Template talk:Did you know nominations/Killing of Nathan Heidelberg
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[edit]- ... that a Texas man who shot and killed a police officer on his front porch was acquitted of murder? [2023-03-12 at 15:49:13, by Bruxton]
- ... that a malfunctioning burglar alarm may have led to the fatal shooting of a police officer in Midland, Texas? [2023-03-12 at 15:50:45, by Bruxton]
GalliumBot (talk • contribs) (he/it) 16:25, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
- Accepted by Storye book, because both are true, clear, and interesting. Storye book (talk) 16:33, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
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[edit]- ... that a Texas man who shot and killed a police officer on his front porch was acquitted of murder? [2023-03-14 at 21:30:24, by Bruxton]
- ... that a Texas man who shot and killed a police officer on his front porch was acquitted of murder? [2023-03-15 at 00:21:37, by Ravenpuff]
GalliumBot (talk • contribs) (he/it) 00:25, 15 March 2023 (UTC)
- I accept this change, because both options are true, but I would have preferred the original promoted hook. Storye book (talk) 11:41, 15 March 2023 (UTC)
- I accept this as well. I, too, preferred the original hook but this will get the point of the article across and get views. Daniel Case (talk) 18:22, 15 March 2023 (UTC)
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[edit]- ... that a Texas man who fatally shot a police officer on his front porch was acquitted of murder? [2023-03-19 at 00:39:42, by BorgQueen]
- ... that a Texas man who, on his front porch, fatally shot a police officer was acquitted of murder? [2023-03-19 at 00:44:36, by BorgQueen]
GalliumBot (talk • contribs) (he/it) 01:25, 19 March 2023 (UTC)