User talk:Laurob04/group1 drafting sandbox
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[edit]As of 11/30/2020
For Morgan
[edit]- The section looks great. Small edit to make - the period comes before the citation superscript (not after).
- There's no source for that last sentence re: the Texas task force - I'm assuming you weren't able to find anything? If not, just add a 'citation needed' tag [info here: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Wikipedia:Citation_needed]
For Group
[edit]- This looks great! I'll be letting the Wiki Edu folks (Helaine and Ian) know that this draft is about ready. Once they review it, I'll let you know! They may also leave comments here for you, so check back in a few days.
Ecs222 (talk) 03:15, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
For Jha'Quan
[edit]- The tables aren't in this draft and I don't see where you made any edits. Please complete this work asap - it has to be done by Wednesday 12/2.
Ecs222 (talk) 03:20, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
Sandbox draft (as of 11/16/2020)
[edit]Hi Group 1 - As you're working in the draft (where you've copied the article over), be sure you're able to keep track of what you've edited and added vs. what was already there (maybe use bold or italics). To make it look a bit cleaner, you can also delete the contents box and any other sections you don't need. Looks good so far! If you want to reply here, add a new line below that starts with ':' and it will be indented as a reply. Use the 'ping' code (@Ecs222:) to add a notification that I'll see.