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Your submission at Articles for creation: Bubur Gunting (December 30)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 18:44, 30 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Janviere Harison! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Theroadislong (talk) 18:44, 30 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bubur Gunting (January 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Mattdaviesfsic were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

No clear indication of this page meeting the notability criteria. That is, it will need a lot more sources before it can be accepted.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Bubur Gunting and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Mattdaviesfsic (talk) 15:22, 4 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Poor copy-edit of The Trashmen

Dear Janviere Harison. A few days ago, you made a copy-edit to the article The Trashmen. I have undone this edit because it made the article worse, not better.

One thing you should take into account when writing good prose, is trying to avoid using the same word twice in close proximity. For example, you wrote this:

Despite the success of "Surfin' Bird", The Trashmen did not achieve wide success.

This sentence uses the word success twice in a row, which feels unprofessional.

You also submitted:

A song called "Steve conceptualized a song called "Surfin' Bird" which was instantly popular among the audience at their shows.

This erroneous sentence has also been reverted. Please don't take this personal. It is something I am obliged to do, in order to protect Wikipedia's quality. Cheers, Manifestation (talk) 17:09, 14 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Bubur Gunting

Hello, Janviere Harison. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Bubur Gunting, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 05:03, 14 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]