User talk:Kaileyflohr/Walt Disney: An American Original

Peer Review

Lots of good added detail, especially from the original version of this article. It may be beneficial to add in more sections rather than just one large summary section. I've completed the peer review for you! here is the link! : https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Kaileyflohr/Walt_Disney:_An_American_Original/Bes8_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review

Bes8 (talk) 23:35, 16 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Pre-move Review

Hello Kaileyflohr, I looked over your article history and see that you've done quite a bit to improve the article!

It looks like you've already made things live. As a reminder, I've written a series of suggestions that most of the class' articles have room to improve upon. They may not all apply to your article and don't worry if they aren't all done, but these features can really make your additions shine.

Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you for becoming a Wikipedia contributor! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 06:03, 18 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]