Template:Did you know nominations/The Troelfth Cake
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:00, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
The Troelfth Cake
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... that the French satirical drawing of the First Partition of Poland, The Troelfth Cake, caused much controversy in late-18th-century Europe?
- Reviewed: Bob Beckwith
- Comment:
Created/expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 21:37, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
- Length, history, sourcing all good. Maury Markowitz (talk) 11:44, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
I don't know if the above was supposed to be a review. My version: date, length referencing fine, detailed Polish sources AGF, no apparent copyvio/pl. I am not happy with the hook which is very general and doesn't appear like that in the article. Suggestions to think about:
- ALT1: ... that the 1773 French satirical drawing of the First Partition of Poland, The Troelfth Cake (pictured), was banned in several European countries?
- ALT2:
... that the 1773 French satirical drawing of the First Partition of Poland, The Troelfth Cake (pictured), likely was intended to be The Twelfth Cake in English?--Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:35, 16 September 2011 (UTC)- I like ALT1, specific but in keeping with the original. sonia♫ 14:28, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
- I am ok with ALT1. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 16:49, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
--Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:15, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
- I am ok with ALT1. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk to me 16:49, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
- I like ALT1, specific but in keeping with the original. sonia♫ 14:28, 16 September 2011 (UTC)
