User talk:Brenhaze21

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Hello, Brenhaze21, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:34, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Welcome!

Hello, Brenhaze21, and welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you may find helpful:

• Introduction and Getting started
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I saw you added Critical Role (campaign two) to your student project. If you enjoy writing plot summaries, Critical Role (campaign one) also needs some help since episodes 39 to 115 still need summaries. Here are some additional resources that you may find helpful when working on articles that cover fictional topics:

• Writing about fiction
• Plot-only description of fictional works
• How to write a plot summary

I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically produce your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask the Teahouse, or . Again, welcome! Sariel Xilo (talk) 18:35, 17 April 2021 (UTC)

Critical Role

Hi User:Brenhaze21! Thank you for contributing edits that were made in good faith, however, these edits have been reverted or modified. Since you are a student, I thought I would walk you through my actions:

• I reverted your addition on the individual story arcs of campaign one for a couple of reasons. A) The story arcs are covered in-depth here & if you review the talk page you'll notice there's been a big push to reduce the size of the article leading to many spinoff articles (which are all listed here). B) There was a discussion to remove the arc titles/episode breakdown since there's no official breakdown by Critical Role.
• I modified & moved your sentence on the latest bit of Critical Role Foundation to Critical Role Productions#Critical Role Foundation. A) You put the sentence above the section Critical Role#Critical Role Foundation. B) That section is written in summary style since it links to main article. C) Another editor might still remove the sentence for being "corporate fluff" since the only source is primary. I think primary sources can be useful in specific instances but the use of primary vs secondary sources on Wikipedia is a bit of a minefield especially when dealing with topics related to fictional elements (especially RPGs).
• I kept the USA Today source but removed your description ("a videogame feature"). If you review the source, it is focused on the campaign book Explorer's Guide to Wildemount. The Roll20 integration isn't a video game; it's a platform where you can purchase digital access to the book.

I hope all of that makes sense. Let me know if you have any questions by tagging me. Thanks! Sariel Xilo (talk) 22:46, 12 May 2021 (UTC)