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  • Whose work are you reviewing? (SageP666)
  • Link to draft you're reviewing: User:SageP666/Berenice III of Egypt
  • Hi Sage! Nice table of contents and use of titles for the headings as it makes it clear to find.
  • The use of citations were good as it helped me understand more about the topic or person!
  • Also, is she found or used in any modern art or pop culture? That would be cool information to add!
  • The word style and choices made your work easy to read.
  • Were you going to go into more detail about her death or was that information the one that was hard to obtain? I feel adding more on her murder would be interesting.
  • Overall this is good work and good information! It will be exciting to see what the end result will be!