21:07, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:The Murder of Rachel Morin

Hello, Itsmeblondie90. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "The Murder of Rachel Morin".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 20:43, 2 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: List of Ferris Wheel Incidents (November 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Royiswariii was:

This submission appears to be a news report of a single event and may not be notable enough for an article in Wikipedia. Please see Wikipedia:What Wikipedia is not#NEWS and Wikipedia:Notability (people)#People notable for only one event for more information.

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Royiswariii Talk! 23:42, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

List of ferris wheel incidents

Hello! I noticed that you recently submitted the "List of ferris wheel incidents" draft for a second time. I renamed the article for you to fix the grammar. Additionally, I thought you should know that the List of incidents at independent amusement parks article, which heavily overlaps your article and also includes ferris wheel incidents, exists. Additionally, other incidents can also be located using the category Amusement park accidents. You may be better off contributing to the existing article I linked as I don't see any other articles about incidents related to specific rides that are found at amusement parks. Raskuly (talk) 20:55, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Thank you for your advice, I appreciate you pointing me in the right direction. 173.49.0.64 (talk) 16:18, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: List of ferris wheel incidents (December 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by QuicoleJR was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

See WP:LISTN.

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QuicoleJR (talk) 15:39, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]