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Wikipedia Project: Phase One

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Five Articles for Consideration

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  1. Betta
  2. Lake Mineral Wells State Park & Trailway
  3. Magnoliids
  4. 500 yen note
  5. American fried rice

Reasons for Improvement

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Article One: Betta

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The article could do with more useful information, such as a more comprehensive section on the behaviors of the fish and the history of the breed, both wild and domestic species. It also seems a bit poorly organized, with somewhat misleading headings - "characteristics", for example, is very broad, and could potentially include many more subcategories rather than none. There are 16 references and only two external links.

Article Two: Lake Mineral Wells State Park & Trailway

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One of the Wikipedia pages in the article doesn't exist yet. There are only three references for the whole article. In addition, I think that it is lacking in useful content, as it only contains a brief history of the park and a list of nearby attractions.

Article Three: Magnoliids

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The article has two sections and only one external link. I think that the article could do with more useful content, including a complete list of all the species present in the group. There are several instances of "citation needed" where citations ostensibly go in the article. The focus of the article seems rather broad.

Article Four: 500 yen note

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There are only five total references. There are only three citations in the article. I think that there could be more information within the article, as well as better organization - too much seems to be crammed into the introductory paragraph, and it could perhaps benefit from having a few more sections added.

Article Five: American fried rice

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There are only three references on the article. In addition, it only has one section, the history of the dish. It could use some expansion. There are only three citations throughout the whole article, and a few instances of "citation needed".

Organizational History: Crystallite

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2003

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November 13, 14: User Cdnc creates the article and adds spelling corrections, links, and additional text

November 17, 25: User Cdang adds additional text

2004

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July 30: See Also section formatted

2005

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10 November 2005‎ Karol Langner talk contribs‎  4,018 bytes −2‎  cat update & fmt undothank

February 18: User Polyparadigm edits the grammar and flow of the article

June 5: User Polyparadigm adds the section about Gran Boundaries and the relevant information.

June 24: User Polyparadigm adds a photo of macroscopic crystallites

2006

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April 10: User Sietske adds a Footnotes section and an additional paragraph within the Grain Boundaries section.

December 7: User Lveldhui added additional information to the Grain Boundaries section and a table of contents.

2007

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February 26: User Inwind rewords the lead section.

March 10: User Nickels360 keeps deleting the entire page

March 31: User Beland adds an additional paragraph to the lead section.

2008

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February 8: Anonymous user adds a link to Grain boundary under the See Also section

October 7: User Wizard191 removes link to Grain boundary under the See Also section, links to the main article Grain boundary under the Grain boundary section, flags the section as appearing to contradict the main article, and suggests merging the entire article with the Grains article.

October 23: User Wizard191 removes suggestion to merge this article into the Grains article

2009

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November 3: User Thumperward puts much of the lead into a new section called Details.

2010

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August 3: User GianniG46 adds content to the first paragraph of the Details section.

August 12: User Wizard191 edits the first paragraph of the Details section.

2011

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No relevant edits.

2012

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No major edits.

2013

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User Anonimski added an image in the Details section.6pm

2014

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curprev 14:54, 21 December 2014‎ Rfassbind talk contribsm  11,890 bytes +1‎  caption of lead image - ce undothank

curprev 14:23, 21 December 2014‎ Vsmith talk contribsm  11,889 bytes −5‎  Reverted edits by 183.87.237.170 (talk) to last version by Rfassbind undothank

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curprev 23:16, 6 November 2014‎ Rfassbind talk contribsm  11,889 bytes −1‎  ty undothank

curprev 23:12, 6 November 2014‎ Rfassbind talk contribsm  11,890 bytes +226‎  lead - reference about context of crystallinity→physical properties, linked to Sufur, c/e on powder grains. undothank

curprev 22:04, 6 November 2014‎ Rfassbind talk contribsm  11,664 bytes −4‎  c/e undothank

curprev 21:21, 5 November 2014‎ Rfassbind talk contribsm  11,668 bytes −101‎  Joined lead's of merged articles. undothank

curprev 22:19, 27 October 2014‎ Rfassbind talk contribs‎  11,769 bytes −97‎  c/e (i) - revised postion and caption of images. Added (tb-revised) paragraph in lead, comparing polycrystalline to amorphous and (mono-) crystalline. undothank

curprev 15:06, 27 October 2014‎ Rfassbind talk contribs‎  11,866 bytes +2,390‎  MERGED content of article Polycrystal, that now redirects here. Added lead image File:Compilation of polycrystalline structures composed of crystallites.jpg. Merged text has not yet been copy-edited. undothank

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2015

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curprev 19:53, 14 October 2015‎ Comfr talk contribsm  12,243 bytes +27‎  add multi, because it redirects here undothank

curprev 15:52, 8 October 2015‎ RockMagnetist talk contribsm  12,216 bytes +18‎  →‎Grain boundaries: dated tag undothank

curprev 04:40, 8 October 2015‎ RockMagnetist talk contribs‎  12,198 bytes +243‎  →‎Details: expanded citation undothank

curprev 02:01, 7 August 2015‎ Rfassbind talk contribsm  11,955 bytes +57‎  →‎See also: added Microlite, ABC-order, added Template:Div col undothank

curprev 20:19, 2 July 2015‎ Rfassbind talk contribsm  11,898 bytes +22‎  lead - adding alias Polycrystals, WP:BOLDTITLE undothank

curprev 13:19, 2 July 2015‎ 195.115.170.59 talk‎  11,876 bytes −16‎  →‎Details: a grain is NOT a crystallite If someone abusively say so, he is probably in a sector where they have single crystal particles undo

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2016

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curprev 17:56, 2 November 2016‎ GeoWriter talk contribs‎  12,286 bytes +9‎  Introduction - move "crystallite" to start of paragraph and move "polycrystalline" to end of paragraph undothank

curprev 17:49, 2 November 2016‎ GeoWriter talk contribs‎  12,277 bytes +14‎  Introduction - changed "formed by cooling" to "formed, for example, by cooling" - from the description here, crystallites could be detrital, so not necessarily formed by cooling undothank

curprev 02:28, 30 May 2016‎ Renamed user mou89p43twvqcvm8ut9w3 talk contribs‎  12,263 bytes +15‎  →‎Grain boundaries: Replace sync template with contradicts other as per this TfD. using AWB undothank

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curprev 09:50, 4 January 2016‎ Rjwilmsi talk contribsm  12,247 bytes +3‎  Journal cites, added 1 PMID using AWB (11761) undothank

2017

curprev 17:20, 4 September 2017‎ Textdoc talk contribsm  12,417 bytes −7‎  undothank Tag: Visual edit

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curprev 21:40, 6 June 2017‎ 2001:569:79ad:ba00:c8:db27:1af7:870b talk‎  12,426 bytes 0‎  Fixed typo undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit canned edit summary

curprev 08:29, 1 March 2017‎ Materialscientist talk contribsm  12,426 bytes +832‎  Reverted 1 edit by 83.110.14.215 identified as test/vandalism using STiki undothank

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2018

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curprev 11:39, 20 December 2016‎ 2001:df0:2ed:7201:f548:7b2c:f48a:f0e0 talk‎  12,428 bytes +5‎  undo

2019

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2020

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curprev 14:37, 14 February 2020‎ Wipur talk contribsm  12,490 bytes −99‎  minor corrections undothank

Organizational History: Infotainment

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November 13, 14: User Cdnc creates the article and adds spelling corrections, links, and additional text

November 17, 25: User Cdang adds additional text

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