Talk:Mario Segni

Mario Segni was nominated as a Social sciences and society good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (March 27, 2021). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 20 March 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Bgrus22. Peer reviewers: Bgrus22.

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Mario Segni Photo

Given that he is still alive would it not be more prudent to have a more recent photo of Segni on his page? User:Bgrus22

Referendums

Talk more about what the referendums related to User:Bgrus22

Talk More About Alliances

The spectacular failure of the alliance with the neo-fascists needs to have more context User:Bgrus22

Add to box

article demonstrates that Segni was a cabinet member for the Craxi 2 cabinet and the Fanfani 5 cabinet but is only listed as a member of the Craxi one. Should be fixed immediately. Bgrus22 (talk) 06:41, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Mario Segni/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Femkemilene (talk · contribs) 19:41, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be reviewing this article. Sorry for the long wait. FemkeMilene (talk) 19:41, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This article seems to be quite far away from GA criteria.

The lead should be expanded: about twice its current size would be the minimal.
There are multiple citation needed tags.
The article uses unreliable sources such as geni_family_tree and IMDb.
There are problems with prose: the culture part consists of lists, missing full stop, please use sentence case in headings.
He was born to Antonio Segni, himself a prominent politician, and Laura Carta Caprino, who would have a total of four children. Did only has mother have children? This sentence raises the question what his mother did as a profession, and whether his father had children elsewhere.
who were suffering from tangentopoli, please explain
There is something wrong with citations 11-15, which repeat the same info over and over
He has criticized prominent politicians in Italy such as Berlusconi and movements within the country. While it is okay to have short paragraphs in a GA, one sentence is suboptimal. The sentence doesn't belong in legacy.
I'm not sure the article meets the criterion to be broad. It has very little information about his tenure as state secretary. Did he not have any opinions about agriculture or secrecy?
No copy violation detected by earwig.

I will be failing the article, as I don't think the above issues can be addressed within seven days. I hope my pointers are giving you a better idea of how to prepare this article for a good article nomination. If you have any more questions, please drop me a line. FemkeMilene (talk) 20:17, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Femkemilene: thank you for responding, this was the first big page I worked on and I felt a soft spot for it leading to the premature nomination. Bgrus22 (talk) 21:42, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]