User talk:FULBERT/Archive 51
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Week 8/Add citations to 2 more articles/Forza spurs
The first article I assigned myself is about Tiago Splitter, who is a former NBA player. Here is the link to the article: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Tiago_Splitter. I added two senetecnes and a citation to better display his performance in his first start of his NBA career. The following is the link to the diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Tiago_Splitter&diff=987126798&oldid=981528597. The second article I assigned my self is an article introducing Michael Finley, who is a former NBA player as well. Here is the link to the article: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Michael_Finley. For this article, I added sentences and a citation to the part demonstrating what happened in 2006 NBA playoffs to hlep readers better understand a big event. Here is the link to the diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Michael_Finley&diff=987125569&oldid=985242254. In this process, I learned that it is necessary to explain both the reason and the result of an event to help readers have a comprehensive understanding.Forza spurs (talk) 02:42, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- Forza spurs, Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Citations alone do not add value. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 18:23, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- I think I have already added senetences in the article itself before or maybe I misunderstood what you mean. So, I made some changes to make it clearer. Hope they can hlep.
Here is the link to the article introducing Tiago Splitter: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Tiago_Splitter. Here is the link to diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Tiago_Splitter&diff=987126798&oldid=981528597. Here is the link to the article introducing Michael Finley: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Michael_Finley. Here is the link to diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Michael_Finley&diff=987316023&oldid=987125569.Forza spurs (talk) 07:12, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
- Forza spurs, Better. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:26, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9/Add citations to 2 more articles/Forza spurs
The first article I assigned myself is the article introducing Zheng Zhi, who is a Chinese soccer player. Here is the link to the article: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Zheng_Zhi. For this article, I added a citation and a sentence to better explain Guangzhou Evergrande's first AFC Champion League Championship and Zheng Zhi's contributions. Here is the link to the diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Zheng_Zhi&diff=987131361&oldid=980525375. The second article I assigned myself is the article introducing Sun Jihai, who was a former Chinese soccer player. Here is the link to the article: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Sun_Jihai. For this article, I added a citation and two sentences to demsontrate Sun's situation in 2007-2008 season which was a great turning point in his professional career. Here is the link to the diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Sun_Jihai&diff=987132875&oldid=987003142. In this process, I learned to use statistical evidence to support certain arguments.Forza spurs (talk) 03:44, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- Forza spurs, Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Citations alone do not add value. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 18:24, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- I think I have already added senetences in the article itself before or maybe I misunderstood what you mean. So, I made some changes to make it clearer. Hope they can hlep.
Here is the link to the article introducing Zheng Zhi: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Zheng_Zhi. Here is the link to diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Zheng_Zhi&diff=987315510&oldid=987255179. Here is the link to the article introducing Sun Jihai: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Sun_Jihai. Here is the link to diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Sun_Jihai&diff=987132875&oldid=987003142.Forza spurs (talk) 07:20, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
- Forza spurs, Better as well. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:30, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 6 / Add a Citation and Contribute to An Article / Jooookerr
I have searched the smartphone definition in Wikipedia, and find that the social medical impact could be explained more with some clear information added. I have added a citation in the Medical category, it showed the Medical impact of smartphone addiction on the body of social groups. The link to my evaluation is: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Smartphone My edit version of the article link is: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Smartphone&type=revision&diff=987357267&oldid=986752208 Jooookerr (talk) 14:29, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
- Jooookerr, Good add with a high-quality source. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:41, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 7 / Add a Citation and Contribute to An Article / Jooookerr
Topic I searched was Problematic_smartphone_use, I have added a citation under the Prevalence category, the research data from a survey in South Korea about the smartphone addiction was related to the problematic smartphone use, the adding information will more clearly show the impact of smartphone addiction among teenagers and society. The link to my evaluation is: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Problematic_smartphone_use My edit version of the article link is: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Problematic_smartphone_use&type=revision&diff=987361646&oldid=985707126 I found that I used the DOI for the citation cause the problem that other users could not use the NYU library database, then I chose to use the Google research to the research article to do the citation. Jooookerr (talk) 15:08, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
- Jooookerr, Good edit. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:43, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 6/Add a Citation and Contribute to One More Article/DetongChe
After finish "How to Find Another Article", I choose my proposal topic about tourism. The UNWTO website let me get lots of information during writing the proposal. (https://www.unwto.org/) I added some details under the introduction part. This is the link that shows the difference. (https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=World_Tourism_Organization&type=revision&diff=987116792&oldid=985305103) DetongChe (talk) 01:05, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- DetongChe, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 01:11, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I have added to my Wiki Edu Dashboard, thank you!DetongChe (talk) 22:23, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
- DetongChe, Good. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:48, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I have added to my Wiki Edu Dashboard, thank you!DetongChe (talk) 22:23, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9 / Add citations / dyy122dyy
1. This week I add 2 citations to Wu zetian who is a female emperor in China, and to Tang taizong who is a successful empror. 2. link to difference: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Wu_Zetian&type=revision&diff=987015904&oldid=986935314 , https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Emperor_Taizong_of_Tang&type=revision&diff=987017064&oldid=986971540 3. What I learned are their political strategies. They are both good at utilizing talents and both support imperial examination systems. Dyy122dyy (talk) 04:47, 7 November 2020 (UTC)
- Dyy122dyy, Good on both. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:51, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
This week's article for improvement (week 46, 2020)
An example of Chinese folklore is The Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, a Chinese folk tale. Pictured is a depiction in the tale of the reunion of the couple of The Weaver Girl and the Cowherd on the bridge of magpies. The artwork displayed is in the Long Corridor of the Summer Palace in Beijing.
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Week 5 / Add a Citation and Contribute to An Article / Jooookerr
Professor, I have assigned myself the article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, please check.
Here is the archive page website for week 5: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User_talk:FULBERT/Archive_47 The link to my evaluation is:https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Teamfight_Tactics My edit version of the article link is:https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Teamfight_Tactics&type=revision&diff=983083519&oldid=980170716 Jooookerr (talk) 08:44, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
- Jooookerr, I agree with the editor who reverted your change. The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 01:02, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I have added another citation to the wiki page, the edit version of the article link is https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Teamfight_Tactics&type=revision&diff=987353288&oldid=984934372, please check. Jooookerr (talk) 13:54, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
- Jooookerr, It was reverted as this is not a high quality source and does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Find a higher quality source than a fan blog and ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:39, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I have changed another article because I think this article I chose was too narrow that I could not find more high-quality sources, I have assigned the new article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard, and the link to my evaluation is: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Problematic_social_media_use#Excessive_use, My edit version of the article link is: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Problematic_social_media_use&type=revision&diff=988183665&oldid=987924524, I have added citation that medical professionals have done a lot of research on the negative consequences of smartphone and social media addiction among teenagers.Jooookerr (talk) 16:50, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
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Week9/ Citation/ Mavin2516
I gave information regarding to who a Business Engineer is on the article Business Engineering and provided a citation for the same. The link to the diff is https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Business_engineering&diff=988317521&oldid=966902195. I also gave an application example in business of document engineering to the article titled Document Engineering. The link to the diff is https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Document_engineering&diff=988319436&oldid=749481375 Mavin2516 (talk) 13:20, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
Week8/ Citation/ Mavin2516
In this week's assignment I chose the articles Informatics and Information Systems. In both the articles I added some meat to the definitions of the terms in order to bring a clear meaning of the same. I added the citations for the information that I added to the articles. Here is the link to the diff for informaticshttps://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Informatics&diff=988311429&oldid=988101215 On the information system articles the link to the diff is;https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Information_system&diff=988313746&oldid=988293867Mavin2516 (talk) 14:44, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
Week10/ Citation/ Mavin2516
I added to the information on both the articles Performance management and Enterprise software. Here are the difference links https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Performance_management&diff=988335577&oldid=985791411 https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Enterprise_software&diff=988337185&oldid=986664263Mavin2516 (talk) 15:29, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 7 / Contribute to one more article / yl7283
Yhl7283 (talk) 14:54, 7 November 2020 (UTC) This week, I read the Wikipedia article about shadow banks and the citation article I added is about the shadow banking crisis. Through this article, it have specific background of the development research in shadow banking and I added a sentence to complete more about the original thinking of shadow banks. Here is a link to the diff: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987511166 I learned more about the process that authors and researchers give definition to the shadow banking and its development. I also learn to edit in Wikipedia pages from what I learned in other articles.
- Yhl7283 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end of your post, not at the beginning. I see your contribution was reverted as it did not really flow or below at the beginning of the article, which I agree with. I think what you added will fit later one, but overall, this is fine. CURRENT. --FULBERT (talk) 20:53, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9 / Add Citations to 2 Articles / JS11323
This week, I found two articles which all about "social", the first one is "social education", and the next one is "social competence". The link of "social edcation" is here: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Social_Education. And the link of difference between revisions is: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Social_Education&type=revision&diff=987549866&oldid=848914022. Here is the link of "social competence": https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Social_competence. And the link of difference between revision is: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Social_competence&type=revision&diff=987552173&oldid=925493429. After adding the citations to these two articles, I leanrd a lot about social education and social competence, it is helpful for my research paper.--Js11323 (talk) 20:05, 7 November 2020 (UTC)
- Js11323, Good on both counts. Current. FULBERT (talk) 21:05, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 8 / Add citations to 2 Articles / yl7283
Yl7283 (talk) 02:14, 8 November 2020 (UTC) The articles I contributed this week are Lenovo and Dell,which are two famous brand in the world. For the article of Lenovo I added a citation which talk about the acquisition of Lenovo and IBM‘s PC business. The link to the diff for Lenovo article is: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987594309 The second article which I contributed is the Wikipedia article about Dell and the article citation I added is about the Dell EMC. It is part of Dell Technologies after the acquisition of Dell and EMC. The link to the diff for this one:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987595464 Through these two articles,I was focus on the acquisition of two brands and have research of related article. It is a good way to study when see some contents through Wikipedia and willing to have research of it. Yhl7283 (talk) 02:12, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, Good adds. Make sure to sign at the end (as you did) and not at the beginning, which was also done. Otherwise, this is fine. Current. --FULBERT (talk) 21:13, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9/ Add Citations to 2 More Articles/ ShawnBoom
This week still needs us to add citations to 2 more articles. So the first one I chose is "Consumer socialization", why I chose this article is I saw some views which is interesting to me on the way to the CVS for buying the chlorine disinfectant. There were too many crowds to celebrate the election including many parents and their children. I found a couple of them using the same brand of watch, a couple of them using the same brand of caps, phones, wallets, and even shoes, etc. So I just curious how important the role of parents affects their children on consumption? Is that a big influence? and how? So I just searched for this kind of related article and add one citation into "Consumer socialization" to help make a better statement. Here is the difference link: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Consumer_socialization&type=revision&diff=987611400&oldid=911162127
The second article I chose is "Youth market", follow the logic above, I want to know more about the youth consumer behavior or market stuff. And I add a citation to the article to help make an explanation. Here is the difference link: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Youth_marketing&type=revision&diff=987617411&oldid=986966786 --ShawnBoom (talk) 05:56, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
- ShawnBoom, Nice adds. Current. FULBERT (talk) 21:15, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9 / Add two citations/ Martinmadison
Link to the first one: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Willis_Towers_Watson&type=revision&diff=987710671&oldid=981669738 The article talks about the history of Willis Towers Watson which is formed by the Willis Group and Towers Watson in the past. I added a bit of history of Towers Watson, which was formed by the merger of Towers Perrin and Watson Wyatt. Link to the second one: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Willis_Tower&type=revision&diff=987712014&oldid=983959838 While the article talks mainly about the height, I just add a fun-fact that the lowest level of the building is 43 feet below the street. Martinmadison (talk) 19:56, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
- Martinmadison, I think the second edit is not the highest level of evidence, but ok for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 21:18, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9/ Add Citations to 2 More Articles/ CaptainJoseph
For this week, I edit Brain in a vat and Artificial Intelligence. Though research I find out that some researcher were worried about if virtual reality will lead some problem of cognitive impairment of reality. For the AI article, I mentioned about AI attacked most attention of world by AlphaGo defeated Go world Champion and because of that, more and more money and people devote to this industry.
Here is diff link of Brain in a vat, and here is the diff link of Artificial Intelligence.
Thanks. CaptainJoseph (talk) 20:14, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
- CaptainJoseph, Good on both counts. Current. FULBERT (talk) 21:37, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 6 / Add a citation and contribute to one more article / yl7283
Yhl7283 (talk) 09:14, 6 November 2020 (UTC) My topic is Tmall this week and I add a citation and two sentences for article. The citation I added is the an introduction article about the Tmall. Here is the link to difference in vision: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/98732690 Through this week, I made one more excises of the editing of Wikipedia article and learn about the background information of Tmall through article. Yl7283 (talk) 00:46, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, Please sign your edit at the end and not at the beginning. Also, the link you sent does not go to your edit. Please fix these and ping me here when done and I will review. --FULBERT (talk) 22:47, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
Here is the link to diff https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Tmall&diff=prev&oldid=987326908 Yhl7283 (talk) 00:50, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE." Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 21:56, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 5/ Add a Citation and Contribute to One Article/ yl7283
Yhl7283 (talk) 11:59, 5 November 2020 (UTC) This week I choose DingTalk as topic and the citation I added is for the background and development of DingTalk. I added a citation and a sentence to it background information. Here is the link of difference in vision: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987177593 Through this week, I learned to make edit in Wikipedia article and be more confident to edit it before.
- Yhl7283 Please edit your post title to include spaces between the week, assignment, and your user name and the " / " and then reply to me here and I will review. --FULBERT (talk) 18:33, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283 Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --FULBERT (talk) 18:33, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 5 /Add a citation and contribute to one article / yl7283 Yhl7283 (talk) 09:18, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, Please edit the title of this section and ping me here; I do not see a change in it. FULBERT (talk) 22:37, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
~~~~ I edit the title of this section and hope it works this time. Yhl7283 (talk) 00:53, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283 Use colons at the beginning (and not ~ symbols) and then sign at the end. Fine for now. Current. --FULBERT (talk) 21:58, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 4: Add a citation to article
The citation I added is a real time data statistic of world pandemic update. Here is the link of difference in vision: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987025155 Through this week, I learned about how to training to add citation through my sandbox. Yhl7283 (talk) 12:17, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, I am not clear what article you revised, as the one you have listed does not exist. Please reply here with a correct link and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 01:09, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/COVID-19_pandemic_in_New_York_(state) is the link of article I revised. Yhl7283 (talk) 12:14, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:31, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
I already assigned this article to my dashboard which named COVID-19 in New York. Yhl7283 (talk) 09:16, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, Check the dashboard; the link does not work. Remove and re-add it perhaps. Ping me when done. FULBERT (talk) 22:36, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
I removed the link which doesn't work and added a new one. Yhl7283 (talk) 01:00, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, I am not sure if this is a reliable source, but will give it to you for now. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:04, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9/ Add citations to 2 more articles/ yl7283
This week I choosed two topic which are single‘s day and Black Friday,the two famous shopping day in China and USA. I read the Wikipedia articles of each two and have research of related articles to make citations. Here is link to the diff of Black Friday article:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987757775 Then this one is link to the diff of Single's day article:https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/987759705 Through this week,I knew the information through articles outside the Wikipedia and learn to find out related topic to have research. I also see an interesting article which talk about the Chinese Single's day compared with Black Friday:https://www.telegraph.co.uk/black-friday/0/what-is-chinas-singles-day-and-how-does-it-compare-to-black-frid/ ~~~~ Yhl7283 (talk) 02:18, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
- Yhl7283, Your user name is listed incorrectly in the section heading. Please fix it there and then ping me and I will come review. FULBERT (talk) 22:11, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9/ Add Citations to 2 Articles/ ASCXX
First article:https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Traumatophobia Link to the diff:https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Traumatophobia&diff=987767001&oldid=958311307
Second article:https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Meditation#Frequency Link to the diff first part:https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Meditation&diff=987766989&oldid=987425119 Link to the diff second part:https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Meditation&diff=987768291&oldid=987766989
This week I edit two articles "Traumatophobia" and "Meditation". I was wondering if any kind of meditation can help with traumatophobia, however, I did not find any scientific proof. It was an interesting learning experience to find correlations between two articles even I got a non-correlated result. FULBERT --ASCXX (talk) 03:43, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
- ASCXX, Fine on both. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:23, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 9/ Add Citations to 2 Articles/ 燕京赵大知识分子
This week I found two articles about economic theories that I studied in college. One is pain of paying and the other one is Intrinsic Value Theory. I learned that sometimes adding a further definition using simpler words with less professional terms can help more readers understand the concept at the first place, so they will feel more engaging. Link and link for the two articles, and difference link for the two articles https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Intrinsic_theory_of_value&type=revision&diff=987763825&oldid=921233414, https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Pain_of_paying&type=revision&diff=987764947&oldid=986961985 燕京赵大知识分子 (talk) 03:06, 9 November 2020 (UTC)
- 燕京赵大知识分子, Fine on both. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:25, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week 8 / Add Citations to 2 Articles / Lipute17
The two articles I edit this week is "Kaikai kiki" and "Angela McRobbie". The diff links are: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Kaikai_Kiki&diff=986606300&oldid=968572811 and https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Angela_McRobbie&diff=986607614&oldid=981045572 I found this week's experience very interesting cause when I first view the article "Kaikai kiki", I just thought the article name is a bit funny. However, it turns out the company is created by one of my favorite art designer. Lipute17 (talk) 22:26, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
- Lipute17, Please assign yourself these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 23:12, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
- FULBERT, Assigned right now. Lipute17 (talk) 23:49, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
- Lipute17, Good on both edits. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:28, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
Week7 / add a citation / lipute17
This week, I edit the article about an Indi-filmmaker named Stephen Kijak. The link to the difference is: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Stephen_Kijak&diff=986603612&oldid=958932708. I find the experience of editing articles very interesting now. I can encounter with the materials that I have never viewed before every week. The process is pretty satisfying. Lipute17 (talk) 21:51, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
- Lipute17, I would ordinarily revert your edit with a message similar to: "The source used here does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE." Please find and cite a more reliable source and then ping me again here when done. FULBERT (talk) 23:11, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
- FULBERT, I switch to another source for the same article and the current link of diff is https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Stephen_Kijak&diff=988088429&oldid=986603612 Lipute17 (talk) 00:17, 11 November 2020 (UTC)
- Lipute17, Nice edit. Current. FULBERT (talk) 22:30, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
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Week 10 / Insert an image / ASCXX
The link of the article: https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Kyoto#Modern_Kyoto
The link to the diff: https://wiki.riteme.site/w/index.php?title=Kyoto&diff=988911788&oldid=988819713
This week I insert an image to the article "Kyoto". I went to Kyoto summer of 2016 for an exchange program, and I spent one month studying at Ritsumeikan University. Every day after class, my friends and I visit different places in Kyoto. I took this picture because I thought the lanterns and street views were so pretty and attractive. I hope the author won't remove this picture!!! FULBERT --ASCXX (talk) 00:25, 16 November 2020 (UTC)
- ASCXX, Nice addition. Current. --FULBERT (talk) 19:13, 28 November 2020 (UTC)