User talk:Itsnotironic

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:48, 13 February 2023 (UTC)

Peer review

Your article on Obelisks has been peer reviewed! 5734hls (talk) 00:13, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Itsnotironic

Link to draft you're reviewing

https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Itsnotironic/Obelisk?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Obelisk

Evaluate the drafted changes

• Lead Section
  • Your lead section is clear and concise, though I might like to see more about the religious and cultural significance in this section
• Structure Clarity
  • The structure flows well from ancient to modern, though I would like to see a section with more photos, as well as maybe a section specifically for religious beliefs/practices
• Coverage Balance
  • I noticed that your article has really good coverage balance so far!
    • It is a bit shorter than the original, but I am assuming you are not quite finished yet!
  • I really appreciate how detailed each section is, and I like the separation between each kind of ancient Obelisk - it helps to differentiate the symbolism of each and to deter generalization
• Content Neutrality
  • Your content is very neutral, I don't see any issues here!
• Source Reliability
  • Your draft doesn't have any sources or references attached at the bottom yet, but I can assume that is still in the works!

5734hls (talk) 00:27, 1 March 2023 (UTC)

March 2023

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a message letting you know that one or more of your recent edits to Obelisk have been undone by an automated computer program called ClueBot NG.

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• The following is the log entry regarding this message: Obelisk was changed by Itsnotironic (u) (t) ANN scored at 0.860048 on 2023-03-11T00:46:57+00:00

Thank you. ClueBot NG (talk) 00:47, 11 March 2023 (UTC)