User talk:Greatday2012

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Cheers, ChzzBot IV (talk) 08:17, 12 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

I noticed your submission in Articles for creation, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ACTIVA-INTERNATIONAL. Thanks! It will be reviewed by a volunteer soon.

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Best, ChzzBot IV (talk) 08:17, 12 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation

Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ACTIVA-INTERNATIONAL.
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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! tausif 06:55, 13 April 2012 (UTC)

Activa-International

Hi Greatday2012, Your referencing is good enough and from reliable sources too. The article seems to be a notable one as well. If you could work on the de-capitalizing company names and wikify the article as much as possible, and then submit for reviewing again, it will be great.

My sincere apologies for declining it quoting 'insufficient inline reference' as the reason. I use a bot to review articles and might have incurred a mistake. Please make the necessary changes. If I have time I'll do the changes too.

I am glad you let me know about this. Thanks.

Kind regards,
tausif 08:01, 13 April 2012 (UTC)

Hi,

Good to see the changes. Now we shall deal with the kind of tone and terms used in the article. It is recommended to avoid tones and terms like in the sentence- Activa evidently has benchmarked itself with global players such as ROC. Try to be neutral and just give the facts. Its upto the readers to decide if the subject is praiseworthy or not. But, letting the readers decide depends on the facts you provide and references you substantiate them with.

Also, please try to add more information about the subject of the article and divide the contents in to sections and sub-sections wherever necessary . The article L'Oréal might help you.

tausif 09:23, 13 April 2012 (UTC)

hi,

Please try to add in more contents. If the article is notable enough, you wouldn't find it hard add contents and references.

tausif 06:49, 15 April 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation

Activa-International, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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tausif 17:05, 14 April 2012 (UTC)

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Harkey (talk) 18:21, 17 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]