Talk:Hawaii State Department of Education

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Hawaii I'm sure there is a tremendously important philological reason why the non-standard spelling of Hawaii is being used in this article and a few others. I suggest, instead, that the way the name of the state entered American vocabulary be used and not something that people in Ha'w'a'i'ii want to quarrel about. Student7 01:07, 9 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The 'okina "'",glottal stop or voiceless glottal plosive is a type of consonantal sound, used in Hawaiian Language as well as many spoken languages. See Wikipedia "glottal stop."

There are few English words that contain a glottal stop. The best examples are the interjections "uh-oh", "oh-oh", and "uh-uh".

It's a phonological reason more than a philological (even though I have a love of the language), which describes the way sounds function within a given language or across languages to encode meaning, especially in Hawai'i.

Example: moa (mo-ah) is a chicken and mo'a (mo ah) means cooked

The only difference is the 'okina consonant.

Ua Mau ke Ea o ka 'Āina i ka Pono wbk1968 —Preceding unsigned comment added by Wbk1968 (talk • contribs) 00:23, 24 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

School service areas

Proposed Moanalua service areas: http://downloads.k12.hi.us/boundaries/Moanalua%20Large%20Proposed%20v6.pdf

WhisperToMe (talk) 18:38, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 1 July 2020

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The result of the move request was: Moved, no objections (non-admin closure) (t · c) buidhe 04:25, 10 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hawai'i Department of Education → Hawaii Department of Education – to proper orthography. Dept does not use okina, but even if they did, it would be an okina. — kwami (talk) 17:56, 1 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Move to Hawaii State Department of Education. Appears to be the name it actually uses. -- Necrothesp (talk) 23:32, 7 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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This has not been rated on WikiProject Education but is within its scope. Talk page evaluation Overall impressions The article has been rated Start-Class on the WikiProject Hawaii's quality scale and generally needs more elaboration. The article has a high importance scale. The article can be improved by adding more information ad more citations and references. This article is underdeveloped. Overall evaluation Kyleetak (talk) 13:45, 20 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Playgrounds

http://web.archive.org/web/20040625131252/http://the.honoluluadvertiser.com/article/2004/Apr/04/ln/ln23a.html notes that the HDOE planned to have playgrounds at all elementary schools by 2006 WhisperToMe (talk) 15:31, 15 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]