User talk:Pecknpaw

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What's the subject?

Hello; you wrote that the article Super Humanism "is/was the subject of an educational assignment in Fall 2015", but there's no such article. It's instead a redirect to a disambiguation page, Superhuman (disambiguation) -- one that doesn't obviously need much improvement. (You also provided what purported to be a link to the assignment, but wasn't. I fixed that.) What are you going to write about? (An article about Treadwell's Super Humanism?) -- Hoary (talk) 23:12, 20 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for now adding some content, but I don't see that it belongs in a separate article. It seems to belong more appropriately in the existing article Superhuman, perhaps in the section Superhuman#Human enhancement and advancement.

I've reverted to the redirect (well to be honest the redirect was still in place: you shouldn't add text to a redirect page: either leave it alone or remove the "redirect" command and turn it into an article - in which case it's essential to add appropriate navigation to replace the redirect, like a WP:HATNOTE leading to the disambiguation page).

You didn't add any sources for your content. Please use your sources to enhance the existing article Superhuman, but be sure to add sources (inline references) for every statement you make. That way your contributions to the encyclopedia will be respected and welcomed, and are unlikely to be deleted. Sorry to destroy your work so far (you can see it at this link, and clicking "Edit" there will get you to the text so you can copy it out to put it in a sandbox or use elsewhere), but this is an international encyclopedia and we need to get things right. Happy Editing! PamD 09:48, 1 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I've tweaked the article Superhuman to make the "Human enhancement" section clearer and more prominent. PamD 09:57, 1 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]