Talk:Trust Issues/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Dxneo (talk · contribs) 20:10, 7 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 02:44, 8 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I was about to review the article Tyla (South African singer) but it was taken by another user haha :) will review this one instead. Ippantekina (talk) 02:44, 8 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, have fun! dxneo (talk) 08:27, 8 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

First impression: I would leave out the tweet as I don't see it as particularly constructive to this article. Ippantekina (talk) 02:48, 8 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Done. dxneo (talk) 08:27, 8 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Prose review

Suggest adding {{Short description}} manually

Why? Ifi may ask. dxneo (talk) 11:31, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Currently no short description is shown in the GAN template. I know shortdesc is auto generated but I'd highly recommend adding it normally in case of technical issues depending on device. Ippantekina (talk) 03:39, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done although I know someone is gonna remove it in a few days. dxneo (talk) 12:54, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's a slow → "It is a slow"
"Trust Issues" was one of the four singles taken from Drake's 2011 studio album, Take Care but infobox/lead says otherwise?

That's what the source say, what's your suggestion? dxneo (talk) 11:31, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'd swap "singles" with "tracks". Ippantekina (talk) 03:39, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done dxneo (talk) 12:53, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

On May 20, 2011, he released "Dreams Money Can Buy",[5] followed by "Marvins Room", released on June 9, 2011,[6] and a promotional video for the latter on June 28, 2011.[7] No idea how this fact relates to this article

Background information; how the song, album, and compilation came about. I was worried that I couldn't find any source stating that "Marvins Room" was officially released on June 28, that's why I opted to the promotional video. However, that can be removed. dxneo (talk) 11:31, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Still not convinced.. I'd leave all of this outside the article which concerns one specific song and not other songs. Ippantekina (talk) 03:39, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done dxneo (talk) 12:53, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

is four minutes and 41 seconds long → "4 minutes and 41 seconds long" per MOS:NUMNOTES
half confessional, half ode to drank Seriously I have no idea what this means

Honestly, I was following the source and I kind of understand it after listening to the song. Still can be removed. dxneo (talk) 11:31, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You can add quotation marks and attribution. Ippantekina (talk) 03:39, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done dxneo (talk) 12:53, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

it also intensifies to a powerful conclusion as Drake's vocals soar above the energetic arrangement potentially editorializing/POV

Meaning? dxneo (talk) 11:31, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This sounds like an opinion and not an encyclopedic writing. I suggest adding attribution. Ippantekina (talk) 03:39, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Done dxneo (talk) 12:52, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Outside North America, it peaked at number 35 in the United Kingdom on the UK R&B Chart,[1] and number 90 on the UK Streaming Chart → "In the United Kingdom, it peaked at number 35 on the UK R&B Chart and number 90 on the UK Streaming Chart".
Note b is redundant imo.
was supposedly singing about his then-girlfriend Selena Gomez Should be removed per WP:SPECULATION
Move "Charts" before "Certifications"

I have addressed all the changes, what's left are those I have individually replied to above. Thank you again for the instructions. dxneo (talk) 11:31, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Responded above! :) Ippantekina (talk) 03:39, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Source review

Spotchecks not done. Ippantekina (talk) 05:25, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Spotchecks: 2, 14, 19, 29
Can you help me explain the reliability of:
- Singersroom
- The Edge
- earmilk

— Ippantekina (talk) 03:42, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

singersroom.com : is classified as marginally reliable by the Cite Highlighter script and throughout my AfD journey, it was frequently used as a reliable source. It has also been referenced by reliable publications as well.
theedgesusu.co.uk was never assessed at WP:RS/N, but it referenced over 100 times and on Ye (2018) which is now GA. I think what matters most is the content on the source.
earmilk.com has been referenced for at least 816 times on Wikipedia

dxneo (talk) 12:52, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dxneo: I'd like to see more thorough assessment of these sources i.e. editorial oversight, reputation (being used in Metacritic / mentioned by other publications for example). The fact that these sources are used in other GAs is not a strong enough argument. (Singersroom pass this) Ippantekina (talk) 04:36, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Assessing sources is out of my expertise, so I actually do not know where to look for what you are asking of me. At this point, what I can do is try to replace the sources, if possible. dxneo (talk) 10:00, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This was really difficult, but here is earmilk (Earmilk) and here is The Edge (The Edge). dxneo (talk) 12:57, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for addressing everything. Happy to pass this :) Ippantekina (talk) 02:57, 19 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]