Talk:Yan Ruisheng/GA1
GA Review
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Nominator: Criscoย 1492ย (talkย ยท contribs) 22:32, 23 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Yovtย (talk ยท contribs) 18:13, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this one on. Ping me if I'm not back by next week. ๐๐๐๐ (๐๐๐๐๐๐) 18:13, 14 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Crisco 1492 I have completed the review, please take some time to check it out. ๐๐๐๐ (๐๐๐๐๐๐) 16:11, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
Lead is the appropriate 3 sentences long. Produced as short films were gaining traction among domestic producers, Yan Ruisheng was China's first full-length feature film.
might read awkward, I'd suggest rewording to As short films were gaining traction among domestic producers, Yan Ruisheng was produced as China's first full-length feature film.
- I've rephrased to
China's first full-length feature film, Yan Ruisheng was produced as short films were gaining traction among domestic producers.
Thoughts? ย โย Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:27, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
Appropriately comprehensive and concise. 
Production and background seem right, nice illustrations. I'd suggest de-linking Shanghai Garrison Command if there is no article for that. Also footnote c has a red link.
- Per WP:REDLINK, links should be allowed red where there is the potential to create an article. I've had trouble finding sources on the garrison, and haven't looked for Lu Jie, but Murder of Wang Lianying, Xinwen Bao, and Kwan Man-ching have all been turned blue since this article was written.ย โย Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:27, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
I have reviewed references here and on reception, and although some are WP:MREL, I can see that som ae appropriate. Be sure to keep those inline citations up to date and archive when necessary.
Critical reception (in this case Legacy)
[edit]Everything's alright here, just like in release, be sure to cite inline.
I myself have no further objections to this article passing GA given the subject. Although it may not seem like a GA pass due to lack of primary content sections, this lost film does't really have them. Good work!
- Thanks for the review! It is tough with lost films, especially ones where so much is known on the inspiring circumstances... but given that some stage productions added things like Lianying's ghost appearing to her family, it wouldn't meet WP:V to assume everything lines up with how it was in reality.ย โย Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:27, 18 November 2024 (UTC)