Template:Did you know nominations/Kitty Shiva Rao
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 05:36, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
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Kitty Shiva Rao
- ... that Kitty Shiva Rao was the head of a committee to find out what Indian women wanted from their government? Source: a committee was appointed to establish under Kitty Shiva Rao to define the expectations of women in the forthcoming constitutional changes, which would serve as the new policy guidelines for the government.[1]
- Reviewed: Mac Studio
- Comment: Still needs much work.
Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 19:02, 20 March 2022 (UTC).
Article is new enough and long enough. It is written in neutral language, cites sources with inline citations and is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism as far as I can say. QPQ done. The hook is somewhat interesting but my concern is that it does not appear as is in the text and is not very accurate. Yes, the source does mention that the constitution would "serve as the new policy guidelines for the government", but I think the emphasis should still be on the constitution itself. Why not simply end with "... what Indian women expected from the new Constitution of India"? --Muhandes (talk) 16:36, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Kitty Shiva Rao was the head of a committee to find out what Indian women wanted from the new Constitution of India"? (we should add the year she was appointed if we can find it) Philafrenzy (talk) 17:11, 22 March 2022 (UTC)
