User talk:Mgslee/sandbox

This is my talk page Mgslee (talk) 05:13, 23 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Yusuf's Peer Review

Hi Megan,

After reading all your content under "summarizing and synthesizing", I felt that you are doing a great job with the information you want to include and that you are focusing on for your articles. It has a clear structure and the sources seem reliable. There were a few facts that needed citations, with some that had "citation needed" at the end, but I am sure you already know that.

I did notice that some of your sentences need some rewording as it has grammatical issues, specifically under your "education" section. The second paragraph could be reworded to something like "Many new universities were built after the Communist Party of Vietnam took control of Hanoi in 1954. One of those universities is the Hanoi University of Technology, which is still the largest technical university in Vietnam."

I really liked your "different approaches" section, I thought it was a good way of briefly explaining the different ideas/facts/terms of your topic. I am really interested in how you're going to approach the "Vietnam" section that you created.

Good luck with the rest of your work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nayib24 (talk • contribs) 02:07, 20 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]