User talk:MissLadyLawless/Caroline Blue

Hi, I've see your request for feedback at the Help Desk but I thought I would answer you here.

Firstly, check your article aganst wikipedia's notability guidelines. If that works out, carry on.
Secondly, maybe get rid of the phrase " to name but a few ", it sounds a bit informal.
Next, and these are all up to you, remove maybe one of the people that 'WWJ' has been compared to.
If they are available add references to the other bands that were previous.
And finally, if there is a page for either the film or the production team that that song s being used for, link them in. Maybe then you

could see if it would be a good idea to link that article to this one, only if it gets accepted as an article.