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Article Draft

I think my article draft is ready to be peer reviewed. Also, I sent you an email about the Omega Man essay, but I'm not sure if you saw it. Thanks! Presleyjackson (talk) 03:08, 8 April 2021 (UTC)

Sourcing

Hi Prof Hanley, I picked Empty World for my article, but I'm having a difficult time finding any good sources for it. I'm worried I chose the wrong article. Is there any help you can offer me? Mcwright1981 (talk) 21:32, 29 March 2021 (UTC)

Have you tried the library databases? I did a quick search and found two peer-reviewed journal articles that mention/discuss Empty World. Also, search through the newspaper database on the library website. (There's a convenient link to it from the journal search results.). I think you'll be able to find four or five good sources. In addition to sourcing, think about what other work the page needs - - there are alerts on the page in re citation and plot summary, so those are two obvious spots to begin. But, I think the page could use a fair bit of additional work - - sentence-editing, organization, etc. The article also mentions film/tv adaptations (w/o citing sources) - - this may also be something to investigate. I.e. I still think it's a good candidate for work. ProfHanley (talk) 16:42, 30 March 2021 (UTC)

sourcing

Hey Mr. Hanley, I responded to you on my talk page. If you can check it out again for additional feedback that would be great. Thanks! --Oliviaabad (talk) 19:13, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

article choice

Hi Professor, I have finished my 3 article choice exercise, can you please check it so that I can move on to the next step? Thank You. Nathaly005 (talk) 00:10, 17 March 2021 (UTC)

Matt Help

Hi, Prof. Hanley, I completed the article evaluation and wanted to check in with you on my three candidates? Thank you, Mattwiki049 (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 05:50, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Article Choice

Hi Professor, I have my three choices for the article project up on my sandbox. Can you check which one is the better candidate? Thank you. MichelleCHsfsu (talk) 09:16, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Article Evaluation

Hi Professor, I published an Article Evaluation for the article I want to work on. Can you look over it so I can assign it to myself? (Please and thank you!) Presleyjackson (talk) 03:16, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Article Choice

Hi Professor Hanley. I put up my current choices for article pages. I'm not entirely confident on them, so please review them when you have a minute. I don't want to fall behind on this project. Thank you. Remchar88 (talk) 19:00, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Help!

Hey Professor Hanley . . help! ProfHanley (talk) 18:31, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Me

I teach American lit and American studies at San Francisco State University. ProfHanley (talk) ProfHanley (talk) 17:17, 12 September 2019 (UTC)

Wikipedia project

Here are our Featured Article candidates. Sign up to create a page for one of the following:

William Attaway - Livringo (talk)Olivia Ringo stephpires (talk) Stephanie Pires Nikki198705 (talk) Rowena Bautista Ctong 630 (talk) 02:18, 11 October 2011 (UTC) This is what I wanted to focus--since Attaway only finished 2 books and switched to a songwriter, I will work on blues music and also focus Attaway as a songwriter. I try to dig around and find a couple of songs as exampales. from there, i will try to talk about his musci style. What's his music about? what is he trying to express etc, etc... mv_tong 04:48, 14 October 2011 (UTC) Jobs (vague--we can all help each other): Olivia-early life and education, Rowena-later life, interviews, etc. Clara-music, Stephanie-works of literature Livringo (talk) 18:39, 25 October 2011 (UTC)— Preceding unsigned comment added by Livringo (talk • contribs) 18:37, 25 October 2011 (UTC)

Blood on the Forge Kristingoch (talk)user: caitlinannee (talk) -Michaela M (talk)(talk)(Mikayla Moore)Hey Guys, I'm willing to do the character information for the three Brothers if others are willing to take over a plot synopsis, theme section, and maybe a historical relevance section. Sound good? User:katiemcellistrim (talk) -Shannagrier (talk) 18:31, 18 October 2011 (UTC)ShannaGrier, Zoe SharpeZoesharpe (talk) 18:38, 6 October 2011 (UTC) -Ivanna Quiroz — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ivannalq (talk • contribs) 06:36, 6 October 2011 (UTC) -Rachel Marchetti — Preceding unsigned comment added by RMarchetti (talk • contribs) 18:43, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

Dagoberto Gilb – - The Magic of Blood -Natasha Correia user: Grahamhacia (talk)I will be covering the publication history and critical reception of this collection, while Natasha will report on the genre, themes, and style. For plot summaries, I will be doing the first half of the stories and Natasha will do the second.

Barbara Neely -Andreanamv (talk), Linda Munoz User:lindammunoz, lesbia perdomo User:lgperdomo, kate belknap ( User:katebelknap ), Corissa Chao User:CorissaC Hey group members, I am willing to take Biography and major works... what do you guys think?(Lindammunoz (talk)) Linda Sounds good, Linda. What else is there to work on besides Biography? Perhaps I can do the top part before the biography.

Blanche on the Lam Sarah Daly User: Sarahdaly44 ,C'Nedra McCoy (User:Serena530) Plan: We are really starting from scratch so... 1)introduction to summarize the novel 2)info on author 3)brief description of: the plot, characters, themes 4)historical backround/culture that the novel takes place in User:Sarahdaly44 —Preceding undated comment added 04:39, 13 October 2011 (UTC).

I'm willing to take on the info about the author, plot, characters, and themes.--Serena530 (talk) 05:44, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

Proletarian Poetry (-Russell Horvath rahorvath (talk) (-Jeff Anberg Aerdil (talk)) Sara Giusti Giusti18 (talk)

Philip Levine,

What Work Is Courtnee Rizzo Courtnee11 (talk), Jason Slavin JHSlavin (talk) 19:56, 7 October 2011 (UTC), Aissa Le aissale89 (talk), Alex Iavarone User:Spaniard2012 (talk), Liz Quilici IQuilici (talk)

Rebecca Harding Davis Anna Bergamini(Annamini (talk)), Genesse P'Oridge, Gui Oliveira (talk) http://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Talk:Rebecca_Harding_Davis LINK to our discussion page and plan.

Life in the Iron Mills Erika Rivas: Erika Rivas Rosalie Rivas Rrivas27 (talk) 09:11, 6 October 2011 (UTC)Rrivas27 Matt Heitland MattHeitland (talk) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 130.212.146.95 (talk) 18:38, 29 September 2011 (UTC) Brijet Finister — Preceding unsigned comment added by Missblackca2012 (talk • contribs) 08:39, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Life in the Iron Mills

IMPROVEMENT FOR "LIFE IN THE IRON MILLS" 1.We should expand the introduction of the short story 2.Add Background 3)Expand on literary analysis and theme I don't know what you guys think of the character and plot summary section. Any suggestions? This is just a rough outline...open to any suggestions. Erikar345 (talk) 20:03, 12 October 2011 (UTC)

I'd be willing to expand the literary analysis and themes section. It looks like all the sections could use some work. MattHeitland (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 23:12, 12 October 2011 (UTC).

I wouldnt mind doing the background section Erikar345 (talk) 04:42, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

I would like to talk about the intro of the story. For instance, what was the motivation for the piece, the dynamics the time the piece represents, etc. I also think there needs to be a reference to the author. I would love to add some photos, to give some visual to the page. -Brijet Finister

Brijet: I think that would be part of the background not the introduction. 130.212.127.101 (talk) 20:50, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

I have sources that we can use to start looking at different scholarly analysis of Life in the Iron Mills.

An ex. of a short story wiki page The Metamorphosis

Sources: Source 1 Source 2 Source 3 Source 4 Erikar345 (talk) 16:03, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

Prov. Hanley can you post a good status article example for a short story. thank you Erikar345 (talk) 20:02, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

Proletarian Poetry Group

So such an article does not exist, which is actually pretty cool and exciting. As with anything, though, how shall we begin? I propose to start with the basics: who, what, when, why, how, so what, concentrating on/around the 1930s...but then bringing it back up to today (i.e., I wonder if any of the Occupy Wall Street, SF, Oakland, Boston groups have written poetry?). Since there are only 3 of us, we can each pick 2 of the above mentioned 'basics'. I'm purdy down for whichever topic at this point.

What you guys think? Any and all suggestions welcome, yaya

Sara Giusti Giusti18 (talk) 02:59, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

From Russ (Don't understand this tilda/signing jargon of Wikipedia): Oh hell yeah we have to bring it up to today! I know the poetry of today isn't as "revered" or canonicalized as literary people worship the previous iterations of movements, but everything from the 1980s angst against Reagan i.e. Bad Religion, Nine Inch Nails up through Rage Against The Machine in the 90s, and even up to Dropkick Murphys now is totally proletarian poetry. With tunes, of course. But yes, the Big 5 seems like quite a good place to start for the literary period the main focus should be on. I could do the "what" and "why"/causes or instigating factors?

From Jeff: Perhaps we should be slightly selective in how we define "Proletarian" poetry? I hate to be contrarian and skeptical, and at the risk of sounding slightly too dogmatic, are we sure the more bourgeois and liberal forms of poetry from today would qualify? Would the Occupy Wallstreet (which has an ethos of inclusivity, from radicals to liberals to libertarians) or Nine Inch Nail's aesthetic have strong enough connotations with class struggle to be considered "proletarian"? Are we defining it simply as a relationship to labor rights? Is being merely anti-conservative a position strong enough to be considered proletarian? Certainly there's poetry from today that would qualify, but maybe some selectivity is in order? These are some questions to ponder before jumping ahead; it seems to me however that there needs to be at least some element of class-consciousness involved to differentiate it from merely the politically liberal/progressive or "bourgeois". This would be a good place to start research, to discover if there's an academic consensus on how to define this genre.

In any case, I would certainly be interested in working on Hughes, or the "who" and "where/when" generally. Aerdil (talk) 07:56, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

Hey! Jeff -- good points. We definitely need to begin here and go forward, and I'm glad you brought these up. It's going to make for a much stronger page and overall project. Thank you!

I do think we should still include anything we will consider proletarian poetry today in the article. Russ, that'd be awesome to bring NIN and other bands into the mix, haha. I guess, of course, this will need to be done after we figure out how/what we our definition of it will become...but we could argue such things, at least for kicks!

Does this leave me with the how, so what? Cuz I'm down. Hopefully in class today we can talk more about this. Stoked to have Wikipedia help too.

Sara Giusti Giusti18 (talk) 15:24, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

Rahorvath (talk) 00:04, 25 October 2011 (UTC) Do we have a stub yet? I'm wondering where and what to add. Feeling kind of lost on this start from scratch thing.

Assistance

I am wondering if you're part of any assistance program here at Wikipedia, (such as the the project Wikipedia:Ambassador)? Please let me know how I can be of assistance.

I will make other editors aware of you class project. Many will be happy to assist, if you need. Best wishes and again, welcome. :) Anna Frodesiak (talk) 06:42, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

Please see: Wikipedia:WikiProject Classroom coordination/SFSU Class Project. Best, Anna Frodesiak (talk) 10:26, 13 October 2011 (UTC)

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Assistance: A new project

Hello again. We would like to assist you with a new project. We will put a team together.

The focus of your class project is likely for your students to learn how to contribute well-sourced, encyclopedic content. Probably, Wikipedia's formatting of code and markup is secondary. So, we would like to help with that part.

We ask that you instruct your students to add their newly-created articles to the list here: Wikipedia:WikiProject Classroom coordination/SFSU Class Project. Helpers will take it from there. Of course, the student are encouraged to continue to improve and expand the content. In fact, they are free to do whatever they like to the articles.

Eventually, introduce students to history and diffs. This will allow them to see the improvements that the helpers are making to their articles. It will prevent them from being forced into daunting and confusing areas of Wikipedia. They can then approach it on their terms.

Some helpful instructions that you can give to your students are as follows:

• Check to see if the article already exists.
• Don't copy and paste. Write in your own words. Just the facts. No opinion.
• Browse other article to familarize yourself with the style.
• Use good sources for your information. For example:

• Your school library
• Google books
• Google scholar
• Google search: example site:edu

• Add the sources inline. For example: California is on the west coast of the United States.<ref>www.all-about-america.NYU.edu</ref>

Could you let us know about the course length and other relevant details? When do you expect them to start producing articles?

If you have any questions, please ask. Anna Frodesiak (talk) 08:10, 14 October 2011 (UTC)

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Email

Regarding your instructions over at User:Profhanley/teaching/literature_of_labor, you have requested that students work on Wikipedia not by email, but they are still adding their email addresses to the talk pages, which I've removed here. You may want to remind them to make use of the talk page. Viriditas (talk) 22:51, 18 October 2011 (UTC)

OK. Thanks. Profhanley (talk)

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English 717 Wikipedia Assignment

Root, Madison

Hi! I wanted to ask if you would please consider my Wikipedia page as being ready to transform from a sandbox chrysalis into a beautiful new page? I have reviewed the peer review that was left of my talk page and made the necessary adjustments. Thank you kindly, I look forward to hearing back from you. Best, Madisonnroot (talk) 02:42, 13 November 2018 (UTC).

Dr. Hanley, I have transferred my sandbox page into an original, official Wikipedia page. If you click the text, it will take you to my page on White Chrysanthemum (novel). Currently, it has an image but I don't know if that will change (I took the photograph of the book's cover). Let me know if there's anything that needs to be fixed, changed, improved, etc. Best, Madisonnroot (talk) 18:16, 29 November 2018 (UTC).

Zimmer, Peter

Hi! I was wondering if you would please consider my Wikipedia page as being ready to transform from my sandbox into the edited sections for Troy Jollimore? I reviewed the peer reviews on my talk page and made the right revisions accordingly. Thank you for all your help, Professor Hanley. I hope to hear back from you. Thanks, Pjzimmerjr (talk) 05:12, 27 November 2018 (UTC).

Shufro, Michael

Hello, Professor Hanley. I am ready to upload the content on my sandbox to the official wikipedia page. Please review and approve and I will make it real. Cheers, Michael. Michaelshufro (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 18:31, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Fitchett, Chandler

Hello Professor Hanley. I apologize for submitting so late. I believe my work is ready for publishing. Thanks so much, Chandler. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chandlerfitchett (talk • contribs) 20:36, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

ENG717- Wiki project!

Hi Professor Hanley, I wanted to let you know that I’m done with my wiki page and was wondering if you could please review it before I publish it. I made the necessary adjustments to my page based on the peer review. Thank you so much for your help!!! I appreciate your time and support. Warmly, Yuri

Tnocco (talk) 06:33, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Asia, Reema

Hello Professor Hanley! I just finished my wikipedia page on Wild Thorns. My apolgies for the late work. Best, Reema — Preceding unsigned comment added by Reema.asia (talk • contribs) 06:48, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Olivia Gatwood

Hi Profhanley, for now I have restored the redirect to Olivia Gatwood. The content you added instead of the redirect is not enough to establish notability, which requires multiple sources that are independent of the subject. Gatwood's personal website is not sufficient for this. Additionally, it seems that a draft of this page is being worked on here: Draft:Olivia Gatwood. If you want to see an article on Gatwood created, I recommend you work on this draft. If and when that draft is given the all-clear, it will be merged to Olivia Gatwood with its history. Let me know if you have questions regarding this. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:04, 18 December 2018 (UTC)

The article last referenced

...has changed significantly, as a result of my calling attention to various issues, esp. prior editor's use of the poet's promotional content from their webpage as substantial elements in the Career section of the article. Otherwise, as a former faculty member at a Big Ten university, I would be glad to discuss your experiences here, and your efforts to involve students in the encyclopedia. I no longer shepherd students in the work here; most time is spent moving articles of interest to colleagues closer to being encyclopedic (largely citation checking and related work). Otherwise, I look to correct and stem the tide of plagiarism here, which is perhaps my most significant impact. Cheers, will look here to converse (since I no longer log, and maintain no Talk page). 2601:246:C700:19D:1C9F:D382:94F8:2156 (talk) 05:26, 10 January 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for your help! ProfHanley (talk)

Hi Professor Hanley, I'm working on my Wikipedia skills

I hope I'm doing this right! I'm not sure if I should do a space before adding the tildes, so I'm finding out now. Joereadel (talk) 19:29, 9 March 2021 (UTC)

Looks like you've got it! ProfHanley (talk) 17:56, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Article Selection

Dear Professor, I changed my choice of articles for consideration in Post-Apocalyptic fiction class. Just checking that these are still suitable to be assigned to myself this week. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SammyGatenby (talk • contribs) 16:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)

Change of Article Topic, re-doing cited articles

Hi Prof. Hanley -

I wanted to let you know that I am switching my article topic from "A Pail of Air" to "Perigi's Wonderful Dolls", another episode from the sci-fi radio show X Minus One. I am now collecting sources for the newly changed version. Thanks!

-Anna — Preceding unsigned comment added by Moth1999 (talk • contribs) 04:21, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

ahhh . . so you are Moth1999 . . . got it. ProfHanley (talk) 16:08, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Article candidates

Hello, I have done the article evaluations and were wondering what you thought about these three?

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/The_End_(American_Horror_Story)

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Apocalypse_Then

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Sojourn_(American_Horror_Story)

Morgandonatello (talk) 21:31, 26 March 2021 (UTC) Morgan

My Article - The Year of the Flood - ready for peer review

Dear Professor Hanley, I have had real trouble with the wikipedia assignment and trying to create my Sandbox draft, especially trying to create it the way that wikedpedia advises, but have now got a full draft, ready for peer review. Similarly, I can now peer review others articles also. User:SammyGatenby/The_Year_of_the_Flood Many thanks, Sammy Gatenby — Preceding unsigned comment added by SammyGatenby (talk • contribs) 10:54, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Okie dokie. Have assigned the peer reviews. ProfHanley (talk) 18:19, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hi professor. I’m not seeing any peer reviews of my article yet, and I’m just wondering if I’ve done something wrong or if I’m missing them somehow. Thanks. Joereadel (talk) 17:09, 5 April 2021 (UTC) Joereadel (talk) 17:09, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Joe - - I don't think you've done anything wrong etc. I think your reviewers are a bit late out of the starting block. I'll send out another reminder today. I don't think it would be inappropriate to message your two reviewers and ask them if they've looked at the article draft etc. Sometimes professor-student messages are more easily discounted than student-student messages. ProfHanley (talk) 17:53, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

Ok thanks! Joereadel (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2021 (UTC)

So I still haven't received any peer reviews and I'm wondering how I should proceed. Joereadel (talk) 16:47, 20 April 2021 (UTC)

Joe - - I sent out an email to remind/encourage people to complete their peer reviews. If there's no action within 24 hours, let me know. ProfHanley (talk) 17:16, 20 April 2021 (UTC)

Still nothing. Joereadel (talk) 18:46, 21 April 2021 (UTC) 18:46, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Joe - - Will Beatty is amenable to peer reviewing your draft. Would you be amenable to peer reviewing his draft? (Extra credit, of course.). Let me know and I'll assign the reviews on the dashboard. Thanks. ProfHanley (talk) 19:38, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Article selection help

This is the main article I wanted you to look at that I would like to select. I could revise the plot and or add in a new section. I can get this draft done today.

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Sojourn_(American_Horror_Story)

Morgandonatello (talk) 20:15, 6 April 2021 (UTC)Morgandonatello

Morgan - - The problems I foresee with working on this article are twofold: 1) does the article need revision? I.e. are there information gaps? referencing/citation problems? writing problems etc.? There's not a lot of value in working on an article just to work on it. 2) sourcing - - I don't think a fan wiki or plot recap site are good sources. Have you done a library search for journal articles on American Horror Story? Or, a google scholar search? See the comments I left the other day on the talk page for your "Choose an Article." ProfHanley (talk) 16:52, 7 April 2021 (UTC)

Thank you! I replied to your comments on my talk page and provided all the correct info needed Morgandonatello (talk) 21:04, 7 April 2021 (UTC)Morgandonatello

Peer Review

Hello professor Hanley,

Could you assign me articles to review?

-Fabiola Baeza

Peer Review Time!

Hi Prof. Hanley -

I finished my draft on Monday but forgot to message you re: peer reviewing, which I am now ready for! Thanks!

-Anna

Hi, I have an article for peer review! The draft is under notes. Thank you, Hannah Pickard

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:HLPickard/Delicatessen_(1991_film) — Preceding unsigned comment added by HLPickard (talk • contribs) 16:46, 8 April 2021 (UTC)

Approaching Complete Draft

Professor Hanley, I am very sorry about how long I dragged to get the first draft done. I am looking forward to completing the final draft this weekend after I did the peer review. Please assign me the article to review. Thank you. Ytan11sf (talk) 03:55, 9 April 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hey Professor Hanley! Here's a link to the sandbox draft of my wikipedia article, ready for peer review. I'm still looking for a good source that provides a bit more in-depth detail of the characters, so hopefully that will be fleshed out more soon. It's been interesting pulling this together from scratch and I'm looking forward to seeing it fully realized. Anyways, here's the link: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Bfoley51/Undiscovered_Country_(Comic) Bfoley51 (talk) 23:45, 9 April 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hello professor Hanley!

Below is a link to my updated sandbox draft, I must have saved it in a differant place. Looking forward to the peer review process, take care! -Fabiola

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Fabiolabaeza465/Twilight_(Campbell_short_story)

Wikipedia project update

Hello, I took your advice and pasted over the entire article and italicized my contributions. Please take a look. https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Chimericmacandcheese/sandbox Chimericmacandcheese (talk) 01:29, 10 April 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hello, I still need the 2 peer review partners. Thank you, Hannah Pickard — Preceding unsigned comment added by HLPickard (talk • contribs) 00:24, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Article Final Draft

Hi Professor Hanley! I looked over my peer reviews and finished editing my article if you want to take a look. https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Hmleonard/The_Great_C Hmleonard (talk) 19:46, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Problems Adding Images

Hello Professor, I have been having trouble finding an image source for the comic book I am creating an article for (Descender). Apart from referencing the training modules, I did a quick search of askwikiedu.org that told me that I can upload a book cover under the guise of fair use using the file upload wizard, however when I followed that link I was informed that under no means would I be allowed to use the cover art. I am unsure how exactly to proceed, but I know it's not impossible because there are numerous comic book covers uploaded throughout wikipedia. Let me know what you think. Spencerqolney (talk) 20:27, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Can't see peer reviews

Hi Professor. I can't find my peer reviews. The links are on my wikiedu page but when I click on them, Wikipedia tells me they don't exist. Mcwright1981 (talk) 18:20, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

Draft help

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Morgandonatello/sandbox_Legion

Here is my rough draft, all the new information is initialized. Any specific next steps you recommend or am I ready to do peer revisions?

Morgandonatello (talk) 16:35, 13 April 2021 (UTC)Morgandonatello

Just checking in if you've checked it out. I know it needs more work but wanted to check base I'm doing everything right so far. Morgandonatello (talk) 19:15, 15 April 2021 (UTC)Morgandonatello

Article peer review

Hello professor, sorry I forgot to message you for article reviews, but I am ready for the articles you want me to review since my draft is done ProfHanley (talk) 12:30 April 7 2021 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zeltzin96 (talk) 20:27, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

Just want to let you know that the dashboard.wikiedu.org seems to be downed in the late night. I am attempting to access the dashboard to complete my 2nd peer review but I have no idea what I could do for now. Ytan11sf (talk) 10:08, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

Draft ready for peer review

Hi professor, I have my draft ready to be peer-reviewed and I am also ready to be assigned someones article to peer review!

Nathaly005 (talk) 19:11, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Draft moved to mainspace

I have officially moved my draft into the mainspace. I was unable to add an image into the inbox due to "fair use images" not being allowed outside of "article space" which I am not too sure how to troubleshoot. Other than that, I think everything has been done correctly. Please let know if there are any issues. Spencerqolney (talk) 21:32, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

Ready for Grading

Hi, I finished bolding the text I worked on the Wikipedia article in my sandbox. https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:HLPickard/Delicatessen_(1991_film)?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Thank you, Hannah Pickard

Speedy deletion nomination of Wikipedia:Somewhere proletarian literature

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Subject matter expertise in SF

I've been reviewing SF for over thirty years now, have been Guest of Honor at a couple of SF conventions, etc. I knew Octavia and know a lot of others working in the field. If I can be of any help to you or your students, let me know. --Orange Mike | Talk 00:44, 25 February 2022 (UTC)

Article Candidate ( Reporting Back) - Student - Richard Navarro

Dear Professor, I received your message and I completed the potential article module along with the 5 possible candidate submissions. I decided on the following article: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Resident_Evil:_Welcome_to_Raccoon_City. I shall get to work on those sources as mentioned in your message plus everything else I need to catch up on.

-Navarro

--JoJo-74r68h (talk) 01:00, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Sourcing and Edits

`Hey professor, I made some edits to my article. I'm still having trouble finding sources and figuring out what else needs to be done with it. If you or the TA could review it and hopefully point me in the right direction? Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by NRobinson22 (talk • contribs) 15:36, 22 March 2022 (UTC)

Covet (Band) Draft Article

Hi professor!

Just uploaded my draft about the band, Covet, that I have been following for a while. I think I was having issues on uploading the article but I uploaded on my Wiki page if you need to see it. Let me know if there is anything else I need to do!

Thanks,

Adriel Hypermole115 (talk) 18:42, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

Every student has been assigned two reviews - - with some picking up a third. Remind me in class to ask students to review your draft if they want extra credit. Thanks. ProfHanley (talk) 17:15, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hello Professor Hanley,

I looked through the Wiki dashboard for my new peer review assignment (the extra credit one), but I was unable to find it. When you get the chance, can you please assign me someone's article draft to peer review? Thank you and a have a nice day! Patriciatrinidad19 (talk) 04:31, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

I believe I added it on Wed. - - here is the draft for review. Thanks! ProfHanley (talk) 17:04, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Yes, I saw it and I have completed the peer review. Thank you. Patriciatrinidad19 (talk) 17:38, 6 November 2023 (UTC)