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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Narutolovehinata5 talk 14:54, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by JuniperChill (talk), Justpim888 (talk), Potter petchdee (talk), and 2405:9800:B641:3F8:6DDC:DF9:E625:8FAB (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

JuniperChill (talk) 23:37, 10 November 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • The majority of this article's 5x expanded content is not cited, which given the scope of it is insurmountable for the purposes of DYK. Also the hook is not interesting - I would wager that getting a release or port delayed over company business is pretty common. The second is a little interesting but still scraping the bottom of the barrel, a lot of games had kickstarter goals that they reached fast. PARAKANYAA (talk) 01:55, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Fine, I would like to withdraw this then. I didn't think about the fact that it needs more citations. Maybe the plot section doesn't need them because they can be verified in game. A hook about it being one the most successful Kickstarters of 2021 maybe more interesting. But due to the amount of work, the fact im withdrawing it still stands. It isn't my own work anyways. JuniperChill (talk) 11:03, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Gameplay Section

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I just did a preliminary copy edit pass, however the majority of the Gameplay section seems to violate WP:NOTGUIDE which puts it out of compliance with the MOS for video game articles (MOS:VG). I'll likely come back to this in a couple days and significantly trim the article as part of more copy editing if no one has a compelling objection. Amstrad00 (talk) 18:33, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]