Template:Did you know nominations/Time to Get Tough

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:35, 16 July 2017 (UTC)

Time to Get Tough

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~~... that the book Time to Get Tough by Donald Trump writes favorably of Russian leader Vladimir Putin?~~ Source: Diamond, Jeremy (July 29, 2016), "Timeline: Donald Trump's praise for Vladimir Putin", CNN. Quote: "December 2011: Trump praised Putin's 'intelligence' and 'no-nonsense way' in his book 'Time to Get Tough.'"
- ALT1:... that the book Time to Get Tough by Donald Trump was written with the assistance of editors from Breitbart News? Source: Gertz, Matt (April 24, 2017), "Breitbart is not independent: It’s the communications arm of the Mercers’ empire", Salon. "the role that two Breitbart editors played in its production."

Reviewed: Charles T. Pepper
Comment: Created 17 June 2017. Article is over 10,000 characters. Feel free to use the picture, or not, either way, up to discretion of promoter of the hook.

Created by Sagecandor (talk). Self-nominated at 14:41, 17 June 2017 (UTC).

Review New enough, long enough, neytrally written, timely nominated. Earwig is more or less clear. I think there is an overabundance of the use of quotes from reviews, and that they should be trimmed. First hook is boring, even though it is supported by cited source. The picture adds nothing to the hook. ALT1 is neutral, informative and supported by by cited WP:RS. No claim of a WP:QPQ, and that has to be taken care of. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 16:53, 17 June 2017 (UTC)

Comment QPQ confirmed. Not yet promoted. Not a requirement. Other issues need to be addressed, however. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 16:58, 17 June 2017 (UTC)

Greatly cut down on Reception quotes. Removed the picture. Reviewed a QPQ. You can please use ALT1 hook. Can you have another look? Sagecandor (talk) 17:41, 17 June 2017 (UTC)

Review GTG. Nicely done! You can ping me by typing {{User:7&6=thirteen}} 7&6=thirteen (☎) 19:22, 17 June 2017 (UTC)