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Your submission at Articles for creation: Michael Rhoades (November 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted content, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

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🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 13:04, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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November 2024

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Your submission at Articles for creation: AugmentedIntelligence (November 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

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qcne (talk) 14:34, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: AugmentedIntelligence (November 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by JJPMaster was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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JJP_{Mas_ter} (she/they) 15:28, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Michael Rhoades

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Michael Rhoades requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from https://www.bsu.edu/calendar/events/academics/planetarium/2023/03/30/7-antitheses?date=2023-03-30. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images taken from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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Hello AugmentedIntelligence -- I've deleted the copyright violation from the draft article so that you can start again with it. Never cut and paste material into Wikipedia, we cannot accept copyrighted text. You need to rewrite the material in your own words, citing the source as a reference. If you need help with editing or referencing, the Teahouse is a friendly forum for new editors. Regards, Espresso Addict (talk) 16:04, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you... will try again. AugmentedIntelligence (talk) 17:28, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@AugmentedIntelligence I have moved your draft to Draft:Michael_Rhoades. That is the proper location for drafts (note the Draft prefix). You had it on your User Page at User:AugmentedIntelligence which is the incorrect location for drafts (note the User prefix). qcne (talk) 11:52, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. AugmentedIntelligence (talk) 11:53, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Can I just check, are you Michael Rhoades? qcne (talk) 11:55, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, I am... and quite a newbie...

Can you tell me where the Draft page is located? AugmentedIntelligence (talk) 11:56, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for confirming. Wikipedia is really complicated and can be pretty frustrating for new editors.

The full URL for the draft is at https://wiki.riteme.site/wiki/Draft:Michael_Rhoades..

I would highly recommend reading our guidance to writing autobiographies.

It's important to understand that Wikipedia has content guidelines and we only host topics about notable subjects. We use a special definition of "notability", an explanation of which can be found here for people.

The test of notability is usually determined if the topic has had significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject. I am unfortunately not seeing that in the four sources on your draft. I am therefore declining the draft, but if you would like to present me three good sources that meet these criteria, let me know and I will be able to give some more guidance on if you meet our notability criteria or not.

Again, any questions just let me know. qcne (talk) 12:02, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for the offer of assistance and for the clarification as to where the Draft page is... This process is indeed quite challenging! Your assistance is greatly appreciated. I will ready the section on writing autobiographies when finished writing to you.

I have run into copyright issues when trying to cite sources to represent notability. If you look at my online CV, near the bottom in the "Recent Presentations" you can see that I have many presentations of my work at prestigious events and the same with lectures... etc. http://www.perceptionfactory.com/cv/

Also, in order to earn my PhD I had to create new knowledge, which seems noteworthy. The challenge is how to represent these with citations. There are few, if any, press releases for such things.

I realize that I may think my work noteworthy , when in reality it is not. So I am open to that if it is true... please let me know what you think.

Thanks again! AugmentedIntelligence (talk) 12:38, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's perhaps unfortunate that we've used the term "notability" in our policy, as it has connotations of "famous" or "prestigious". A better way to think about it is "noted in secondary sources". It's not necessarily what you've done but how that has been noted.

If I were reviewing a biographic article of someone in the creative arts like yourself, I would be looking for one of the following:

- they are widely citated by peers for their works or style;

- they have won significant critical attention for their works or style;

- they played a major role in creating a significant piece of work.

If one of those above things don't exist, then I would default to looking at the sources in the draft. I would be checking if at least three of the sources meet all those criteria below:

- discuss the person in a significant way: interpretation, analysis, debate, commentary, discussions. Not just a passing mention such as just being included on a list of exhibitors.

- be discussed in reliable places: newspapers, journals, books, periodicals. Social media and random blogs wouldn't count.

- be independent of the person: so not a piece based purely on an interview or from their own website. Interviews with analysis and discussion is okay, but if, for example, a profile in an arts magazine just consists entirely of the person talking about themselves then it wouldn't count.

If there are three sources that meet those, then I would usually say the test of notability has been proven and accept the draft.

Do you think you have three sources that meet those criteria? Sources can be offline, as long as they are published. qcne (talk) 12:53, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the clarifications. I have had several newspaper articles about my work in the past but when I look at the links to them they are no longer online.

It appears, that the long and the short of it is that I cannot meet this required criteria...

Thank you so much for your assistance here... and be well. AugmentedIntelligence (talk) 13:20, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Just a note, the newspaper article sources don't need to be accessible online, as long as the full citation is available to allow readers to go look it up in an archive or library. qcne (talk) 13:24, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hmmmm... Interesting... I have 5 of those. How would they need to be presented within my page?

It seems strange to publish broken links. AugmentedIntelligence (talk) 13:30, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It would just end up being a plain text reference, so perhaps something like (fictional text):

Anderson, Jack (1996-10-16). "Local artist presented with award". p. 14. Danville Sentinel, Danville

Maybe difficult for a reader to verify if they don't have the copy of that newspaper, but offline sources are still permitted. Alternatively it might be available on one of the online newspaper archives? qcne (talk) 13:41, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I see... Unfortunately, I do not have any information about the article except the (broken) link to it on my web page. One example looks like this:

W-Shop Wunderkamp January 2015 at the Wunderkammer Company – Michael Exhibited paintings of various sizes both for viewing and for sale. Here are two newspaper articles and interviews about the event:

Journal Gazette (With link on the name)

News Sentinel. (With link on the name) AugmentedIntelligence (talk) 13:44, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps they've been archived at https://archive.org/?

The alternative would be to check newspaper archives at your local library and such. qcne (talk) 13:48, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Well, I did not seem to be able to locate any of them. I actually found another one on my site... there are 6... but all broken links.

Thank you so much for your time. Your insights have been greatly appreciated. AugmentedIntelligence (talk) 13:56, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No worries. Drafts are deleted after six months of inactivity, so do feel free to come back and edit if you do manage to find those newspaper sources. qcne (talk) 13:57, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]