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Reverted bonespur deletion

I added a sentence regarding DJT's 1968 Draft deferment granted on the basis of alleged bone spurs in both feet. The subject has substantially arisen in recent months due to the campaign. Google noted that a Trump - bone spurs ostensible diagnosis has been recently searched for over 591,000 times. The situation had been well documented for nine years, including a very extensive investigation by the New York Times starting in 2015. The Wikipedia readership should not be denied access to this information. Activist (talk) 13:10, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

Activist, your bold edit on August 8 was reverted on August 9. Please, self-revert your reinstatement of the challenged material. Discussion first, wait 24 hours from the time of your talk page message before reinstating. Also, why didn't you put your comment at the bottom of the Talk page? Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 13:21, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

I have to apologize for adding the Talk on the "Bonespur" comments. I'm having terrible vision problems and expect I won't be able to edit Wikipedia for much longer. I've tried to sort this out, and hope I haven't confused things too much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Activist (talkcontribs) 13:38, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
I think this bit is UNDUE for this page. There are several other articles for which it's suitable. There was an epidemic of bonespurs around that time. SPECIFICO talk 20:02, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

Bonespurs are not contagious and most 1960's draft dodgers didn't have accommodating podiatrist tenants of their fathers to write the alleged diagnosis. But this particular faker is the only one currently running for president, at the same time deriding the U.S. military and simultaneously proclaiming his own supposed bravado. The 591 thousand people who made that Google search that I've noted previously may have been "spurred" on by his "suckers and losers" comments regarding the French cemetery where so many U.S. casualties were buried. His current VP candidate is busily and assiduously smearing the 24 years of military service of his opponent's VP candidate. Trump is noteworthy for having told 30,573 lies or misstatements of fact while in the White House, which was carefully documented by the Washington Post. Activist (talk) 02:11, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
I think it is worth a sentence in the article. It gets a lot of consistent coverage and is relevant to his biography. QuicoleJR (talk) 19:03, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
We mention it in the last sentence of the "Early life" section: In October 1968, he was classified 1-Y, a conditional medical deferment,[13] and in 1972, he was reclassified 4-F, unfit for military service, due to bone spurs, permanently disqualifying him.[14] The NYT reported the podiatrist's daughters said their father often spoke of having provided a deferment-establishing bone spurs diagnosis as a courtesy to his landlord who was Trump's father Fred. I don't doubt the information but it's hearsay, and naming father and daughters is too much detail. The bone spurs made headlines when Trump first ran because he was permanently disqualified for a temporary condition, and he didn't remember which foot was affected. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 19:42, 23 August 2024 (UTC)

bulletproof glass at first outdoor rally

In light of the recent assassination attempt on the US president, This would be an interesting article for voters to consider regarding the safety of a leading presidential candidate representing the United States. This content would be a good addition to the campaign. [1] Goodtiming8871 (talk) 11:55, 23 August 2024 (UTC)

This is undue for an article about Trump. Slatersteven (talk) 11:56, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
Wouldn't bulletproof glass, which was supposed to prevent assassination attempts during the campaign, help ease the concerns of many voters? Goodtiming8871 (talk) 12:01, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
That is not our job (read wp:not), this tells us nothing about Trump. Slatersteven (talk) 12:06, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
I agree with Slatersteven here. This information is not relevant for a biography of Trump, although it could potentially be worth mentioning in the article on his 2024 campaign. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:31, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for your comment Goodtiming8871 (talk) 09:04, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

References

Ronny Jackson "ally" removal

The article text describing Ronny Jackson as a Trump political ally -- cited to Associated Press -- has been removed on the theory that the word "ally" does not appear in the source. What the source says is that Jackson is a "staunch supporter" of Trump and then devotes several paragraphs to eviscerating Jackson as a credible witness. Somehow, either by my euphemistic "political ally" or otherwise, the sense of the cited source needs to be conveyed in our article text. SPECIFICO talk 19:54, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

At what point does a desire for accuracy about the nature of the ear injury become obsessive? It's Just Not That Important in my view. If Jackson had substantially exaggerated, I suspect someone with firsthand knowledge would have leaked something to that effect. Any deeper analysis can be done at Attempted assassination of Donald Trump. ―Mandruss  20:46, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Let's just be true to the sources instead of crafting narratives that are not following the cited sources. That would be the easiest and best. If you are for leaving the whole Ronny J 2 cm bit out, that would be fine too. SPECIFICO talk 21:23, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
If we were using wikivoice, you'd have a point. We're not. Since I introduced the whole Ronny J 2 cm bit, it's fairly obvious that I'm not for leaving it out. It provides more information than simple "injury", information that seems more credible than not per my previous comment. It maybe wouldn't have been necessary if not for a certain editor's attempt to call it a mere scratch without sufficient RS support. ―Mandruss  21:38, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
As for Let's just be true to the sources, I think you mean let's be true to the source that says what you want. I don't see much other RS seriously calling Jackson's account into question. Certainly not many saying it was a scratch. ―Mandruss  22:01, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Not following that, Mandruss. Isn't that the AP source that you added when you added the 2 cm? I just tried to conform the article to the cited source, which goes on at considerable length to cast doubt on RJ as a credible or significant factfinder. SPECIFICO talk 13:39, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Just looks like excessive detail and did not add value. I did not read it as the RS going to considerable length to cast doubt. PackMecEng (talk) 14:46, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Shall we escort Ronny and his laceration from the page? It's not even clear that he actually examined the patient. SPECIFICO talk 17:46, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
I added the AP source, which has more info about the nature of the injury, and the sentence about Trump not disclosing the medical and ER records on injury and treatment. Unless the FBI has access to those and mentions them in the publicly released part of their report, that's all we'll ever find out. I also added the Wikilink to Jackson's page. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 17:50, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Not following that, Mandruss... - The point is that we need to at least try to be true to the body of RS, not just the RS that we cite. As I tried to indicate, the AP source is not representative of the body of RS regarding the credibility of Jackson's memo. ―Mandruss  20:18, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Jackson is not quoted. Trump presented a document attributed to Jackson. Jackson is roundly discredited by mainstream RS for the reasons in that cited article and many other reasons. There is no consensus to include this content as if it were of any medical significance. Further, given Trump's splendid recovery -- which today he boasted was due to the hand of God saving him to carry on his political role -- the whole issue of the wound is trivial. What may not turn out to be trivial is the spectacle of Trump addressing crowds from a glass cage like the parrots in the zoo and there may ultimately be psychological effects of this terrible shooting. But that will only be known some time in the future. When in doubt, take it out. Somebody will remove this fairly soon, I think, and correctly so. SPECIFICO talk 20:36, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
the whole issue of the wound is trivial. You didn't think it was so trivial when you made this edit. It could've been left alone. I prefer the current status quo per my earlier comments, but I have no strong objection to reverting to the state prior to your edit. ―Mandruss  23:07, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Ronny Jackson doesn't need to be mentioned in this article. The whole paragraph about the assassination attempt needs to be rewritten. R. G. Checkers talk 17:49, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Start rewriting! ―Mandruss  23:41, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Agreed that Ronny should go. VQuakr (talk) 17:51, 21 August 2024 (UTC)
Ronny now booted by SPECIFICO.[1]Mandruss  22:51, 22 August 2024 (UTC)
Good; endorsed. DFlhb (talk) 09:32, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 8 September 2024

Add “convicted felon” to title. 2600:1700:F370:EED0:C410:5B19:636B:3B72 (talk) 02:07, 8 September 2024 (UTC)

 Not done: and will not be done – Muboshgu (talk) 02:18, 8 September 2024 (UTC)

Special Council Investigation

Saying the S.C.I. said the Russians did interfere in the elections to favor Trump is a Highly misleading sentence. It lacks context both before and after the sentence. You should definitely include the S.C.I. said there was NO COLLUSION between Russia and Donald Trump. And the S.C I. Is the F B I. Lead by director Robert Mueller. Stop calling it the Special Council Investigation. It's called the MUELLER REPORT. THE Russian Hoax was spearheaded by Adam Schiff and Nancy Pelosi. And the F.B.I was complicit in making the hoax credible. The hoax and all of its lies are completely exposed to the public in Congressional Hearings led by Jim Jordan. It's on YouTube. THAT sentence by itself talking about the Special Council and Russia should be immediately DELETED.There should be a proper section where the full context of the MUELLER report can be displayed. 96.79.132.6 (talk) 00:40, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

All meaningless without reliable sources, per Wikipedia content policy. Number of reliable sources you bring to the discussion: 0. And your focus should be on the body section, not the lead. That's where we actually cite sources, and the lead is a very brief summary of that. Bring reliable sources to suggest improvements to that section and we can discuss them. Then we can discuss whether any change is needed in the lead, which is seriously space-constrained and never has room to fully explain complicated and nuanced issues. Readers who stop reading at the end of the lead, as you apparently did, will always leave less than fully informed, and that's on them.
Otherwise, stop wasting your time and, more importantly, ours. ―Mandruss  01:28, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Just noticed: There should be a proper section where the full context of the MUELLER report can be displayed. Smh. ―Mandruss  02:34, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
I agree with the proposal; the full context of the Mueller report. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 09:21, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Such as this one: Donald Trump#Mueller investigation, with links to Mueller special counsel investigation and Mueller report ? Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 11:16, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Sorry, "smh" means "shaking my head". I was shaking it because the OP is proposing something that already exists. ―Mandruss  18:23, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

Please condense this article

This article is way too long. The article on Trump's opponent, Kamala Harris, is short and to the point. This article should be too. I can't edit it because I don't have 500 edits. Someone please fix this! Wiki Crazyman (talk) 23:13, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

Donald Trump is a 78 yr-old man who has been in a public spotlight for 55 or more of those years, from business dealings to reality show host to politics. There is a lot to say and a lot to cover regarding his life and history, far more than a 59 yr-old woman whom the public has only been aware of for roughly a decade. A user with even an average attention span is able to read this article just fine. Zaathras (talk) 23:26, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Believe it or not, you're not saying anything new. Throughout this article's life since about 2015, I doubt any issues have been discussed more than its length. See the talk page archives. I would support early closure—this would be a re-hashing of something already hashed to death—but I'm not doing it unilaterally. ―Mandruss  23:42, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
believe it or not Kamala’s article is about the same excluding media and business dealings John Bois (talk) 23:52, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
This article and Kamala aren’t related to them being president these articles show what they have done in their lives so far and what’s happened in them John Bois (talk) 23:53, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

Donald Trump on social media

Seeing as Donald Trump relies so heavily on social media and much of the news about him concerns his statements on social media I find the wikipedia rule against sourcing social media ridiculous. Why would that rule exist? You people do realise social media makes up about a quarter of the internet anyway. Thats like making an internet dictionary about everything but wait we'll exclude the most popular stuff. At the very least we should be allowed to add his X account to the external links. Maybe not his facebook group as it is dead. http://www.facebook.com/groups/donaldtrump 202.86.32.122 (talk) 02:41, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

Remove untruth from article

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


Please remove this unfounded, unproven, debunked statement from this article. You are promoting hate against another human with untruths here is untrue statement to remove He was the only U.S. president without prior military or government experience. Trump promoted conspiracy theories and made many false and misleading statements during his campaigns and presidency, to a degree unprecedented in American politics.

If you want to be an upstanding article, remove this democrat party propaganda and state only truth otherwise you will become just one more of the untrustworthy publist we dont want to read 2600:6C5D:4800:E98:7821:A871:6D1A:D09C (talk) 22:33, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

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Attempted_assassination

Hello, Regarding the assassination attempt on Trump, the existing main text content was included in the main text without a separate subtitle, so the content was not highlighted and seemed to be hidden. However, I think that the assassination attempt attempted by the assassin with 8 bullets is the most interesting topic for Trump's life, which could take a person's life, and for those who support Trump, who make up nearly half of the American people. Regarding assigning a separate subtitle to this, please give your opinion on assigning a subtitle, and if there is anything to revise or supplement the content. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 01:37, 17 August 2024 (UTC)

The purpose of section headings is navigation, not emphasis. It is difficult to assess the relative importance of aspects of a subject when events are recent, but it seems improbable that a minor wounding will end up being a particularly important aspect of a former President's life. VQuakr (talk) 02:02, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Even though 45th President of U.S. dodged the bullet by an inch, saving his life, and the bullet wound be not be a minor injury, anyone who reading this article would have died if the bullet had hit any human in the face by an inch, and it would have been 100% fatal.
If we look more specifically at the evidence,
If you look at the attached video below, all eight bullets were aimed at the former president, and if the former president had not been able to dodge in time, that is, if he had not turned his head, he would have died at the scene.
  • If you look at the specific time analyzed in the 24 minutes video, if you look at the attached video from 16 minutes 01 seconds to 16 minutes 07 seconds, you can see that the 5 seconds video clip, with 3D modeling, shows that the Presidential assassin's bullet was actually aimed to kill President Trump, and that President Trump dodged it by just an inch to save his life. the eight bullets by the assassin surely can kill anyone who is reading this article as you understand. [1]
Goodtiming8871 (talk) 12:43, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
That's a lot of ifs, and WP doesn't speculate. Trump did turn his head — for a reason other than literally dodging bullets — and ended up with a minor injury and an "iconic" picture that, just like the shooting, appears to be yesterday's news and something to be monetized. The shooting didn't change Trump's campaign strategy and rhetoric. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 15:22, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
More likely the sharpshooter was just aiming to scare him or muss up his hair. Just adding speculation the contrary for balance. While the authorities stated they were investigating the marksman's history and social media profile, I have not seen any conclusions as to his motivations or intended outcome. We really know nothing except the outcome -- nothing for Trump, and the tragic death and injuries among his audience. It's therefore dubious even to call this an attempted assassination. We do not know the shooter's intent or attempted intent or intended attempt. If Trump starts speaking in a glass cage, as has been proposed, that may thrust this incident back into the news. SPECIFICO talk 16:18, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
We got by RS and not insane theories. So let's just stick to what almost every high quality source says, which is it was an assassination attempt. We need to stop with the personal research you two. PackMecEng (talk) 18:00, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Pushing baseless conspiracy theories, insane theories, personal research — will you be done with the denigration any time soon? Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 19:14, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
The editing of this article is actually a reality show called "Get Trump". In the current episode there is a contest to see how minimal the presentation of the assassination attempt can get. Bob K31416 (talk) 19:46, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Well, then our "show" lost to Britannica. They mention the felony convictions in the first paragraph of the lead, the other indictments and the civil suits in the second paragraph, and the impeachments in the third one. You have to scroll waaay down to find the short paragraph on the assassination attempt. Quote: "His injury was minor." I'm not sure whether we're ahead of or also lost to Conservapedia. They have a seven-paragraph section entitled "assassination attempt" which mentions everything from the "J6 witch hunt" to the Canadian Broadcasting Corporation to Theodore Roosevelt. The one thing they don’t mention is the actual shooting in Butler, PA. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 11:46, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
I'm sure you're aware it's not denigration if it's well-founded. This page has long had an excess of what PME called personal research and we're not here to perform that kind of analysis—it's too vulnerable to personal bias. Some degree of it is necessary and appropriate, ie editorial judgment, making it impossible to draw a bright line. But we have taken it too far for so long, IMNSHO, that it seems normal. Words like "insane" may be out of line, but you might address the substance of the objection instead of the form. The latter is easy; the former is harder but more important. ―Mandruss  20:05, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Gee, thanks to you, too. (PME: Priority Mail Express, Professional Military Education, Premature Ejaculation?) "Insane" MAY be out of line? I won’t waste my time arguing with the writer of that epithet. As for your arguments, please take a look at the editing history of the "attempted assassination" section. I added it a few weeks ago because of RS at the time. After it got trimmed to the one sentence, I removed the heading, added the Wikilink to the sentence, and moved it into the "2024 campaign" section in chronological order. I have now added "presumed assassination attempt" (as in "appearing to be true on the basis of evidence that may or may not be confirmed") to the sentence, per the cited and other RS. BTW, all I do is "personal research" - of online sources and books I have bought. I don’t have a staff to do it for me, and I prefer not to make up my own facts. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 21:36, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for belatedly responding to the substance. I note that you vociferously object to "insane" one sentence after asking whether "PME" (quite obviously PackMecEng) means premature ejaculation. Here's a mirror. My point is that comments like this one and this one are almost completely divorced from Wikipedia content policy (yours a little better than SPECIFICO's) and have little place in article talk. I think it's time we started to cut down on that, though it would be very difficult to quit cold-turkey. I'm far more concerned about that than what this article says about the shooting. ―Mandruss  22:01, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
Declining the mirror — maybe it’s the humidity clogging my brain, but "PME" wasn’t obvious to me as an abbreviation for an editor’s name. It was just another abbreviation I didn’t find at Wikipedia:Wikipedia_abbreviations and then looked up "on the internet", results as expected. As for my "lot of ifs" comment, it was in response to this one by another experienced editor, so I didn’t WP:RS them. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 10:31, 18 August 2024 (UTC)
Here's the text of the current version[2], which consists of a single sentence in the article.
"On July 13, 2024, Trump was nicked on the ear by gunfire at a campaign rally in Butler Township, Butler County, Pennsylvania."
Note that it is not called an assassination attempt, which is consistent with SPECIFICO's personal idea that it may not have been that.
This can be compared to the section Assassination attempts in the Gerald Ford article. Bob K31416 (talk) 18:59, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
@SPECIFICO I think we can speculate that as a registered republican who donated to the DNC after witnessing Jan 6, the shooter was attempting to kill the former president, his motive being a fear of Trumps return to power and the percieved resulting threat to the republic? Halbalbador (talk) 11:36, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
No WE can't speculate about anything (see wp:or). Slatersteven (talk) 11:38, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Got your facts in the wrong order. Crooks donated $15 to a get-out-the-vote site on January 20, 2021, and registered as a Republican in September 2021, i.e., both after witnessing Jan 6. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 12:41, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
@SPECIFICO: Noting that he did, in fact, start speaking from behind bulletproof glass like you said. QuicoleJR (talk) 20:54, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

Regarding the place where the assassin fired eight bullets at Trump, if it is said that this was not an assassination attempt, it will be seen as representing the opinions of supporters of the Democratic Party in the United States who are trying to downplay the assassination attempt. I think that an objective view on this should be based on the fact that the major American media outlets, such as the National Broadcasting Company (NBC), CBS (formerly the Columbia Broadcasting System), the American Broadcasting Company (ABC), and the Fox Broadcasting Company (Fox), have stated that the assassin fired several bullets at President Trump and that it was an assassination attempt. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 12:08, 18 August 2024 (UTC)

Per MOS:NAVLIST,

I will replace the previous normal campaign photo with an image of the related to the assassination attempt, as this is a significantly more impactful and relevant event for the section. Given the gravity of the incident, readers will likely find this image more engaging and informative.Goodtiming8871 (talk) 02:01, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

That photo is not representative of his campaign and should not be used in that manner. Show his two-fisted Trump Dance. Much more emblemmatic of his rallies than a one-shot exception. SPECIFICO talk 02:51, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Thanks for your comment. I think the Two Fist Trump Dance would also add to the symbolism of the rally. If you noticed a photo that shows the rally dynamically, please post it. How about adding a suitable photo related to the assassination attempt? For example, a photo that shows how far away the assassin was from Trump. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 11:02, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Injury, scratch, nick, etc.

We can't say he was injured. It's not specific enough and it sounds like a laceration to the kidney or Ronald Reagan style near-death lung puncture. He was scratched. As he explained to the world in his convention speech, the ear is richly supplied with blood vessels - hence the mess on his cheek. SPECIFICO talk 02:51, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

We can say injured/injury precisely because it's very general. It's a word nobody can dispute, so it's hardly OR to say it. Not so for scratched/scratch; if you want to say that you'll need to show widespread use in RS. From what I've read, I don't think you can.
But injured/injury is not all we say as of yesterday. Since it's very general, we add more information as follows: "Former White House physician Ronny Jackson said he had seen the injury and that it was a two-centimeters-wide gunshot wound to Trump's right ear." I don't think that sounds anything like a laceration to the kidney or Ronald Reagan style near-death lung puncture. It certainly doesn't sound like a scratch. Jackson arguably has credibility issues, but we're attributing his words to him rather than accepting his words as Truth and stating them as fact using wikivoice. Compare and contrast: "The injury was a two-centimeters-wide gunshot wound to Trump's right ear."
Unless/until medical records are released/reported, I doubt we can do much better without OR and without consuming too much space for this article. ―Mandruss  07:35, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
I think it's fair to say that he was injured.
Let's say the person reading this was grazed by a bullet. If it was the same wound, if it was a fall and the same amount of blood was shed, or if it was a knife wound and the same amount of blood was shed, it could be expressed as a scratch.
However, since the wound is only 1 inch inside the face, it is a bullet wound that could take the life of the person reading this article, or if the bullet hit the inside of the face, it is reasonable to say that it is an injury.
Even if it is the same wound, if the cause is a bullet wound that could actually take the life of a person, it is medically considered an injury, and for this reason, major media outlets around the world reported that it was an obvious assassination attempt that saved the life by only 1 inch. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 11:13, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
Since we’re wading into the knowns, i.e., the details the Trump campaign released to the press, then we should also wade into the known unknowns RS mentioned. AP writes about the memo that was written by Jackson and released by the campaign: The bullet track, he said, "produced a 2 cm wide wound that extended down to the cartilaginous surface of the ear", i.e., an 0.79" skin-deep furrow, and that no sutures were required. (Or, as Jackson said earlier, the bullet took "a little bit off the top of his ear".) The AP source also says that the Trump campaign declined "to disclose medical records or hold briefings with the doctors who treated him at the hospital". Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 12:33, 20 August 2024 (UTC)

Looks like there's a lot of contortions and contrivances here trying to minimize the close to death situation where a sniper on a rooftop with a powerful assault rifle shot at former president and presidential candidate Trump and got so close to killing him that the bullet hit his ear. The seriousness of the attack is further illustrated by the shooting death of a person nearby and the critical injury by gunshot of two others in the same attack with the assault rifle. Trump was very fortunate that he was not killed. Yet some editors are trying to diminish the significant danger to Trump's life by focusing attention on the minor nature of the wound. This reminds me of a time many decades ago when someone asked, "Have You No Sense of Decency?" Bob K31416 (talk) 04:04, 21 August 2024 (UTC)

Your comment (rant) is no more policy-based than those of the editors you're complaining about, and violates the spirit if not the letter of NOTFORUM, AGF, and NPA. Just because something is true, if in fact it's true, that doesn't mean it has any place on this page. If an editor Has No Sense of Decency, shaming them here is not going to force them to grow some. Stay focused on policy, not editor motives; if that's not enough, the AP2 area of the project is a lost cause anyway. And that may well be the case. I suggest realism and pragmatism. ―Mandruss  04:51, 21 August 2024 (UTC)

References

  1. ^ Donald Trump Shooting Analysis: Gunman Outsmarted Secret Service

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 12 September 2024

Add more information of 2024 campaign and include details from the two debates. -Bob :) (talk) 03:16, 12 September 2024 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. EvergreenFir (talk) 04:25, 12 September 2024 (UTC)

See Also section

Could you please add a "See also" section to the Donald Trump topic? Or maybe I can add one? From my understanding, it is missing from the Donald Trump Subject, so I would appreciate your opinion on this. There are candidates for the US presidential election and the current US presidents with "See also section" [1], [2], "See Also section" makes it very accessible, so even if there is a link in the text, the main related parts can be accessed right away, so I think this is necessary. By adding "See also" to the Donald Trump section to correct the imbalance with other Wikipedia relevant contents.Goodtiming8871 (talk) 04:44, 19 August 2024 (UTC)

I have removed the section. It's optional, and this article is already longer than most. Per MOS:NAVLIST, Editors should try to put themselves in the readers' frame of mind and ask "Where will I likely want to go after reading this article? " Are the three lists in the "See also" section you added (List of United States presidential assassination attempts and plots, List of United States presidential elections by popular vote margin, and List of United States presidential candidates by number of votes received)? Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 12:56, 19 August 2024 (UTC)
Yes, Per MOS:NAVLIST, I've added navigational lists, which benefit readers by providing easy access to relevant Trump-related information. Given the article's length and comprehensive nature, a "see also" section is essential. This feature caters to readers who prefer a concise overview by allowing them to quickly locate specific topics. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 01:47, 20 August 2024 (UTC)
After identifying the parts that need to be linked to the main article, I will also add a "See Also section" to add content that is not in the existing text or that may be of interest to those interested in Wikipedia in the run-up to the November 2024 US presidential election. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 11:42, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
In the case of Barack Obama,[3] there is a See Also item, categorized in detail. For the convenience of users, I will add this for Donald Trump as well. If you have any other opinions about this, please let me know in advance.Goodtiming8871 (talk) 12:15, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
The article is too long to have one. There is simply no room for unnecessary content. QuicoleJR (talk) 20:45, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
In the case of Wikipedia, as you can add the necessary content, I think it is fair to include the necessary content since it is the user's choice to access the content. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 11:55, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Oppose. This article is too long and growing and there is already a very lengthy list of article links in the sidebar. O3000, Ret. (talk) 12:30, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
The sidebar is what I mean by that, in the 10+ years I've been accessing Wikipedia, I've never used the sidebar and See Also is actually used a lot, so it's definitely something that users need. Goodtiming8871 (talk) 08:55, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

I think it is unfair to restrict users from conveniently accessing various related article topics directly related to Donald Trump that passed DUE and RS.

Since the main text is longer than other topics, the convenience of access and the ability to select should be improved. In other words, this Donald Trump content is even more - See Also section is a necessary function to increase accessibility and selectivity for the numerous users accessing Wikipedia around the world.Goodtiming8871 (talk) 09:04, 30 August 2024 (UTC)


Body Odor

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Multiple notable sources have alleged a disquieting odor emanating from Trump. Should these allegations be included? GobsPint (talk) 05:24, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

Without sources provided? No. With sources? Still probably no EvergreenFir (talk) 05:30, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
How many sources? Which sources? Provide some sample links and quotes. TarnishedPathtalk 06:10, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
Silly Trival nonsense. Slatersteven (talk) 10:19, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
Appears to be based on Adam Kinzinger's interview on Jimmy Kimmel Live!. Kimmel asked Kinzinger about his December 2023 tweet mentioning the alleged odor. Also, the October 1989 SPY magazine (pg. 134) had dubbed Trump "Stinky" as an alternate to "short-fingered vulgarian". "Short-fingered" seems to have hit a nerve because Trump kept harping on the size of his hands/digits for decades, but he doesn't appear to have objected to either "vulgarian" or "stinky". The Kimmel episode got some coverage in The Wrap, HuffPo, but it's not what I'd call hard news. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 10:40, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
Seems like material about an alleged "disquieting odor emanating from Trump" would fit in with a Trump article emanating a disquieting odor. Maybe Harris will bring this up at the debate? If so, definitely put it in. For more information on the condition, see the Wikipedia article Body odor. "And that's the way it is." Bob K31416 (talk) 17:16, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
If it's not a fire hazard, omit. O3000, Ret. (talk) 17:22, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
This is just leftie media stuff because the ancient NY courtroom stunk and the defense counsel were gagging. There's no credible source of the odor. SPECIFICO talk 18:58, 9 September 2024 (UTC)
That would definitely be a BLP violation to put in this article. QuicoleJR (talk) 16:22, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
No-it is completely non-encyclopedic and subjective. Elmmapleoakpine (talk) 17:27, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
Tell that to Coco. SPECIFICO talk 15:45, 12 September 2024 (UTC)
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Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 September 2024

Why does it not say here that he LOST the 2020 election to Joe Biden? Who cares if he thinks he did not, the 46th President of the United States is Joe Biden, so Donald Trump (nee DRUMPH) lost the 2020 election and it should be noted as such. This is a request and it is a FACT that is missing from your page thus if not updated, his page should be removed as it is FALSE and not worthy of being posted on-line anywhere because the fact are facts. DONALD TRUMP (nee DRUMPH) lost the election in 2020 and should be listed at the beginning of any factual biography. Otherwise, WIKIPEDIA is well subversive and "fake news-information" according to this ex-president! Stevony6 (talk) 03:39, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

 Not done:Take your rant elsewhere. This article does say that he lost the 2020 election. Meters (talk) 03:48, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
Also, improper use of the edit request facility. Please read and follow the instructions. ―Mandruss  03:50, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
The lead is arranged in chronological order, so Trump’s 2020 election loss, his refusal to concede, and the attempt to overturn the election results are in the fifth paragraph. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 09:20, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

Lack of Sources for Opening Section

The introductory text contains uncited claims that would benefit from supporting sources:

  • "During the campaign, his political positions were described as populist, protectionist, isolationist, and nationalist."
  • "His election and policies sparked numerous protests."
  • "He was the only U.S. president without prior military or government experience."
  • "Many of his comments and actions have been characterized as racially charged, racist, and misogynistic."

Regardless of one's stance on Trump, I am surprised these have been allowed to stand with no reliable sources cited for such claims. MollyRealized (talk) 21:06, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

See body content for related citations. Lead summarizes body and lead does not need to include redundant citations at the cost of even a little readability. If lead does not accurately summarize body, that should be fixed. If body does not cite adequately, that should be fixed. If body does not conform to content policy, that should be fixed. But we don't need lead citations to prove that editors here know better than to put unsourced content in the lead. ―Mandruss  21:30, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Molly, you have bumped into an article where the official consensus is to avoid citations in the lead. See #58 at #Current consensus. That leaves the door open for very limited use of inline citations if absolutely necessary. Otherwise, you can be sure that with myriad editors of all political persuasions who edit this page, if there is content in the lead that does not have a well-sourced counterpart in the body of the article, they will quickly address the problem. I suggest that you search the page for the key words in the lead that are also in the body. You should be able to find the citations. If you find a problem, feel free to start a new thread and address it. We are always open to suggested improvements, and we are all very human and prone to error, so do help us. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 00:42, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 September 2024 (2)

UserGav (talk) 21:33, 13 September 2024 (UTC)=

Hi I'd like to help out with our Writing I'm a very good writer who just grad from Yale Uni Would look forward to helping out.

 Not done: Not an edit request. This article is extended-confirmed protected. You will not be able to edit it until your account is at least 30 days old and you have made at least 500 edits. Meters (talk) 21:45, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
Edit requests are not requests for permission to edit. They are requests for authorized editors to make specific edits on your behalf. Common misunderstanding. ―Mandruss  21:56, 13 September 2024 (UTC)

Russia in third paragraph of lead

Resolved
 – The proposal I made here to expand the sentence in question did not achieve consensus support. I started another section to instead discuss deleting the sentence in question. Anythingyouwant (talk) 00:40, 1 September 2024 (UTC)


The third paragraph of the lead currently says this:

A special counsel investigation established that Russia had interfered in the election to favor Trump.

Let’s change it to this:

Russia unlawfully interfered in that election in Trump’s favor, but investigators have reached no consensus that the Trump campaign unlawfully colluded with Russia, or that Russia affected the election outcome.

The latter is more neutral and more informative. The current version refers to a “special counsel” investigation, which includes an investigation of Trump himself, but we completely omit that no charges against Trump were brought or recommended. Instead, we now suggest that investigators may have found Trump committed a crime, that he may have been charged with it, that he may have admitted it, that he may have become president because of it, etc. In other words, the current sentence is too vague as it stands now, and thus too likely to mislead. I don’t know of any other BLP lead that says the subject was investigated for an offense, and then lets that information dangle without elaboration in the lead.

There were several official investigations of Russian interference in 2016, so let’s speak globally instead of just about the Mueller investigation. And let’s accurately summarize the main results: (1) Russia interfered, (2) no unlawful collusion by Trump has been charged or proved, and (3) no effect on the election outcome has been proved. I am purposely omitting wikilinks and footnotes for now, for simplicity, but we can get to that later. Anythingyouwant (talk) 06:14, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

That's some pretty imaginative interpretation of a simple, straightforward sentence. You brought this up half a year ago, and we've also had at least one discussion about adding this context: The report revealed sweeping Russian interference and detailed how Trump and his campaign welcomed and encouraged it, believing "it would benefit electorally from information stolen and released through Russian efforts". The current wording is the lowest common denominator and as neutral as it gets. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 11:46, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Oppose. I don't think the lead needs to state things that didn't happen, nor do I think it has room for that. I understand the desire to combat false internet chatter. Self-quote from previous section: Readers who stop reading at the end of the lead [...] will always leave less than fully informed, and that's on them. We should agonize less about accommodating those readers, in my opinion. I also don't see the dangling that you do. (Becoming my mantra: Lblinks would help.)Mandruss  19:53, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Saying that Trump was investigated by a special counsel, without saying anything in the lead about the investigation’s outcome is very poor writing. Compare the lead about Steven Hatfill which says, “He became the subject of extensive media coverage beginning in mid-2002, when he was a suspect in the 2001 anthrax attacks.” Then the Hatfill lead says what the result of the investigation was. Anythingyouwant (talk) 19:45, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Where does it say Trump was investigated by a special counsel? Not in the lead. If you're saying the lead is misleading after reading the body, that's some pretty weird logic. ―Mandruss  20:11, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
That’s what a “special counsel” is. The special counsel was appointed because the Trump administration had a conflict of interest. The Wikipedia article special counsel says it’s for a “particular case of suspected wrongdoing for which a conflict of interest exists for the usual prosecuting authority.” Obviously, the special counsel investigated Trump. Obviously Russia had no conflict of interest, it wasn’t the investigating authority. Plus it’s common knowledge that Trump was investigated. Anythingyouwant (talk) 20:15, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Well I'm just not that concerned about what's "obvious" to you or "common knowledge" in your opinion. My thinking is limited to what the article says, particularly in the lead which is the topic of this thread. ―Mandruss  20:20, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Apparently you are unaware what the words “special counsel” in the lead mean. Anythingyouwant (talk) 20:21, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Again: Stop pandering to lazy readers. ―Mandruss  20:28, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
First of all, WP:Lead says, “The lead should stand on its own as a concise overview of the article's topic.” Secondly, if a non-lazy reader reads the entire article body, it 100% clearly confirms that Trump was investigated. Many readers will read our lead, few will read the whole article body to find the results of the investigation. Please consider that it’s very unwise for us to say in the lead that the special counsel conducted an investigation without saying what the investigation found regarding Trump. Anythingyouwant (talk) 20:33, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
WP:Lead says, “The lead should stand on its own as a concise overview of the article's topic.” So vague and subject to interpretation as to be fairly useless here. We necessarily omit a ton of significant information from the lead.
if a non-lazy reader reads the entire article body, it 100% clearly confirms that Trump was investigated. And 100% clearly confirms that investigators have reached no consensus that the Trump campaign unlawfully colluded with Russia, or that Russia affected the election outcome.
And I'm not asking readers to read the entire article body. But, if they care about becoming informed about a particular issue, say, the special counsel investigation, I can reasonably ask them to read that body section. If they can't be bothered to do that, it's a clear sign they don't care much about being informed about it. Far be it from me to say what they should care about. ―Mandruss  20:46, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
It would be better to entirely omit the sentence in the lead, than to cherry pick the one finding of the special counsel that reflects most poorly on Trump. Anythingyouwant (talk) 20:55, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Hey, I'm all for omitting stuff from the lead. That isn't what you proposed. ―Mandruss  21:07, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Should I start a new section? Anythingyouwant (talk) 21:57, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
File:Magic 8 Ball - Instrument Of Evil? (2426454804).jpgMandruss  22:07, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
Mañana. Anythingyouwant (talk) 22:10, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
"It won't do any harm" is a very poor argument for anything. It's also false in this case, since adding unnecessary content to the bloated lead is always harmful. ―Mandruss  19:31, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

IRS Audit findings

Propose adding a sentence summarizing the findings thus far of an IRS audit (covered by AP, ProPublica, NYT, CNN) to read something like:

As of May 2024, an ongoing IRS audit found Trump allegedly double-dipped on tax losses from his Chicago skyscraper, which could cost him upwards of $100 million in back taxes and penalties. Superb Owl (talk) 02:22, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

Any WP:WEIGHT evaluation needs to take into account that the article is already too long (see preceding section). You might say the DUE bar is necessarily a bit higher here. The article already includes a lot that is out of place in a top-level biography, but the existence of bad stuff does not justify the addition of more bad stuff. I can't see spending the space for what amounts to a hypothetical at this point, coverage or no. It certainly does not pass the WP:10YT test. ―Mandruss  02:51, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
I respect the work you have done trying to keep this article more concise (that can't be easy and I am happy to help out with that a bit).
I respectfully disagree on 10YT, and think it would easily pass that test. If his indictments are notable even if he has not gone all the way through the appeals process or his impeachments are notable even though the Senate did not remove him, then how is this not notable? Also, how many presidents have been accused by the IRS of tax fraud? Superb Owl (talk) 03:28, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
If his indictments are notable [...] - I could dismantle the false comparisons piece by piece, but I'm of the opinion that such apples-and-oranges discussion rarely bears fruit. No doubt someone else will be happy to engage you with that. how many presidents have been accused by the IRS of tax fraud? I don't know, you tell me. Again, I don't feel we can afford the space for an unresolved accusation with a mere 100 mil at stake. I haven't read the sources closely; is there an open criminal investigation? ―Mandruss  03:57, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Just in the body under wealth where all the other tax info is, or in the lead? DN (talk) 09:16, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Wherever makes sense but probably tax info Superb Owl (talk) 15:41, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
I just noticed that our "Real estate" section failed to mention Trump's "tallest and, at least for now, [] last major construction project". I just corrected the omission. A major project resulting in more than $600 million in losses and an alleged tax fraud of $100 million — deserves a mention. The section has an inline link to Trump International Hotel and Tower (Chicago)#Tax deductions which has a few more details. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 12:25, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments? Trump International Hotel and Tower Chicago

The short paragraph on the building (see also above section) was reverted with the edit summary "overdetail". As I said before, Trump's last major and tallest ever construction project (92 stories, hotel, retails space, luxury condos) resulting in more than $600 million in losses and an alleged tax fraud of $100 million deserves a mention. Thoughts? Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 07:52, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

There's already been quite a bit of relevant information written about Donad Trump, so I think that part is "excessive detail."Goodtiming8871 (talk) 12:24, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Can we be sure it was 92 stories? TrumpORG had a continuous bad habit of over-zealous counting of floors in almost every building they ever constructed. A bit like counting the number of people at a rally! Just sayin'. Buster Seven Talk (UTC) 12:41, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Does the building have a lobby? If it does, it depends, it seems, on whether he can get away with claiming that the building's lobby is the equivalent of more stories than its actual height. He seems to have started a trend in creative floor numbering, and buyers of luxury condos might find themselves living at much less exalted altitudes than the brochure suggested. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 20:51, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
I don't see how it is entirely undue, ie "over-detail". It seems brief, relevant and significant enough for inclusion in the body, but I would only mention it as "currently under IRS investigation audit/inquiry etc", the dollar amount might seem somewhat superfluous to others. 100 million dollars may not seem like a lot. Must be nice...Cheers. DN (talk) 16:15, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
agree with including and excluding dollar amount Superb Owl (talk) 16:21, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
I'm not sure how to interpret "somewhat superfluous". The reverter didn't discuss their stated reason (overdetail), so I reinserted the text without the dollar amounts. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 15:58, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

Lead paragraph

Resolved
 – A proposal here by User:Seananony to expand the lead sentence is not supported by consensus, but consensus does support adding a second sentence to the opening paragraph that mentions both his loss in 2020 and current candidacy: “He lost his bid for re-election in 2020, and is now the Republican nominee for president in 2024.”

How about matching this sentence in Harris's blp in the first paragraph? Harris is the Democratic Party's nominee for U.S. president in the November 5, 2024 election. Seananony (talk) 03:06, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

Done. Anythingyouwant (talk) 03:13, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Undone. It's his third go-around, and it's better placed within the context of his domination of the GOP despite his loss the last time around and the party's losses or lackluster performance in the last two elections under his leadership. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 12:54, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Agree. "Harris does it" is a poor argument for anything. You could just as easily be at Harris saying "Trump doesn't do it". There is no need for this kind of consistency between any two articles. ―Mandruss  17:37, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

This edit removes from the lead paragraph that Trump is the current GOP nominee for president. In the history of Wikipedia, no major party presidential nominee has had such information removed from the opening BLP paragraph. Such removal obviously violates MOS:OPEN. The opening paragraph should “establish the context in which the topic is being considered by supplying the set of circumstances or facts that surround it.” Anythingyouwant (talk) 18:16, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

See also MOS:FIRSTBIO: “The opening paragraph of a biographical article should neutrally describe the person, provide context, establish notability and explain why the person is notable, and reflect the balance of reliable sources….However, try to not overload the first sentence by describing everything notable about the subject; instead, spread relevant information over the lead paragraph.” Anythingyouwant (talk) 18:50, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
To be clearer, I don't necessarily oppose the addition; I just oppose the OP's argument for it. As to the addition, count me close to neutral/uninterested but leaning include. ―Mandruss  19:01, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
@Anythingyouwant Here another suggestion:
Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, and businessman who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021, lost his bid for re-election in 2020, and is the Republican nominee for president in 2024. Seananony (talk) 02:33, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Here’s your proposal with wikilinks:

Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, and businessman who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021, lost his bid for re-election in 2020, and is the Republican nominee for president in 2024.

This addresses the objection that his loss the last time should not be omitted. I support this new proposal as well as the initial proposal above in this section. Anythingyouwant (talk) 02:53, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
In my view, amending current consensus item 50 yet again should require a better reason than making the first sentence of the article cumbersomely long. ―Mandruss  03:28, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
I quoted lots of policy-based reasons above. But here’s a better version that splits the cumbersome sentence:

Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, and businessman who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021. He lost his bid for re-election in 2020, and is now the Republican nominee for president in 2024.

Anythingyouwant (talk) 03:38, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
I support that. As a nice side benefit, it would appease those who insist that one-sentence paragraphs = poor writing. This would NOT amend #50, btw, as it applies only to the first sentence. This being equally prominent, it might warrant a new list item. ―Mandruss  03:51, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
It’s an official Wikipedia guideline, per Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Layout: “The number of single-sentence paragraphs should be minimized, since they can inhibit the flow of the text….” Anythingyouwant (talk) 03:56, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Minimized, not zero. The guideline wisely leaves room for exceptions. That single sentence did not inhibit the flow of the text. It was a perfectly fine intro to the remainder of the lead. "Trump in a nutshell; paragraph break; now more detail." But it's nice when bad arguments can be avoided. ―Mandruss  04:12, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
I have boldly edited that guideline;[3] we'll see if it flies. ―Mandruss  04:44, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Oh, goody. What happened to how important would this be in this article the day after the election? As opposed to the indictments, felony verdict, impeachment, and other minor details ... And about that consensus: that's the "it's been 48 hours, and two editors agree with me, habemus consensus" Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 14:19, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
@Space4Time3Continuum2x Based on how important this will be the day after the election, the lead paragraph should definitely state he's the Republican nominee, though it will need to be updated after the election, of course. I honestly don't understand arguing against including it, or how that could be controversial. Seananony (talk) 16:11, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
@Space4Time3Continuum2x PS: I would not be opposed to also including "and convicted felon". Seananony (talk) 16:13, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

2024 campaign abortion statements and policies

This keeps being covered in the top RS discussion of his campaign. Needs to be mentioned. SPECIFICO talk 16:49, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Recentism (that "2024" is a clue). Doesn't need to be mentioned in this article. ―Mandruss  19:13, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
No, it's the next step building on his one great achievement in life, overturning Roe. By your argument, we would cut everything after mid-2023. SPECIFICO talk 03:11, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
I would cut about 50% of everything post-2014. ―Mandruss  03:42, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Sounds like something that should be covered in Donald Trump 2024 presidential campaign, not here. --User:Khajidha (talk) (contributions) 12:35, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
I disagree, this is not about his campaign this is Donald Trump 2024 presidential campaign, and this is where that belongs. Slatersteven (talk) 12:38, 29 August 2024 (UTC)
Clarify, the page you linked to, is about Trump's 2024 campaign. GoodDay (talk) 16:36, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Trump's personal views on abortion are fine, but in the context of his campaign I'm less convinced it belongs here. DN (talk) 04:52, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Belongs in his 2024 campaign page, not here. GoodDay (talk) 16:36, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

Denial of isolationism

Resolved
 – My proposal to put in the article body that Trump denied being an isolationist is not supported by consensus, but instead consensus is to remove “isolationist” from the lead which is the only place in this article that mentions it (his alleged isolationism is covered in another article about his foreign policy).

This edit removes Trump’s denial from the article body that he’s an isolationist, citing WP:MANDY which is an essay. WP:DENIALS takes precedence. See also WP:NOTMANDY. Note that we say in the lead that he’s been characterized as an isolationist. Anythingyouwant (talk) 18:11, 30 August 2024 (UTC)

We never say in the body that he's been described as isolationist, so we shouldn't say so in the lead. Honestly, we shouldn't be spending any lead space on how his political positions were described during the 2016 campaign. If it stays in the lead, it should be mentioned in the body, and then we can evaluate whether Trump's statement is due. It looks like we were citing an interview: have those comments gotten any other coverage? Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 19:11, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Agreed, we shouldn't say so in the lead, and so I support removing either the word or the whole sentence from the lead (or both). If the word is removed from the lead then it can stay out of the article body. This denial was reported in the NYT, and he repeated the denial after the 2016 election, see here. Anythingyouwant (talk) 19:26, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Some, of the "does he know what that term means" variety. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 21:10, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
2016 campaign: Trump is now running his third campaign, and he is still described as populist, protectionist, nationalist, promoting conspiracy theories, making many false and misleading racially charged, racist, and misogynistic statements, only worse than the first time around. Plus the violent and authoritarian statements, the "Big Lie", and increasing claims of election interference by the deep state/his opponents. Shouldn't that be reflected in the lead somehow? Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 21:27, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Nutshell at WP:MANDY: [...] The subject of an article is not exempt from the ordinary rules of reliability as a source on themselves. I would posit that Donald Trump is hardly a reliable source on himself. Need I count the ways? He says he's religious but can't recite a favorite passage from the Bible. That's one of a few dozen examples, I'd estimate. How much evidence do we need that he says he's whatever he thinks will earn him votes?
Yes, lead summarizes body and lead should not include anything not in body. ―Mandruss  20:31, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
FYI, by mentioning Trump's denials as reported in a reliable source, Trump isn't being used as a reliable source. It's not a matter of whether or not he is an isolationist, just that he says he is not an isolationist. Bob K31416 (talk)
WP:BLP says, “If the subject has denied such allegations, their denial(s) should be reported too.” There is no exception for BLP subjects who are believers in God but cannot quote chapter and verse from the Bible. But if we don’t include the allegation then we needn’t include the denial. It’s worth repeating that the word “isolationist” is “the most feared epithet in the U.S. foreign policy establishment”. It’s an “odious epithet” having “pejorative connotations”. We already say he’s a non-interventionist in the article body, which is fine, well-cited, not denied by Trump, and has some similarities with isolationism. Anythingyouwant (talk) 20:34, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
So let's remove "isolationist" from the lead. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 21:20, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
Okay. Anythingyouwant (talk) 00:43, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
@Mandruss Agreed, it should be in the body. Lots on his foreign policy page:
As president, Trump described himself as a nationalist[1] while espousing views that have been characterized as isolationist, non-interventionist, and protectionist,[2][3][4] although the "isolationist" label has been disputed,[5][6][7][8][9][10] including by Trump himself,[11][12] and periods of his political career have been described by the alternative term “semi-isolationist.”[13][14][15] Seananony (talk) 02:43, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Sources

  1. ^ Cummings, William (October 24, 2018). "'I am a nationalist': Trump's embrace of controversial label sparks uproar". USA Today.
  2. ^ Rucker, Philip; Costa, Robert (March 21, 2016). "Trump questions need for NATO, outlines noninterventionist foreign policy". The Washington Post.
  3. ^ Nelson, Reid J. Epstein and Colleen McCain (28 June 2016). "Donald Trump Lays Out Protectionist Views in Trade Speech". Wall Street Journal. Retrieved 23 June 2022.
  4. ^ Dodson, Kyle; Brooks, Clem (20 September 2021). "All by Himself? Trump, Isolationism, and the American Electorate". The Sociological Quarterly. 63 (4): 780–803. doi:10.1080/00380253.2021.1966348. ISSN 0038-0253. S2CID 240577549.
  5. ^ Posen, Barry. “The Rise of Illiberal Hegemony: Trump’s Surprising Grand Strategy”, Foreign Affairs, Vol. 97, p. 20 (2018): "Some have gone so far as to apply to Trump the most feared epithet in the U.S. foreign policy establishment: 'isolationist.' In fact, Trump is anything but."
  6. ^ Stranne, Frida. "Trump’s Foreign Policy Agenda is Anything but Isolationism", American Studies in Scandinavia, 52:1 (2020), pp. 99-120.
  7. ^ Faux, Jeff. ““Donald Trump is no isolationist”, Slate (Nov 25, 2017).
  8. ^ Wertheim, Stephen. “Quit calling Donald Trump an isolationist. He’s worse than that.”, Washington Post (Feb 17, 2017).
  9. ^ Meaney, Thomas. “Warfare State,” London Review of Books (5 Nov 2020): “The administration has been presented as ‘isolationist’ yet has agreed bilateral trade deals around the world and strengthened ties with Japan, Israel and Saudi Arabia – three traditional partners – while undertaking major war games against Russia and China. This year’s Defender Europe 20 would have been the US army’s largest exercise on the continent in 25 years if Covid-19 hadn’t limited its scope. It’s hard to detect any measurable change in approach. Even Trump’s attempt to pressure Beijing into abandoning industrial measures that allegedly give it an unfair advantage in international trade have ample precedent in Reagan’s 1980s trade war with Japan.”
  10. ^ Mearsheimer, John and Anderson, John, Direct: Prof. John Mearsheimer, American political scientist,” 55:30 (8 Dec 2023).
  11. ^ Transcript: Donald Trump Expounds on His Foreign Policy Views,” New York Times (March 16, 2016): “We won’t be isolationists — I don’t want to go there because I don’t believe in that. I think we’ll be very worldview, but we’re not going to be ripped off anymore by all of these countries.”
  12. ^ “Trump claims he is 'not an isolationist' during German Chancellor Merkel's US visit”, The Independent (17 Mar 2017).
  13. ^ Watson, Kathryn. “Trump's shift away from ‘America first’ stance polarizes supporters”, CBS News (14 Apr 2017): “These actions, which came as the White House weighs what to do in the event of a North Korea nuclear test, clearly pivot from Mr. Trump’s previous, semi-isolationist stance. Mr. Trump on the campaign trail espoused his ‘America first’ philosophy, saying he would beef up America’s military presence, but avoid tumultuous areas like the Middle East to focus on American interests.”
  14. ^ John Cassidy, Donald Trump Is Transforming the G.O.P. into a Populist, Nativist Party, New Yorker (February 29, 2016): Trump seeks "a more populist, nativist, avowedly protectionist, and semi-isolationist party that is skeptical of immigration, free trade, and military interventionism."
  15. ^ Denton, Robert. The 2016 US Presidential Campaign Political Communication and Practice, p. 296 (Soringer, 2017): “Trump's 2016 messages drew heavily on his personal image enhanced by media exposure. His positions were right-wing populism-nativist, protectionist, and semi-isolationist and differed in many ways from traditional conservatism.”
I think it’s enough to say in the article body that he’s non-interventionist. If we get into alleged isolationism, reliable sources differ, and we’d probably need to include denial. The non-interventionist already covers a lot of what isolationist covers, whereas non-interventionist is undisputed by reliable sources (and by Trump himself). Anythingyouwant (talk) 03:31, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
"The swelling US military posture around the world under Trump has served as only the latest piece of confirmation that Trump would not be the non-interventionist president that some had hoped he would be." CNN 2018 Bob K31416 (talk) 05:54, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

America First (policy) is one of his core campaign theres. It's not relevant whether he knows or cares what that means. SPECIFICO talk 18:42, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

Another suggestion for intro

The intro jumps around a lot. How about combining these two sentences: Trump won the 2016 presidential election as the Republican Party nominee against Democratic Party candidate Hillary Clinton while losing the popular vote.[a] The Mueller special counsel investigation determined that Russia engaged in election interference to favor Trump. During the campaign, his political positions were described as populist, protectionist, and nationalist. His election and policies sparked numerous protests. He was the only U.S. president without prior military or government experience.

Here's my suggestion: Trump won the 2016 presidential election as the Republican Party nominee against Democratic Party candidate Hillary Clinton while losing the popular vote.{{efn|name=electoral-college|Presidential elections in the U.S. are decided by the Electoral College, becoming the first president in U.S. history without prior military or government experience. Seananony (talk) 21:07, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

@Seananony Sorry, that didn't copy well, but anyway you can see I'm combining the first and last sentences of the quote. Seananony (talk) 21:09, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

If it's considered important, those two things can be made adjacent without combining them into one sentence. Without good reason, sentences should not be made that long because it impacts readability. ―Mandruss  21:37, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

Notes

  1. ^ Presidential elections in the U.S. are decided by the Electoral College. Each state names a number of electors equal to its representation in Congress and (in most states) all electors vote for the winner of their state's popular vote.

Lead sentences about being current nominee

User:Seananony made this good-faith edit deleting the following sentence from the last paragraph of the lead: “Since leaving office, Trump has continued to dominate the Republican Party and is their candidate again in the 2024 presidential election.” It’s true some of this repeats info in the opening paragraph, but later paragraphs of a lead often elaborate on stuff in the opening paragraph. The problem here is it was more like repetition than elaboration. So I’d suggest restoring the sentence, but editing it to include further information, perhaps the name of his VP nominee, or who got the second-most delegates, or who his opponent in the general election is. Anythingyouwant (talk) 22:04, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

@Anythingyouwant
I undid it. I like your suggestions. Seananony (talk) 23:17, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

Removing sentence about special counsel in lead

Resolved
 – This proposal of mine to delete the sentence about the special counsel in the third paragraph of the lead has clearly not garnered consensus here, but what has garnered consensus is changing it to, “The Mueller investigation established that Russia interfered in the election to favor Trump". Anythingyouwant (talk) 04:15, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Resolved, really? Changing the sentence to the version you changed it to wasn't the subject of the discussion, and it wasn't considered by several of the editors. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 14:55, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

Consider this sentence that’s now in the lead:

A special counsel investigation established that Russia had interfered in the election to favor Trump.

I suggest deleting this sentence, because the special counsel investigation was a much bigger deal when it was still an open question whether Trump would be indicted for colluding with Russia. The special counsel decided not to. That happened years ago, and there’s now more to say about Trump in this lead because of later events.

Based on conversation a couple sections up on this talk page, there’s no consensus to lengthen this sentence to explain that investigators didn’t find evidence to indict Trump or his campaign, or to mention that investigators haven’t been able to say that the Russian interference affected the election outcome. That would have provided important context and clarification.

It’s very hard to justify keeping the words “A special counsel investigation established that” since the remaining words of the sentence are undisputed. I propose to just omit the whole sentence. Unfortunately, foreign governments have often interfered in U.S. elections (and vice versa), but those have generally not been conspiracies with U.S. politicians, so they’ve typically not been covered in the leads of those politicians’ BLPs. I’m not suggesting here to remove or shorten anything in this article’s body. Anythingyouwant (talk) 15:09, 26 August 2024 (UTC)

I support this removal per proposer. ―Mandruss  19:23, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Oppose. OP didn't get his way failed to achieve consensus in Talk:Donald_Trump#Russia_in_third_paragraph_of_lead and now just wants to go scorched earth, simply omit the passage entirely, which would be the whitewashing of an important event. Zaathras (talk) 21:21, 26 August 2024 (UTC) (updated verbiage) Zaathras (talk) 22:19, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Denied. Anythingyouwant (talk) 22:01, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
@Zaathras: Your comment is way out of line and you know it. Please strike. ―Mandruss  22:16, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Mandruss - user talk for that kind of comment. SPECIFICO talk 22:38, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
1. Contrary to many years of accepted practice here, as I'm sure you know. 2. I doubt user talk would result in a strike. It stands a better chance here. 3. In any case, this shows less experienced editors that we have a higher standard of behavior at this article. 4. Hardly an undue distraction, until it becomes a drawn-out debate. 5. In any case, user talk for that kind of comment, no? Your correction belongs here but mine does not? Make that make sense. ―Mandruss  23:22, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Bud, the OP literally stated "It would be better to entirely omit the sentence in the lead, than to cherry pick the one finding of the special counsel that reflects most poorly on Trump." in the previous section. It is not a wild or specious observation that the OP's 1st choice was modification, and when that failed, the backup choice is complete omission. "Scorched earth" is not such a severe pejorative that it justifies your attempt to censor my initial entry. So, kindly with sugar and cherries, do not do that again. Not your place. If you wish to hate everything after my initial comment, even this one, I permit that. Zaathras (talk) 21:36, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Comment on content—Bud—not contributor. I did not invent that principle. The initial proposal failed and this one is an alternative proposal. There is nothing improper about it; it happens all the time. So, kindly with sugar and cherries, do not do that again. I'm not going to re-revert because I don't edit war. As for any future such cases, I may well "do it again", depending on my mood. Not your place. Wrong again. Until we have an independent Wikipedia police force (I'd vote for that), it's everybody's place. You have NO CASE here. ―Mandruss  21:50, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
We also have the principle of WP:PACT. Zaathras (talk) 22:14, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
My NPA policy trumps your PACT essay, and I'd posit it has a lot more community support. That's why your PACT essay is an essay. ―Mandruss  22:17, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
It's a good thing that there were no NPAs then. Your opinion if one is or is not carries no weight, I'm afraid. I have struck (not censored) some of the wording, so if that is not to your liking now, that would be a you problem. Zaathras (talk) 22:23, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
You haven't just stricken, you have also inserted, and without indicating such per WP:REDACT, thus destroying context. For the record, this was your comment until just now. ―Mandruss  22:45, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Um, that's kind of the point of striking text - one restates what was previously said in different words. We're done here. Zaathras (talk) 22:56, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Um, that reasoning is contrary to REDACT. Without underscoring what's new, it's impossible to tell what was previously said. Again, I didn't invent the principle. ―Mandruss  23:49, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Oppose removal. simple, straightforward, significant, sourced and succinct. SPECIFICO talk 22:17, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Why? There is a considerable amount of coverage on this throughout Trump's political career and beyond. It remains a significant point in the minds of security experts and historians. What evidence have you presented here that suggests it is now insignificant and will not be discussed and studied well over ten years from now, let alone since 2016? DN (talk) 22:14, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Who says everything significant has to go in the lead? I already said explicitly that this proposal would not affect the article body. It’s better to leave it entirely in the article body than to have the sentence we have now in the lead. I proposed a way to improve it, that was rejected, so now I’m instead proposing to delete it in the lead, but leave the article body as-is. Anythingyouwant (talk) 00:41, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
No one, including myself, is suggesting everything significant has to go in the lead. Nor has anyone made it clear why either of these suggestions offer any substantial improvement. DN (talk) 02:05, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Not to put to fine a point on it, but the article Russian interference in the 2016 United States elections isn't likely to remove Trump's name anytime soon. DN (talk) 22:31, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
We could add that Mueller dispatched numerous Trump cronies and staff to the hoosegow, later to be pardoned by Trump without the usual process. SPECIFICO talk 22:44, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
You apparently want to pack the sentence full of as much anti-Trump material as possible, while studiously avoiding any mention (1) that the special counsel decided not to indict him; (2) that he has always denied the accusation; (3) that no investigators have concluded the interference made any difference; (4) that foreign election interference is unfortunately common as in the U.S. interference in the 1996 Russian election, etc, etc. I don’t understand why you oppose NPOV so much, it seems like a laudable Wikipedia policy. Not well enforced, but laudable in principle. Anythingyouwant (talk) 23:15, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Focus on content, not contributor. This kind of comment is not only inappropriate but guaranteed to be ineffective. Why do we have to keep making this point with highly experienced editors? ―Mandruss  23:44, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Oppose special counsel concluded that John Bois (talk) 23:47, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
Oppose for now. Still waiting on a response with evidence as to why this may be considered UNDUE or non-neutral. Cheers. DN (talk) 00:39, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
It’s poorly written because the words “A special counsel investigation established that” are superfluous. Reliable sources are unanimous that Russia interfered, there’s no need to attribute it to the special counsel. If the special counsel is mentioned, that implies Trump was investigated, because that’s what a special counsel is for, and so we’d be obliged to mention that the special counsel did not find sufficient evidence to charge Trump with any wrongdoing, just like we do with other people who are investigated, see e.g. Steven Hatfill. Even if people somehow think mentioning a special counsel doesn’t suggest an investigation of Trump, still there was such an investigation, and its outcome is just as relevant (more so) to the Trump BLP as whether Russia interfered. Since editors here have decided they don’t want to change the sentence, I suggested to get rid of it, not because it’s insignificant, but because it can be adequately covered in the article body. Anythingyouwant (talk) 00:50, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
I imagine the contents of the body that are not covered in the lead has already been discussed quite a bit. What new evidence is there that should give cause to revisit previous consensus? Why compare Trump to Hatfill? DN (talk) 02:16, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
What previous consensus? ―Mandruss  02:20, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Has this never been brought up before now? DN (talk) 02:45, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
I'd be surprised if it hasn't been discussed. That doesn't constitute a consensus that shouldn't be revisited without new argument or a change in the external situation. That's reserved for explicit consensuses—prior discussions showing clear consensus, with or without a consensus list entry. It's a fairly high bar. ―Mandruss  02:55, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
To clarify, I began my original response with "I imagine...". Forgive me if it was presumptuous of me to assume that there had been some form of consensus, explicit or otherwise, but I meant no harm by it. It's been in the lead for some time now. The first discussion I could see was around March 2017 / archive 51, but I could be wrong. Who knows how many since then.
Beyond that, considering he is the current GOP presidential nominee about 3 months out from the election, the timing seems a bit off to assume this aspect of his administration has faded into the ether without RS confirming this claim.
Side note, there is also a new book coming out in September called “Interference: The Inside Story of Trump, Russia, and the Mueller Investigation”.
Cheers. DN (talk) 03:44, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
AThing, have you actually read Mueller's report? Trump most certainly was investigated, and his hobbling of the inquiry was noted at length. That, along with DOJ policy against charging a sitting POTUS are the reasons Trump was not indicted. SPECIFICO talk 02:29, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
Way deep down in the obscure depths of this BLP is this accurate and balanced sentence: “Despite ‘numerous links between the Russian government and the Trump campaign’, the report found that the prevailing evidence ‘did not establish’ that Trump campaign members conspired or coordinated with Russian interference.[527][528]” Anythingyouwant (talk) 03:02, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
So? The lead also doesn't mention the second clause in this accurate and balanced sentence: "The report revealed sweeping Russian interference and detailed how Trump and his campaign welcomed and encouraged it, believing it would benefit them electorally." Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 07:59, 27 August 2024 (UTC)
And the prevailing evidence was limited by Trump's non-cooperation and likely obstruction. Also and: please stop repeating the Trump/Barr lie "no collusion". SPECIFICO talk 16:09, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Mueller Report: “the investigation did not establish that members of the Trump campaign conspired or coordinated with the Russian government and its election interference activities”. Deal with it. Anythingyouwant (talk) 16:30, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Let's not cherry-pick and instead try to find some consensus, please. DN (talk) 17:10, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Misrepresenting that as you have is not acceptable. SPECIFICO talk 16:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
If we can't find consensus here, perhaps we need an RfC so you two can cool off. DN (talk) 17:12, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

Comment: no one has disagreed with the statement at the start of this section that, “It’s very hard to justify keeping the words ‘A special counsel investigation established that’ since the remaining words of the sentence are undisputed.” This in-text attribution is unnecessary, see Wikipedia:You don't need to cite that the sky is blue, so I plan to remove that, while leaving the rest of the sentence. This lead doesn’t include footnotes because everything (including Russian interference) is amply supported in the article body. Anythingyouwant (talk) 15:00, 28 August 2024 (UTC)

I'd oppose such a removal. This isn't simple attribution. I think the status quo is fine, but if there's agreement that a change is needed, I'd also be fine with something like "Russia had interfered in the election to favor Trump, a fact established by a special counsel investigation." Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 15:13, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
Why is it not simple attribution? It was widely reported by all reliable sources both before and after the Mueller Report was written. To the extent this attribution slyly suggests Trump was the subject of a special counsel investigation, shouldn’t we also mention that the investigation didn’t find any collusion by his campaign? Making that determination was the reason why the special counsel was appointed. Anythingyouwant (talk) 15:36, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
I'm still wondering why we aren't looking at the most recent discussions likely responsible for its inclusion in the first place. We could be beating a dead horse here. DN (talk) 15:40, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
If the issue of unnecessary attribution was raised before, feel free to give us a link. Anythingyouwant (talk) 15:53, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
I've already stated the reasons for my opposition. If anyone wants to change my mind, they can do the work. DN (talk) 16:00, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Oppose complete removal. A shortening might work, per AYW's own words: "It’s very hard to justify keeping the words “A special counsel investigation established that” since the remaining words of the sentence are undisputed." If we shorten it, I suggest:
"An investigation found that Russia interfered in the election to favor Trump."
Valjean (talk) (PING me) 21:23, 28 August 2024 (UTC)
That’s fine, User:Valjean, although an editor objected elsewhere that wikilinking “an investigation” to the Mueller investigation would be an Easter Egg. I’m not convinced that’s correct, but in the interest of compromise I suggested “The Mueller investigation found that Russia interfered in the election to favor Trump.” User:Space4Time3Continuum2x then reverted, saying there’s an ongoing discussion, but as far as I know, no one has objected at this talk page to

“The Mueller investigation found that Russia interfered in the election to favor Trump.”. No one has explained what the problem is, if any. The reason it’s better is that “special counsel” implied a special investigation of executive branch officers who would have a conflict investigating themselves, and thus we’d have to say in the lead what the special counsel investigation found not just about Russia but also about the executive branch officers who were investigated for violations of law. Anyway, if no one gives any reason why “The Mueller investigation” is worse than “a special counsel investigation” then I will reinsert it. By the way, Space4Time, please see Don't revert due solely to "no consensus”. Anythingyouwant (talk) 00:21, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

due solely to "no consensus”? What are you talking about? If you'referring to this revert, my edit summary linked to this ongoing discussion that you either considered closed or decided to ignore. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 14:03, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Oppose removal and the suggested shortened sentence (and Anythingyouwant's premature closing of this discussion). "An investigation" — there was more than one: The intelligence agencies and the FBI, the Senate investigation, Special Counsel aka Mueller. If we're going to shorten, then I suggest Russia interfered in the election to favor Trump. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 13:18, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
    Russia interfered in the election to favor Trump, with his encouragement. SPECIFICO talk 13:53, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
    I’ll jump back onto this discussion since I was pinged. I didn’t close this discussion about removing the sentence. As for putting into the lead that Trump encouraged the Russian interference, I would support that under two conditions. First, our cited source says, “Trump and his campaign aided or encouraged those interference efforts, even if unwittingly” so we would have to include the unwittingly part. Second, it seems obvious to me that Mueller’s primary mission was to determine whether the Trump campaign unlawfully conspired or coordinated with Russia, and Mueller did not establish such unlawful activity, so we would have to include that too. Otherwise, SPECIFICO’s suggestion is fine. Anythingyouwant (talk) 17:09, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
    Yeah, you effectively closed it by editing the lead before the discussion had reached a consensus. Unwittingly? puhleaze: "Russia, if you're listening". If the lead doesn't mention whether or not Trump aided or encouraged, we don't have get into that. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 17:26, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
    It’s fairly obvious that you disagree with the “unwitting” characterization in our cited source, and you also seem to disagree with the Mueller Report’s conclusion that it could not establish Trump-Russia coordination or conspiracy. You’re welcome to have your own opinions of course, but I wish you would not use them to edit this BLP. You apparently rely on Trump’s statement at a press conference in 2016, urging Russia to help find HRC emails. Trump elaborated the same day in a tweet: “If Russia or any other country or person has Hillary Clinton's 33,000 illegally deleted emails, perhaps they should share them with the FBI!” This seems like a valid thing to say, far short of urging Russia to conspire or coordinate with his campaign, wittingly or not, but I’m willing to follow our sources and put “unwittingly” in the lead. You’re not, but please reconsider. Anythingyouwant (talk) 17:38, 30 August 2024 (UTC)
If there is consensus for "The Mueller investigation found that Russia interfered in the election to favor Trump.” I suppose it could be an acceptable resolution, although I still don't agree there's an issue with the term "special counsel" in this context, as far as BLP rules are concerned. This all happened before the RECENT SCOTUS opinion, and RS continues to examine the fallout from that debacle into 2024. Cheers. DN (talk) 04:47, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Without "Special Counsel" it could be like the Geraldo Rivera Al Capone dig or Dateline NBC. SPECIFICO talk 13:43, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

Why do we have another thread about the same sentence as the one in #Russia in third paragraph of lead? First you want to change it, and when that didn't work, you want to remove it entirely. Hell no. That's pretty tendentious. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 01:12, 31 August 2024 (UTC)

The previous section proposed to substantially expand the sentence in question. This section has made an alternate proposal to delete it or simply change “special counsel” to something else. I agree with your proposal in this section about changing “special counsel” to something else. There’s nothing tendentious about it. One proposal was rejected so I tried another. And I’ve said repeatedly that I agree with your proposal, which is not tendentious either. Anythingyouwant (talk) 01:18, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Okay. Let's move on. Did you suggest something like this?
"The Mueller investigation established that Russia interfered in the election to favor Trump."
Would that work? -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 01:31, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Yes, that would be okay. And for the record, I specifically asked User:Mandruss if I should start this section, and I followed his wise advice. Anythingyouwant (talk) 01:33, 31 August 2024 (UTC)
Valjean, an investigation by some guy named Mueller instead of the special counsel investigation known as the Mueller special counsel investigation? Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 12:22, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

@Anythingyouwant:, you have now twice replaced the link to Russian interference in the 2016 US presidential election in the lead with the link to Foreign election interference, a general article that shouldn't be linked in the lead at all per MOS:OVERLINK. That's getting close to edit-warring, and what part of consensus 60 and the RfC don't you understand? Chronology: Your first edit, reverted here, my edit pointing out consensus 60, your reinstatement. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 22:07, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

You are not being accurate. What you call “your first edit” did not remove any wiki link. And what you call your “edit pointing out consensus 60” did not reinstate any wikilink. Also, your statement just now seems to be the first objection I have seen to the wikilink to foreign electoral intervention. The previous objections were based on WP:EGG, and I modified my edit to address that objection. Incidentally, we should not be pushing a POV here. It is not a good idea to deliberately hide from readers that foreign electoral intervention is a fairly common occurrence with a long history. The overlinking charge is frankly absurd. If you want to see what overlooking is, I’ll give you an example: it’s wiki linking to the Mueller investigation (which thoroughly described the Russian interference found in 2016) and then gratuitously wiki linking in the very same sentence to another Wikipedia article about Russian interference (which of course is available via the Mueller investigation article). Anythingyouwant (talk) 22:16, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Look at the edits I cited chronologically. Not sure what Specifico meant with that cryptic "egg" remark. What the edit did was revert the link to "Foreign election interference", and my correction of the wording pointing out the consensus was pretty clear, me thinks. Also, there's the other discussion you started above at Talk:Donald_Trump#Russia_in_third_paragraph_of_lead which says keep the status quo ante. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 22:29, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
I did look at the edits you cited. And I just said above: “You are not being accurate. What you call ‘your first edit’ did not remove any wiki link. And what you call your ‘edit pointing out consensus 60’ did not reinstate any wikilink.” Anythingyouwant (talk) 22:32, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
Looks like violations of BRD, with multiple reverts.
To avoid further disruption here, I've decided to take concerns to your personal talk page. Unless these rules are no longer in effect, or for some reason don't apply to you, this entire discussion now seems like a complete mess as well as a waste of time. DN (talk) 01:59, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
You're right about one thing: your first edit didn't replace a link, it inserted a link where there was no link (also not abiding by consensus 60). Other than that, the chronology is as I stated above. Specifico challenged your edit by replacing the link with the link specified in consensus 60. I then amended the sentence wording, including the link, to comply with consensus 60. Then you reinstated the challenged Foreign election interference link and the wording I had challenged by reverting to the consensus wording. I've now reverted the sentence to comply with consensus 60 until a different consensus has formed, and neither this discussion nor Talk:Donald_Trump#Russia_in_third_paragraph_of_lead looks as though it's headed that way. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 13:10, 2 September 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 15 September 2024

plz 100.7.65.233 (talk) 13:50, 15 September 2024 (UTC)

This will not be done, as you have not told us what you want done. Slatersteven (talk) 14:00, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
You need to tell us what kind of edit you want us to make. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 14:02, 15 September 2024 (UTC)

Conflicts of interest

@Darknipples: there is no discussion or consensus for such a large and undue addition - please gain consensus for it before restoring. Nikkimaria (talk) 00:47, 3 September 2024 (UTC)

I did agree with your removal of "the upper part of Trump's right", as it is overly specific. I am not the one added it, and I was under the impression it was the status quo version. It appears Seananony may be the one that recently added it. I will undue the revert with my apologies. Cheers. DN (talk) 01:30, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
I copied that from the assassination article as it had a solid consensus. It wasn't just one editor's formulation. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 01:50, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
Thank you for the clarification. If you feel it is still DUE please, by all means, elaborate for us. Cheers. DN (talk) 04:34, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
I think the current version has enough detail for this article. -- Valjean (talk) (PING me) 05:39, 3 September 2024 (UTC)

Trump's promotion/appointment to president of his father's company

About the recent changes to the lead: according to biographer Gwenda Blair, all Trump got was a new job description while father Fred "kicked himself upstairs to be chairman of the board". There was no board, and Fred kept running the company as before. In current GOP parlance, Donald became PINO, president in name only. We should use "named" in the body and in the lead. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 22:16, 1 September 2024 (UTC)

I’m satisfied with how User:SPECIFICO edited the sentence in question to say that his father “made” him president. If you’re suggesting we add language to say how meaningless that was,?I’d suggest going to the article about the Trump Organization and hashing it out there first. It’s unclear how he could have “reoriented the company toward building and renovating skyscrapers, hotels, casinos, and golf courses” if his father was actually calling all the shots. The only source you cite is Blair, and then you immediately dispute Blair’s assertion that there was a Board, so apparently you are not relying on any particular source. Anythingyouwant (talk) 23:00, 1 September 2024 (UTC)
No, I’m suggesting we should keep "named". By now Donald had a new job description. His father had kicked himself upstairs to be chairman of the board, and Donald was now president of the family business. One of his first acts was to bypass all the pedestrian corporate names used by his father and instead adopt one classy-sounding label, the Trump Organization, as a sort of umbrella identity. Blair’s writing is ironic. She doesn’t say there was a board, just that Fred gave himself the title. If he had named himself "Grand Poobah", it would have been just as noneffective. He owned and ran the company, whose business was managing his rental apartments in Brooklyn and Queens, built in the years before Donald started working for him. Fred kept on running the company and holding the purse strings until he developed dementia in the early 90s while Donald was off planning and building in Manhattan and Atlantic City. When the DOJ sued the Trumps for racial discrimination in 1973, Trump testified that he had nothing to do with renting apartments, "although in an application for a broker’s license filed at the same time he said that he was in charge of all rentals" (Blair, p. 252) - PINO. Space4Time3Continuum2x🖖 12:09, 3 September 2024 (UTC)

Business & personal life - Roy Cohn

Roy Cohn needs to be mentioned in one of these sections because without him Donald trump wouldn’t be the same person he is today Roy taught him many strategies in business which he uses for his political career today John Bois (talk) 20:50, 3 September 2024 (UTC)

Is there not any mention of their relationship in the article at all? Too much is likely UNDUE. DN (talk) 20:53, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
Amazingly no mention at all John Bois (talk) 21:22, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
Amazingly false. ―Mandruss  21:51, 3 September 2024 (UTC)
It should be mentioned in a small form nearly every action he took in office was based off Cohns methods and ideology John Bois (talk) 21:23, 3 September 2024 (UTC)