Template:Did you know nominations/Emily McInerny
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:55, 15 October 2012 (UTC)
Emily McInerny
[edit]... that in the Australian Women's National Basketball League, Emily McInerny was awarded the Robyn Maher Defensive Player of the Year at total of nine times, but was not selected to play for the Opals at 3 Olympic Games?
Created by User:Spy007au (talk). Nominated by Spy007au (talk) at 08:17, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
Hook is 217 characters. Shorten. New article. 1650KB prose. Referenced. Please replace the nickname Opals with the formal "Australia women's national basketball team" in the article.--Redtigerxyz Talk 17:33, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
- ... that despite being awarded the Australian WNBL Defensive Player of the Year at total of nine times, Emily McInerny was not selected to play for the Opals at 3 Olympic Games?
ALT is good. --Redtigerxyz Talk 05:52, 6 October 2012 (UTC)
- Can we please make the hook tighter, and replace "Opals" as originally requested? (Also changing "3" to "three" per WP:NUMERAL.) Suggest the following:
- ALT2: ... that despite being a nine-time Australian WNBL Defensive Player of the Year, Emily McInerny was not selected to play for the national team at three Olympic Games? —BlueMoonset (talk) 06:25, 6 October 2012 (UTC)
- Can we please make the hook tighter, and replace "Opals" as originally requested? (Also changing "3" to "three" per WP:NUMERAL.) Suggest the following:
- Reviewed: Indigo Lake (Ohio)
Review done. Tick based on previous review. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:27, 14 October 2012 (UTC)
