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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Khojasteh. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 09:00, 6 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Khojasteh (April 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Rich Smith was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Still doesn't pass WP:NSINGER, also please remove the Spotify links, Wikipedia is not for promotion.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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- Rich^T|C|E-Mail 11:42, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Maryamahad! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! - Rich^T|C|E-Mail 11:42, 21 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Khojasteh (Persian rapper) (June 16)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by BuySomeApples was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Khojasteh (Persian rapper) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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BuySomeApples (talk) 01:28, 16 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Khojasteh (Persian rapper) (June 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bonadea were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

In order to help the volunteer reviewers and, more importantly, Wikipedia's readers, please make sure to do two things.

1) Do not place footnotes randomly in the text. A footnote should be placed after the information that is supported by the source, but the footnotes in this draft don't seem to do that. For instance, this source is placed right after the word "Persian" in the first sentence: "Khojasteh(Persian:[1] خجسته" – but it is an article reporting on a judo competition, not a source for his name or for the fact that it is a Persian name.

2) Add more information to the citations. This is important in all cases, but especially when citations are in a language and a writing system that all readers of English Wikipedia reader are not familiary with. A citation should include enough information to make it possible for the reader to understand what the source is. Have a look at this info about which information is normally included.

At the moment it's really not clear how he meets any notability criteria (these or these).

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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bonadea contributions talk 13:25, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Khojasteh (Persian rapper) (July 26)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Missvain was: This topic is not sufficiently notable for inclusion in Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Hi -

I reviewed the sources here and the sourcing does not qualify for a Wikipedia encyclopedia entry for WP:NMUSIC nor WP:NSPORT.

While there are very brief passing mention articles about his judo work, there is nothing here about him being a notable musician. The Huffington Post article is a blog post someone wrote, it's not a critical, unaffiliated article about Khojasteh.

Until Khojasteh is signed to a major label and releases two albums on it; or has a chart hit; or gains major major major media attention in expansive, extensive ways, it's unlikely Khojasteh will have a Wikipedia article.

It is WP:TOOSOON.

Based on the feedback of other Wikipedians below, I ask that you stop submitting this draft.

If Khojasteh becomes notable or famous enough, it is likely someone unaffiliated with them will prepare a well-sourced Wikipedia article about them.

I hope you will consider improving existing Wikipedia content about other subjects of interest!

If you have any questions please ask them at WP:TEAHOUSE.

Thank you for contributing to Wikipedia!

Missvain (talk) 14:28, 26 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]