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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Orlady (talk) 03:10, 19 December 2011 (UTC)

Théâtre de la Mode

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Théâtre de la Mode exhibit of doll-like mannequins wearing 1946 French couture clothing and accessories.

  • ... that seamstresses carried sewing machines from neighbourhood to neighbourhood to complete work on the Théâtre de la Mode during Paris's post-War electricity shortages?

Created/expanded by OttawaAC (talk). Self nom at 02:45, 27 November 2011 (UTC)

Everything looks good to go. --TIAYN (talk) 10:42, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing concerns. Examples: "demanding that top French fashion personnel be sent to Germany to establish a dressmaking school there" vs "demanded that high-level French personnel be sent to start a dressmaking school in Germany" and "Seamstresses carried their sewing machines from neighbourhood to neighbourhood" vs "seamstresses carried their sewing machines from neighborhood to neighborhood". I also note problems with sourcing - for instance, the first example I give above is cited to page 46, but should be page 45. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:36, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

  • Issues unaddressed after nearly 2 weeks. Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:57, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
But user hasn't been active since 28 November -- before the issues were raised. --Orlady (talk) 05:32, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
  • S/he has also had numerous warnings about close paraphrasing (remember the tea culture articles?) If you think it is better to hold onto it for now, I guess that is okay. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:27, 16 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Begun on this one, but I need to get to sleep now. If no-one continues overnight I will continue tomorrow. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:24, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
  • I substituted a cropped version of the image. --Orlady (talk) 19:47, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
I think the article is in reasonably good shape now. However, I suggest a completely different hook:
  • ALT1: that the Théâtre de la Mode is an exhibit of small-scale fashion mannequins (examples pictured) crafted by Paris fashion designers to help revive the French fashion industry after World War II? --Orlady (talk) 21:07, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
  • yes on the cropped image, yes on the newer hook. I reckon we've distanced the wording into ok territory. Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:37, 19 December 2011 (UTC)