User talk:Dreese2/Magnolia Street
Nice history section that was well rounded and gave brief details behind Magnolia street. If you can maybe also include a picture of the front of the supermarket that way readers can see what it really appears to look like. Also some of the info you talked about in your history section can be pulled into other paragraphs if you want to expand on the crime and other negative influences before Katrina. Other than that you are off to a really strong start and I can't wait to read it once you are done.X.Kyrstenn.x (talk) 18:56, 4 March 2021 (UTC) Kyrsten
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[edit]The history section is quite good, but you need to get those citations in the right place. They're not doing any good down at the bottom of the page on their own. Instead of simply referring people to the Magnolia Projects article, why not include a paragraph of information about them in your article?