Talk:Quantum Theory (video game)
Requested move
[edit]Quantum (2010 video game) → Quantum Theory (video game) — Correction of name, per official site. Thanks! Fin©™ 18:39, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
- Support Appears un-controversial since the publisher lists that as the name. TJ Spyke 16:19, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
Bias Issues
[edit]This article has some serious bias issues, as the story section was clearly written by an individual whose position was rather skeptical. Although the story really doesn't have any serious merit to it, the rules clearly state that anything up here needs to be presented from a neutral point of view. Please rewrite this article at once.
Furthermore, the story section lacks professionality, with such phrases as "shoots the hell out of" being unacceptable for Wikipedia.164.106.213.11 (talk) 23:03, 6 October 2010 (UTC)
- I did a quick run through the text trying to remove the more obvious occurrences such as "badass", "shoots the hell out of" and "been at war for some reason". Could probably do with a rewrite but this game is pretty bad so I'm not playing it just to rewrite the story section :-) --PdDemeter (talk) 00:47, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
- The fixes that have been made are more or less acceptable, since it no longer reads like a thirteen year old describing his day at school (if that day included shooting what I presume are blob monsters and godzilla freaks). I'm not going to bother insisting on any more, just because no one's going to play this game anyway.(note, I'm the same contributor as 164.106.213.11, just at a different server bank)164.106.149.188 (talk) 20:32, 7 October 2010 (UTC)
- I'll get to fixing it later today, when I get back home. ★Ffgamera★ - My page! · Talk to me!· Contribs 19:53, 9 October 2010 (UTC)
- All done. Hopefully, the article is fine now. ★Ffgamera★ - My page! · Talk to me!· Contribs 23:56, 9 October 2010 (UTC)
- The fixes that have been made are more or less acceptable, since it no longer reads like a thirteen year old describing his day at school (if that day included shooting what I presume are blob monsters and godzilla freaks). I'm not going to bother insisting on any more, just because no one's going to play this game anyway.(note, I'm the same contributor as 164.106.213.11, just at a different server bank)164.106.149.188 (talk) 20:32, 7 October 2010 (UTC)