User talk:Akachukwu Vitalis

March 2024

Hello, I'm Arjayay. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Ikwerre people, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. - Arjayay (talk) 18:03, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Agwa (March 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by 14 novembre was:

Poorly sourced, improperly formatted, and several grammar errors (improper use of capital letters).

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14 novembre (talk) 🇮🇹 19:37, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Akachukwu Vitalis! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! 14 novembre (talk) 🇮🇹 19:37, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Agwa has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Agwa. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 07:04, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Agwa (September 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bonadea was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

A lot of work has clearly gone into this draft, but I'm afraid it still needs more work before it could become a Wikipedia article.

The "References" section is more or less a duplication of the "Notes" section, as far as I can tell, and that is confusing. It is in the "Notes" section we find the automatically generated list of sources that support the information in the article, which is normally found under the heading "References". If there are sources in "References" that aren't currently used in the article, it can be listed in a "Further reading" section if it is relevant.

The tone, especially in the "History" section and its subsections, has to be much more neutral and dry. It is currently written in the style that would work in a popular scientific text or perhaps a brochure at a museum of history. It also seems to be a synthesis rather than a summary of the sources, in violation of Wikipedia's No Original Research policy, although that could be a result of the writing style.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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bonadea contributions talk 14:43, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bonadea

Thank you very much for your review. Please I would love to get a detailed explanation about the formal tone of an encyclopedia article. Akachukwu Vitalis (talk) 22:37, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]