Template:Did you know nominations/Nellie Gubler

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The result was: promoted by North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 07:57, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Nellie Gubler

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... that the Swiss embassy gave Nellie Gubler an award for her research on Swiss immigrants in Utah?

Reviewed: Operation Phou Phiang II

Created by Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk). Self-nominated at 16:34, 7 April 2016 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited: - n
Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: - @Rachel Helps (BYU): - Article is barely long enough but is over the limit by 65 words. The source is after the Dixie College statement, not the Swiss embassy, hook facts need to have a source directly with it. the newspapers.com source needs to indicate that it's "subscription needed". I would say that it needs a little copy editing to be "well written", so I did a few updates to it, hope you don't mind.

I don't mind at all, thanks for catching that. The source for the Swiss embassy statement is the same history book, so I added another in-line citation to that sentence. It's a pretty obscure book--would you like me to upload a picture of the relevant information? I also added icons to the newspapers.com links. Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 16:04, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

works for me. Good To go. MPJ-US 17:11, 28 April 2016 (UTC)