User talk:Davidbbell3/Silver mining
Peer Review of Draft
[edit]David
All sections re-written were very well done: simple and clean. There was no bias nor POV issues. The grammar and the spelling were flawless. The Lead section would do better if restored back to the first 2 paragraphs only and the other 3 later Lead sections moved to their own headings. There is a void left by removed the history section that is solved by later editing exercises. Overall a strong draft worthy of publication!ObliqueFault (talk) 04:55, 5 March 2021 (UTC)