User talk:Srmjohns/sandbox

This is really well written--very concise in the wikipedia/encyclopedia-esque manner. At some point one of the sentences has a period and no space between the next sentence, so maybe do a quick read-through and make sure every period has a space after it! I also really enjoy the visual you created--was that original? Nice job--succinctly helps to gauge what asset mapping is. It reads well and the page looks clean. --Ann Marie Elmayan Amelmayan (talk) 14:10, 8 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I agree that this is clean, clear, concise. I made a few small grammar and formatting suggestions, in bold. Hmhanlon (talk) 18:18, 9 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]