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(Moved from main article space) The history is good and the beginning of the article is good but you should fix the spelling errors. Also I think adding some pictures to your article would make it more interesting when you do just be sure to cite them. When you go to revise your the geography section of your article be sure to go a little bit more in depth with it;such as adding some more facts.

Hi, I left a peer review for you. Everything looks good so far! Raelanes (talk) 01:41, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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The content is pretty good, but you are not doing enough with the citations. All of this information is from different sources, and you need to include a proper citation for each use of a source. You are also having some trouble with the formatting. Let me know if you need some help.

JT: (talk) 23:02, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]