User talk:Bedrum00/Learning disability

Hello. I like that you are focusing on learning disabilities in adults. Since this is a new section of the article, try expanding it to discuss other forms of management that are adult focused. If you are focusing on the ABE, provide some details on what they do to assist adults with learning disabilities. Do they provide classes? If so, what kind of classes? How effective is the program and other similar ones? Also, pull from some other sources to give this article more weight and prevent the appearance of bias. Great job! Red027 (talk) 22:43, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Red027, I like your suggestions you made! I really needed advice on some other things to add in so I appreciate your feedback! I plan to make the edits this week so I'm excited to find more information about the topic. I had not previously thought about including other forms of adult-focused learning disability management. Thanks for the feedback! Bedrum00 (talk) 01:54, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

| I've added my peer review. https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/User:Bedrum00/Learning_disability/Lridley097_Peer_Review Lridley097 (talk) 23:11, 28 February 2021 (UTC)Lauren[reply]

Lauren (Lridley097), you make some great suggestions in your peer review of my article! I will be sure to look for more recent articles as well but I had a difficult time finding the ones that I did find. I appreciate you noting some things that are vague and should be more clear, I knew there was something off about what I had written but I could not figure out what it was! Thanks for the great, useful feedback! Bedrum00 (talk) 02:49, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]