User talk:AaronAspelund/Badminton in the United States
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[edit]Hey AJ! I reviewed your article! Let me know if you have any questions!
Bye! Madsngo (talk) 22:57, 31 January 2020 (UTC)
Pre-move Review
[edit]@AaronAspelund: I see that you're incorporating some of the suggestions below, just wanted to mention that I've added a section about making it live. In general I suspect that you'll be prepared to make the transition without checking back in.
Hello AaronAspelund, I looked over your change history and see that you've done quite a bit to improve the article!
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While you are good to go, here are a few suggestions that will really make your additions shine:
- Revise your short description section that exists above the Table of Contents. Remember that this is the first person anyone will read on the page, what is it that "1,362,000 play"? Also, make sure to use the short description template to wrap it.
- What is currently in your "Lead" section, may be relevant, but it needs to be retitled, perhaps it can be called "Game Play" or "Introduction". Also in this section, you've repeated the bit about going "to 21 points".
- The section with different names seems like it should all fall under a larger heading, perhaps "Important Figures".
- Clean up the formatting a bit, I see some extra paragraphs, for instance in the "History" section.
- Add a "See also" section of related articles and a "External links" section, assuming there is an official website.
- Review the WikiEdu Editing Guide and see if anything else stands out.
Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you for becoming a Wikipedia contributor! 一 Salt ♨️🚲🧂🧙♂️🐧🎓⚔️☠️ (talk) 06:52, 12 February 2020 (UTC)