User:S0ulffle
Wikipedia Project: Phase One
[edit]Five Articles for Consideration
[edit]Reasons for Improvement
[edit]Article One: Betta
[edit]The article could do with more useful information, such as a more comprehensive section on the behaviors of the fish and the history of the breed, both wild and domestic species. It also seems a bit poorly organized, with somewhat misleading headings - "characteristics", for example, is very broad, and could potentially include many more subcategories rather than none. There are 16 references and only two external links.
Article Two: Lake Mineral Wells State Park & Trailway
[edit]One of the Wikipedia pages in the article doesn't exist yet. There are only three references for the whole article. In addition, I think that it is lacking in useful content, as it only contains a brief history of the park and a list of nearby attractions.
Article Three: Magnoliids
[edit]The article has two sections and only one external link. I think that the article could do with more useful content, including a complete list of all the species present in the group. There are several instances of "citation needed" where citations ostensibly go in the article. The focus of the article seems rather broad.
Article Four: 500 yen note
[edit]There are only five total references. There are only three citations in the article. I think that there could be more information within the article, as well as better organization - too much seems to be crammed into the introductory paragraph, and it could perhaps benefit from having a few more sections added.
Article Five: American fried rice
[edit]There are only three references on the article. In addition, it only has one section, the history of the dish. It could use some expansion. There are only three citations throughout the whole article, and a few instances of "citation needed".
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Organizational History: Crystallite
[edit]2003
[edit]November 13, 14: User Cdnc creates the article and adds spelling corrections, links, and additional text
November 17, 25: User Cdang adds additional text
2004
[edit]July 30: See Also section formatted
2005
[edit]10 November 2005 Karol Langner talk contribs 4,018 bytes −2 cat update & fmt undothank
February 18: User Polyparadigm edits the grammar and flow of the article
June 5: User Polyparadigm adds the section about Gran Boundaries and the relevant information.
June 24: User Polyparadigm adds a photo of macroscopic crystallites
2006
[edit]April 10: User Sietske adds a Footnotes section and an additional paragraph within the Grain Boundaries section.
December 7: User Lveldhui added additional information to the Grain Boundaries section and a table of contents.
2007
[edit]February 26: User Inwind rewords the lead section.
March 10: User Nickels360 keeps deleting the entire page
March 31: User Beland adds an additional paragraph to the lead section.
2008
[edit]February 8: Anonymous user adds a link to Grain boundary under the See Also section
October 7: User Wizard191 removes link to Grain boundary under the See Also section, links to the main article Grain boundary under the Grain boundary section, flags the section as appearing to contradict the main article, and suggests merging the entire article with the Grains article.
October 23: User Wizard191 removes suggestion to merge this article into the Grains article
2009
[edit]November 3: User Thumperward puts much of the lead into a new section called Details.
2010
[edit]August 3: User GianniG46 adds content to the first paragraph of the Details section.
August 12: User Wizard191 edits the first paragraph of the Details section.
2011
[edit]No relevant edits.
2012
[edit]No major edits.
2013
[edit]User Anonimski added an image in the Details section.6pm
2014
[edit]curprev 14:54, 21 December 2014 Rfassbind talk contribs m 11,890 bytes +1 caption of lead image - ce undothank
curprev 14:23, 21 December 2014 Vsmith talk contribs m 11,889 bytes −5 Reverted edits by 183.87.237.170 (talk) to last version by Rfassbind undothank
curprev 13:14, 21 December 2014 183.87.237.170 talk 11,894 bytes +5 undo
curprev 23:16, 6 November 2014 Rfassbind talk contribs m 11,889 bytes −1 ty undothank
curprev 23:12, 6 November 2014 Rfassbind talk contribs m 11,890 bytes +226 lead - reference about context of crystallinity→physical properties, linked to Sufur, c/e on powder grains. undothank
curprev 22:04, 6 November 2014 Rfassbind talk contribs m 11,664 bytes −4 c/e undothank
curprev 21:21, 5 November 2014 Rfassbind talk contribs m 11,668 bytes −101 Joined lead's of merged articles. undothank
curprev 22:19, 27 October 2014 Rfassbind talk contribs 11,769 bytes −97 c/e (i) - revised postion and caption of images. Added (tb-revised) paragraph in lead, comparing polycrystalline to amorphous and (mono-) crystalline. undothank
curprev 15:06, 27 October 2014 Rfassbind talk contribs 11,866 bytes +2,390 MERGED content of article Polycrystal, that now redirects here. Added lead image File:Compilation of polycrystalline structures composed of crystallites.jpg. Merged text has not yet been copy-edited. undothank
curprev 00:26, 26 October 2014 Blackbombchu talk contribs 9,476 bytes +5 undothank
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curprev 18:01, 11 September 2014 J6w5 talk contribs 9,383 bytes +115 →Details: -> mosaic crystal undothank
curprev 04:46, 6 August 2014 Lfstevens talk contribs 9,268 bytes −2 ce undothank
curprev 04:07, 23 June 2014 Bharu12 talk contribs 9,270 bytes −23 undothank Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
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curprev 05:19, 11 March 2014 Brotter121 talk contribs 9,126 bytes +28 →See also undothank
curprev 16:53, 18 February 2014 TopGun talk contribs 9,098 bytes +16 →Details undothank
2015
[edit]curprev 05:45, 17 December 2015 2620:cc:8000:198:9590:5cfb:1a18:3a5c talk 12,244 bytes −27 →See also undo
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curprev 19:53, 14 October 2015 Comfr talk contribs m 12,243 bytes +27 add multi, because it redirects here undothank
curprev 15:52, 8 October 2015 RockMagnetist talk contribs m 12,216 bytes +18 →Grain boundaries: dated tag undothank
curprev 04:40, 8 October 2015 RockMagnetist talk contribs 12,198 bytes +243 →Details: expanded citation undothank
curprev 02:01, 7 August 2015 Rfassbind talk contribs m 11,955 bytes +57 →See also: added Microlite, ABC-order, added Template:Div col undothank
curprev 20:19, 2 July 2015 Rfassbind talk contribs m 11,898 bytes +22 lead - adding alias Polycrystals, WP:BOLDTITLE undothank
curprev 13:19, 2 July 2015 195.115.170.59 talk 11,876 bytes −16 →Details: a grain is NOT a crystallite If someone abusively say so, he is probably in a sector where they have single crystal particles undo
curprev 20:41, 2 February 2015 Lythronaxargestes talk contribs 11,892 bytes −1 →Details undothank
curprev 20:30, 15 January 2015 Blackbombchu talk contribs 11,893 bytes +3 →See also undothank
2016
[edit]curprev 17:56, 2 November 2016 GeoWriter talk contribs 12,286 bytes +9 Introduction - move "crystallite" to start of paragraph and move "polycrystalline" to end of paragraph undothank
curprev 17:49, 2 November 2016 GeoWriter talk contribs 12,277 bytes +14 Introduction - changed "formed by cooling" to "formed, for example, by cooling" - from the description here, crystallites could be detrital, so not necessarily formed by cooling undothank
curprev 02:28, 30 May 2016 Renamed user mou89p43twvqcvm8ut9w3 talk contribs 12,263 bytes +15 →Grain boundaries: Replace sync template with contradicts other as per this TfD. using AWB undothank
curprev 04:20, 2 April 2016 Bytesock talk contribs 12,248 bytes +1 tidy undothank
curprev 09:50, 4 January 2016 Rjwilmsi talk contribs m 12,247 bytes +3 Journal cites, added 1 PMID using AWB (11761) undothank
2017
curprev 17:20, 4 September 2017 Textdoc talk contribs m 12,417 bytes −7 undothank Tag: Visual edit
curprev 04:14, 10 June 2017 Srich32977 talk contribs 12,424 bytes −2 ce undothank Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit
curprev 21:40, 6 June 2017 2001:569:79ad:ba00:c8:db27:1af7:870b talk 12,426 bytes 0 Fixed typo undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit canned edit summary
curprev 08:29, 1 March 2017 Materialscientist talk contribs m 12,426 bytes +832 Reverted 1 edit by 83.110.14.215 identified as test/vandalism using STiki undothank
curprev 04:30, 1 March 2017 83.110.14.215 talk 11,594 bytes −832 →Details undo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
curprev 23:56, 16 February 2017 Primefac talk contribs m 12,426 bytes 0 Reverted edits by Fmadd (talk) to last version by RockMagnetist undothank
curprev 10:34, 11 February 2017 Fmadd talk contribs 12,426 bytes 0 undothank
2018
curprev 17:47, 24 October 2018 Comfr talk contribs m 12,426 bytes +4 +link undothank
curprev 17:43, 24 October 2018 Comfr talk contribs m 12,422 bytes +1 , undothank
curprev 11:19, 3 September 2018 14.139.64.102 talk 12,421 bytes +4 →Details undo
curprev 22:53, 20 December 2016 RockMagnetist talk contribs 12,426 bytes −2 →See also: removed redundant links per WP:NOTSEEALSO and added new one undothank
curprev 11:39, 20 December 2016 2001:df0:2ed:7201:f548:7b2c:f48a:f0e0 talk 12,428 bytes +5 undo
2019
[edit]No relvant edits.
2020
[edit]curprev 17:42, 21 April 2020 Nemo bis talk contribs 12,359 bytes −131 +DOI | Add: pages, issue, volume, journal, year, title, author pars. 1-10. Formatted dashes. | You can use this tool yourself. Report bugs here. | via #UCB_Gadget undothank
curprev 14:37, 14 February 2020 Wipur talk contribs m 12,490 bytes −99 minor corrections undothank
Organizational History: Infotainment
[edit]2003
November 13, 14: User Cdnc creates the article and adds spelling corrections, links, and additional text
November 17, 25: User Cdang adds additional text
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