User talk:Jlexiewinn/sandbox

Peer Review: user id: cjboley - I would suggest editing more of the symptoms. There are too many examples without definitive symptoms. i would look under the DSM definition for that information. - much more information could be added regarding diagnosis in which DSM can be referenced again if no other sources can be found. -you could even go into ore detail about the treatments and include data about how effective each type of treatment is. - i feel the article did not have enough concrete information about claustrophobia but gave more examples of how someone may feel. This does not seem as if it is neutral.

Cjboley (talk) 20:37, 17 February 2019 (UTC)== Peer Review by cjboley ==

- I would suggest editing more of the symptoms. There are too many examples without definitive symptoms. i would look under the DSM definition for that information. - much more information could be added regarding diagnosis in which DSM can be referenced again if no other sources can be found.

-you could even go into ore detail about the treatments and include data about how effective each type of treatment is. 

- i feel the article did not have enough concrete information about claustrophobia but gave more examples of how someone may feel. This does not seem as if it is neutral. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cjboley (talk • contribs) 20:14, 17 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review Rprestwood12: -The section you mentioned editing and adding in more criteria that would qualify someone having an attack looks like a great idea, what would you propose to be the qualifying system in your edit? DSM/Psych Guidelines? Self-Reported attacks? -In regards to you addressing the manifesting symptoms that someone has with claustrophobia, where would you pull the information from to add in? Online sources or DSM or other? Are there different levels of symptoms that are manifested or would you describe them in a more umbrella manner? -The part you added in using the example of a woman with situational claustrophobia looked like a very good addition to the article. Not sure if it is greatly needed but if you wanted to add more in this section you could go into the therapeutic techniques used to treat both that woman and people who suffer from this disorder in Geneal. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.119.76.125 (talk) 21:23, 24 April 2019 (UTC)