Template:Did you know nominations/Living in the Material World (song)

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 19:32, 26 March 2012 (UTC)

Living in the Material World (song)

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... that George Harrison's 1973 solo song "Living in the Material World" includes all his former Beatles bandmates Paul McCartney, John Lennon and Ringo Starr?

Reviewed: Elysia diomedea

Created/expanded by Rlendog (talk). Self nom at 03:14, 11 March 2012 (UTC)

Article is good and cited, hook is cited. However, I don't think "includes" is the word you're looking for. Mentions, maybe. The word "includes" led me to think that they played on the track. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 08:19, 20 March 2012 (UTC)

I think "includes" is technically correct, since all the Beatles are included in the lyrics, which are part of the song. "Mentions" would also be accurate, but I think "includes" is more "hooky" per H7, i.e., more likely to draw people in. That said, although I think "includes" is preferable, I don't have a strong objection to changing to "mentions" if that is deemed more appropriate. Rlendog (talk) 18:32, 21 March 2012 (UTC)

Okay, then. Good to go. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 13:54, 26 March 2012 (UTC)