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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:19, 14 July 2012 (UTC)

Hameen Ali

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  • ... that Hameen Ali received the Disney Sports Spirit Award, awarded annually to "college football's most inspirational athlete, who displays a sense of courage and an undying love for the game, while overcoming adversity on or off the field?"

Created/expanded by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 14:27, 29 June 2012 (UTC)

Hook is too long (well over 200 characters - and remember spaces must be counted). Otherwise good to go: New enough, long enough, within policy, and hook is verifiable. I think you can fix this easily by shortening the hook. -- Presearch (talk) 10:55, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
One possible alternative hook might be ALT 1: ... that Hameen Ali received the Disney Sports Spirit Award, awarded annually to "college football's most inspirational athlete... while overcoming adversity"?
--Presearch (talk) 11:01, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
I'm good with Alt1. Jrcla2 (talk) 16:31, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
ALT1 is problematic in terms of being a smooth sentence. I suggest drastically shortening the quote and doing some rearrangement:
Good to go with ALT2. Aymatth2 (talk) 15:44, 13 July 2012 (UTC)