User talk:Carochen215/Luna Park, Tokyo

Peer Review

Hi Carochen215, Great start for your draft, but need to work a little more to polish the article. More detailed feedback is linked below. I hope it helps! Good good! https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Carochen215/Luna_Park,_Tokyo/Zwdy_Peer_Review Zwdy (talk) 03:28, 1 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Well done! I think it is a good beginning of the article. It can be better if more details are added and the article can be divided into sections. Here is the link where I wrote more detailed reviews:)https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Carochen215/Luna_Park,_Tokyo/VANESSAzyy_Peer_Review VANESSAzyy (talk) 04:22, 1 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Pre-move Review

Hello Carochen215, I looked over your article history and noticed that, while you cleaned some things up and added a paragraph, that's about it. Before "going live", I would suggest that you find an article about a related subject, see which sections/content that may be applicable to yours and write it.

Here are a few suggestions that most of the class' articles have room to improve upon. They may not all apply to your article and don't worry if they aren't all done, but these features can really make your additions shine:

Refine the paragraph above the Table of Contents, remember it is the first thing that will be read. Considering adding a short description using this template.
Find and add some relevant images. To make sure that you have permission to use the images, please review the WikiEdu module and read the Guide to Illustrating Wikipedia.
Add a "See also" section of related articles by creating the heading and adding a list of internal links. Also consider adding a "External links" section, if there is somewhere relevant to link to.
Try to find a relevant infobox or fill-in more details for the pre-existing one.
Try to find any relevant category templates and WikiProjects. Often these were found at the bottom of the original article or on its "Talk page".
Try to find more citations to add as references. Also, make sure to add them correctly and re-use instead of duplicate. Having a wide variety of sources can be just as important as the number.
Clean up formatting and use some of the "wiki features". For instance, look for lists that could be sub headers, add internal links to places and concepts that readers may want more information about, consider whether "article elements" (e.g. infobox, table of contents, categories) are in the recommended order.
Do some copy-editing. For instance, look for extra paragraphs and whitespace, inconsistent citation placement, extra periods, typos, etc.
Review the WikiEdu Editing Guide and see if anything else stands out.

Please ping me on Wikipedia once you're ready and I'll check back. Thanks! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙‍♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 06:17, 13 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]