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As of 25 December 2024, 11:51 (UTC), this page is active and open for discussion. An FAC coordinator will be responsible for closing the nomination.
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Nominator(s): Ippantekina (talk) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about a lesser-known song by Taylor Swift. Well... I don't know what else to introduce about Ms. Swift, so err, enjoy this song and article, I guess? I believe this article is well-written and comprehensive for an FA, and I'm open to any and all comments :) Ippantekina (talk) 16:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Aoba47

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  • I am uncertain about "see" in this context, (lyrics see Swift calling out), as lyrics can obviously not see anything. Maybe a different word choice here would be better?
  • Should the lead clarify that this song was released prior to the album? I think that it would help to explain its status as a promotional single, and readers may be unaware that this download release on the iTunes Store was done prior to the album's release. It may be obvious though so feel free to disagree.
  • For this part, (a March 2009 episode), it may be helpful to link "Turn, Turn, Turn" (CSI episode), which is a redirect to the episode. The redirect is already used in the article so it would be consistent to use it in the lead as well. I think you could just link the phrase without naming the episode as it is not notable enough to mention by name in the lead.
  • It may be nice to link catchy, but this is just a suggestion.
  • I would link re-recording in the lead and in the article itself.
  • Why is the "Release" section placed before the "Music and lyrics" section? It seems out of order.
  • Thank you for the explanation and for the link to the other example. I can understand using a certain order if the information is best presented that way so this should not be an issue for me. Aoba47 (talk) 12:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • The word "released" is repeated multiple times in the first paragraph of the "Release" section, and it would be good to add variety.
  • Just out of curiosity, and apologies in advance if this is obvious, but how was the electronic remix released? Was it put out as a standalone remix on places like iTunes Store? I am guessing based on when it was released that it was not made available on the Fearless album, or at least physical copies.
  • I would avoid the repetition in saying "sing the song".
  • The following source (here) has credited authors that are not included in the citation.

I hope that this review is helpful. Once everything has been addressed, I will read through the article again a few more times just to make sure that I have not missed anything. I doubt that I will find anything significant though as you have done a great job with writing about one of Swift's lesser-known songs. The mention of the CSI guest appearance, as well as the iTunes Store, are big throwbacks for me. It would be cool if she ever performed that remix live. Anyway, best of luck with this FAC! Aoba47 (talk) 16:29, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: thanks for the review! I've addressed your comments above. Let me know if any outstanding concerns remain :) Ippantekina (talk) 06:09, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for addressing everything. You have done a wonderful job with this article, and I support this FAC for promotion based on the prose. I always enjoy reading through your articles, and I hope you are having a great start to your week. Aoba47 (talk) 12:44, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your kind words as always :) Ippantekina (talk) 13:36, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I am just glad that I could help. I have posted my image and media review below as I thought that it may be helpful to get that out of the way. Everything looks good to me with that. I just have a quick question about the summary for the audio sample. Aoba47 (talk) 14:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

brachy0008 (minor)

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hi! this is my… second FA review… im completely inexperienced (i did review a mariah carey article before (FA)) and as advice, im here… to do more reviews for a little prep for my you know, first FAC

  • Erin Strecker of Billboard wrote about how seems a bit ambiguous.
  • Rob Sheffield writing for Blender: Where is the commas? Minor punctuation error. (/j)

and that is all the nitpicking i could find so far. will get back to you later ;D

Image and media review (pass)

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Image use and placement make sense to me. Both images have appropriate WP:ALT text. The WP:FUR is complete and well-done forFile:Taylor Swift - You're Not Sorry.png, and I do not see any issues with File:Taylor Swift - Fearless Tour - Los Angeles 05.jpg. The audio sample, File:YoureNotSorry sample.ogg, has a clear purpose and use in the article, but I do have a quick question about this part. The file information for this sample seems shorter than those you have done for other Taylor Swift articles, such as this one for "Labyrinth" (Taylor Swift song), and I was wondering about the reason for it? Once this has been addressed, this will pass my image and media review. Aoba47 (talk) 14:08, 23 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, Aoba. I've added detailed FUR for the audio sample. Let me know if that works! Ippantekina (talk) 05:08, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Everything looks good to me. Thank you for addressing this. Aoba47 (talk) 13:52, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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